Waiting to die Waiting to die

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Waiting to die Waiting to die
As watch the clock tick by
How long will it take
Iam beginning to feel like a brick
Cant take any more of this
I like this self induced abyss
Noting to see, Nothng to hear
I wont ever shed a sincere tear
Wallowing in a mysterious self pity
Much worse then an ol hippy
Waiting to die waiting to die
Thankfully time is flying by
When will it all end
Just waiting for that God send
 
its kwl.. but why jus wait 2 die... its lyk sum1 fed up of lyf which aint so kwl.. lol
but yeh overall was good
 
Wallowing in a mysterious self pity
Much worse then an ol hippy


^ i just really really dont like that part

ruins the whole rhyme for me
 
:salamext:

I just liked this bit...

How long will it take
Iam beginning to feel like a brick
Cant take any more of this
I like this self induced abyss
Noting to see, Nothng to hear
 

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