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As some people might know Year 10 have to do work experience. But problem is I don't know how to start of the letter. I want to work at a school. will someone please give me an example?
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To whom it may concern,
I am writing to inform you that i am interested in your workplace...etc
I am writing to inform you that i am interested in your workplace...etc
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Salamualikum.
Well it's just smiller to writing a C.V
Main points to include:
1) Why you want to work there
2) What will you provide them
3) Detail about your self
4) How you found out about the placement you want to work in.
Don't worry about it...
Just start of by saying something like this.
Dear ...... (Headteachers name),
I am writing to know if there is any work experience placements which be held ...........
I will be very happy to work in ... (whatever school) because i have the .......
I would be delightful to work with young pupils......
Somethign like that
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Well it's just smiller to writing a C.V
Main points to include:
1) Why you want to work there
2) What will you provide them
3) Detail about your self
4) How you found out about the placement you want to work in.
Don't worry about it...
Just start of by saying something like this.
Dear ...... (Headteachers name),
I am writing to know if there is any work experience placements which be held ...........
I will be very happy to work in ... (whatever school) because i have the .......
I would be delightful to work with young pupils......
Somethign like that
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^yeh thats good advice, and make sure you come accross as being really really keen, and cheery....
back in my day, we had to the place in person and ask the face to face...
lol, "my day" was only a couple of years ago
back in my day, we had to the place in person and ask the face to face...
lol, "my day" was only a couple of years ago
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yup thats what i did a few weeks ago
Sis baby_muslimah..if your allowed i would suggest that you do the same (ask face to face) because although it seems kinda scary it shows that you have confidence :shade:
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^ Masha'Allah so where you workin bro?
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Salamualikum.
Main point REMEMBER to know the layout of the letter.
Write your address on top first in left hand corner then
The user's address on left hand corner.
Leave one line out and write date like in full along with 2007.
Then leave one line and write 'Dear....' and after the name do a comma.
Always keep your letter in good shape and neat.
Remember to end with 'yours sincerely' and then leave 5 spaces for hand written signiture.
You can always do it on Computer.
Maybe you want to look at some examples to help you out.
http://www.careers.unsw.edu.au/careerEd/jobApplications/coverLetters/samples/sample6.aspx
Ma'assalama
Main point REMEMBER to know the layout of the letter.
Write your address on top first in left hand corner then
The user's address on left hand corner.
Leave one line out and write date like in full along with 2007.
Then leave one line and write 'Dear....' and after the name do a comma.
Always keep your letter in good shape and neat.
Remember to end with 'yours sincerely' and then leave 5 spaces for hand written signiture.
You can always do it on Computer.
Maybe you want to look at some examples to help you out.
http://www.careers.unsw.edu.au/careerEd/jobApplications/coverLetters/samples/sample6.aspx
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^lol, is that 1 jus out of town, coz, if it is, we can meet on our breaks some time....
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^dosnt work ^o)
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you have to write your essay, then give it to an editor to make it chic for a fee!
if you have no thoughts whatsoever on what you want, you can work with an editor putting some ideas down and then they'll fix it for you -- you can see examples of before and after to get an idea of how they work.. I have seen their work, it is really awesome.. my sister just re-did her resume and cover letter with them.. it is an excellent site, all their editors are professionals from Harvard.. You might want to call them and inquire about their services before you jump in head first?
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oh my God she is ten yrs old? never mind then ;D.. I thought you were a professional applying for a job-- I am so sorry sis... will try to help you out here a bit myself later.. after I break my fast :lol: so I can think more sanely
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^lol, i meant the link...the link isnt working, dunno how Kittygyal accessed the page
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oh my God she is ten yrs old? never mind then ;D.. I thought you were a professional applying for a job-- I am so sorry sis... will try to help you out here a bit myself later.. after I break my fast :lol: so I can think more sanely
lol, shes in yr 10
means she will be 14/15...
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oh my God she is ten yrs old? never mind then ;D.. I thought you were a professional applying for a job-- I am so sorry sis... will try to help you out here a bit myself later.. after I break my fast :lol: so I can think more sanely
;D :giggling: :heated:
Not 10years old but in grade 10, she approx around 13-14 years old :hmm:
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