yo howd u find yo rhyyme?

[truemuslim]

salam...


lets go all ata time
each bring up ur line

tell us how u found
ur tru poet sound

was it from random ?
was by u done?

jus make sho yo rhymes make sense
unlike mine, i always use wrong tense
wrong times, i use past tense
right times, dont use common sense

betcha didnt get notin i said
and i kno bout three times you've re-read
i've prolly killed ya, or mayb jus brain dead
don worry tho i'll get a translatin did (done.)

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translation: hmmmm....tell me how u found ur rhymes.... IN RHYMES...but make sure it makes sense, unlike mine, coz my grammar i mess it up, (yes it is possible for me to make it perfect but i think thats gay to do so :exhausted )
Begin! oh yeh nd also say wat ur opinion wit poetry is or something...
here's mineee

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now since i own (this thread )
i go first
my rhymes you wanna loan
to quench yo thirst
i use hood tone
so it aint gon burst

i learned poetry from da songs
nas, the game, nd all the wrongs

i never liked poetry
but music was my lyf
ffreestyle tho, was up G
i'd cut u like a knife
i'll take the time out of me
to see u take a dive
but only fo tru talent i see
not nobody outside

i see ur poetry as boring
thats what i been storing
but only coz im snoring
from my very own soaring

:?

u gotta write right
screw gammar, it too tight
u think u jus "might"
but i say jus take the bite

i dont like poetry so ima thro sum lines
this freestyle ganity, so ima thro my rhymes

in other words,... ima bout ot freeestyle my worste freestyle possible

yo its been a long time
since a nikka thro a real line
so bruva take yo time
while i hit the state line

dont tkae yo time coz that aint talent
step off the line, you'll keep yo balance

made before rhymes, are all corny
the real lines are the new borny ?)
go back now or you'll get cought in my stormy
only tru talent here so back up homie
you all talkin like shakey wit romie (shakespear wit homo nd dumiet)
i heard that one coz fitty already told me
so i say those rhymes are the new corny
plummy
apricotty
appley
orangey
bananay
lettucy
or the legacy
of the one nd only great...
broccoli

mg: :?

so getta life
get a wife (or husband )
get yo strife
then come back, to the knife
nd take yo, one last try

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Truemuslim
only tru talent here

ook am out then.........


wassalaaaaaaaam

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

so you want us to say in rhymes what made us wanna rhyme or what makes us rhyme the way we rhyme?

 

[truemuslim]

...yep pretty much. ya kno how u started rhyming. nd why u lyk rhyming. etc.


in rhymes.

nd if u could freestyle it like mine ...would be better

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i guess i liked the vocal beat
liked the way it builds up heat
use 2 b in2 the haram bak in the dayz
astagfirullah but them were my wayz
but then i saw talented bro's
usin their rhymes to send Allah praise
so i tried a few
liked it more then i knew
so never stopped rhyming
and i probably never will

 

[Cabdullahi]

it was in the nineties awhile ago back in the days
juvenile, i had bad ways
boombox,always blasting illmatic
to me it was a new language, something idiomatic
the love for it was static
till someone told me otherwise,i was alil skeptic
until i had realised that its toxic
you try to runaway but cant getaway
'STAY'! thats the words it said to me,
plz not me...
but it had to be-
i foolishly stayed
it was late i already had my heart decayed
i got entrapped,me and couple of lifeless fella's in the corners we rapped
those that pass by us they clapped
sick flow..my class got higher,kid is sick classy now!
watching egoistic artists,i have the same ego now
i had to see the big picture with an eye of an eagle to make that vow
Today i truly stopped,forget this lewdness:enough!::enough!:
im a muslim and what the(kuffars) enjoy is not my business:coolious:

 

[Cabdullahi]

rap with proper grammar
is a hammer or cobra like
lyrical strike
mentally bamboozling the jostled
baffled to the core crippled
right grammar is a decor to lyrics and a must when battled
so..go buy a book from the bookstore and avoided being frazzled

 

[truemuslim]

lol junior ur rhymes are amazing, well at least the first one was.... plus it sounded like u was in jail nd was rappin wit yo jail mates nd thats how u found it kwll

nd bro ibnabdulhakim that was awesome rhymes. wassit ur freestyle ? (jw)

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

^ yeh made it on the spot is why it suked

 

[truemuslim]

noway i like it much better than all that other crap u do before seriously
freestylin issss talent.

 

[Cabdullahi]

Thanks sister true

 

[truemuslim]

anp

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

noway i like it much better than all that other crap u do before seriously
freestylin issss talent.

but i freestyled loads in the rhymes thread, im guessin you aint read the first few pages of the thread.



meh i guess u gnna grow out of that taste at some point ;D

 

[Na7lah]

em i found out that i can rhyme a few years back
when i saw that back rhymed with umm black lol

no i'v been writing poems since i was 10

 

[Cabdullahi]

ayyo **** the media
the causers of hysteria
peripheral feelings of nausea
brittle willed pre conditioned public
journalists suffering from sensationalism screaming as if spastic-
'do u see em??? look for any guy with a beard he's the culprit'!
the rhetorical use of bin laden
stressful for muslims the situation has been hardened
as a courteous pardon all we get is a mental arson
half barrage half espionage
a phone tap
crap! ..its like a kick in the kneecap
back from work
whats on tv, ..huh the busted jihadist network
great!! ...the daily news on bobble head recap


just a crappy freestyle,im sorry about the politics and stuff .i find it that it goes well with freestyle like butter and jam