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aamirsaab
04-19-2005, 11:31 AM
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How can we live in a society that is built upon lies?
Treachery and deceit- Surely we must be insane
We constantly kill each other- not realising the pain.

We claim to help the poor, help feed them
Indeed this is true; we feed them to the soil
After having destroyed them and their beliefs

We claim to have the best technology-
but after 2000 years still we cannot save lives
Rockets, nukes. It don’t matter no more
So much destruction - it is a bore

A nightmare we live in.
A continuous dream
One that we will never awake from
One that is unseen

You see, this piece is not about just you or just me
It is about every one - from the CIA to the police
But maybe I have gone a bit too far-maybe I have crossed the line
For I have mentioned the one word which has no place in this rhyme

You are all the same - and will never awake.
But I-I am different. For I have done the impossible - awoken from my dream.
I have done the impossible - I have seen the unseen.

By me
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Sahabiyaat
05-04-2005, 11:24 AM
:awesome:

excelllento :D
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Mr. Baldy
05-04-2005, 05:28 PM
aslaam alykum,

very good, i liked that... infact im'a have to borrow that.......... if that is ok?

wa alykum aslaam
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aamirsaab
05-04-2005, 05:44 PM
Originally Posted by Mr. Baldy
aslaam alykum,

very good, i liked that... infact im'a have to borrow that.......... if that is ok?

wa alykum aslaam
as long as you say it was written by aamirsaab - i dont want people stealing my stuff and not givingme credit for it.
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Mr. Baldy
05-04-2005, 05:46 PM
yeah sure dont worry yaar^^^ kya shyri
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h1jabi_sista
05-04-2005, 06:04 PM
:sl: !
mashallah!!!! thats very good!

we have soo many poets in here mashallah,

WILLIAM SHAKESPEAR! BEWARE! :p
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Far7an
05-04-2005, 06:39 PM
Originally Posted by aamirsaab
as long as you say it was written by aamirsaab - i dont want people stealing my stuff and not givingme credit for it.
MashaAllah may Allah give you the credit you deserve in this world and more importantly in the akhira, for helping your brother. :)
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Ra`eesah
05-28-2005, 09:11 AM
Assalamu'Alaykum

SUbhanallah that was very nice Mashallah... and inshallah dont expect anything from ppl Allah will give u all the credit u need inshallah...~ameen~
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aamirsaab
06-03-2005, 11:03 PM
You may understand my POLITICAL posts better after having read this poem.
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Shadow
11-07-2005, 01:55 AM
nice poem brother
:)
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Protected_Diamond
11-11-2005, 03:12 PM
:sl: warhmatulahi wabarakathu

I like that very much especially the last line, beautiful!

:w: warhmatulahi wabarakathu
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