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How can we live in a society that is built upon lies?
Treachery and deceit- Surely we must be insane
We constantly kill each other- not realising the pain.

We claim to help the poor, help feed them
Indeed this is true; we feed them to the soil
After having destroyed them and their beliefs

We claim to have the best technology-
but after 2000 years still we cannot save lives
Rockets, nukes. It don’t matter no more
So much destruction - it is a bore

A nightmare we live in.
A continuous dream
One that we will never awake from
One that is unseen

You see, this piece is not about just you or just me
It is about every one - from the CIA to the police
But maybe I have gone a bit too far-maybe I have crossed the line
For I have mentioned the one word which has no place in this rhyme

You are all the same - and will never awake.
But I-I am different. For I have done the impossible - awoken from my dream.
I have done the impossible - I have seen the unseen.

By me
 
aslaam alykum,

very good, i liked that... infact im'a have to borrow that.......... if that is ok?

wa alykum aslaam
 
Mr. Baldy said:
aslaam alykum,

very good, i liked that... infact im'a have to borrow that.......... if that is ok?

wa alykum aslaam
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as long as you say it was written by aamirsaab - i dont want people stealing my stuff and not givingme credit for it.
 
aamirsaab said:
as long as you say it was written by aamirsaab - i dont want people stealing my stuff and not givingme credit for it.
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MashaAllah may Allah give you the credit you deserve in this world and more importantly in the akhira, for helping your brother. :)
 
Assalamu'Alaykum

SUbhanallah that was very nice Mashallah... and inshallah dont expect anything from ppl Allah will give u all the credit u need inshallah...~ameen~
 
You may understand my POLITICAL posts better after having read this poem.
 

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