Wow Bro ibnabdulhakim !! yo have to feel honoured now lol
naah not bad
inside truemuslim :P EXCLUSIVE!!!!!
hmm, who am i really?
i dunno, so u tell me
ima tell ya wat i kno
and we can give it a go
ima 15 year useless slave
i work for allah for the faith he gave
nd no i dont live in a cave ()
but yeh, 4 bedrooms, workin jus fine yo
me nd my homies, i always got the time fo
then i found a word n started the rhymes
later on i had 10 lines
my bro saw it nd said "dis lyk mines"
i got so happy coz he the best
he like nas, tupac nd all the rest
his rhymes reach the sky coz they so high
yeh im bein honest here, ther aint no lie
non u can beat him vs in the rhymes
compared to his urs aint worth dimes (...sorry..bein honest)
i was interested in poetry coz the music
but now i quit music nd gota quit the new sick (poetry)
i really just hate it
i think i mean it
ima be thru it
dont need ur help to do it
i think u need to loose it
'nuff said bout the po-et
'nuff said bout the tal-et (talennt!)
coz ima get right thru it
and that u knew it
i think poetry is long gon
poetry aint strong
u can say that im wrong
but ima keep goin on
but thats jus one opinion
theres still above the million
each on a golden stallion
so lets se wat all up n' in
____________________________-
hmm...
not meant fo offence when i said ur rhymes aint worth dimes compared to his, i were jus bein honest he like the big dude who if u get a compliment from him u should feel honooorrred! its like tupac complimenting soulja boys rap
he did se one of ibnabdulhakims rhymes once tho, nd said "dam thes are not bad"
which means u shud feel......honored
ur so lucky
Wow Bro ibnabdulhakim !! yo have to feel honoured now lol
naah not bad
^ are they decent poems sis lol? your bros ones i mean
post some on LI if they halaal
lol noway, half the words gonna be censorednd the other half will be bout him nd if the hood was a battlefield , he'd earn all the stripes , him bein a pharoah :rolleyes: etc...nothin useful
its jus sickkkk rhymes...
her e i some clean ones tho. ppl died over this one, nd this one isnt even the best
An old wizard in dirty clothes and a tall beard,
Says the first prince in 300 years is near.
He will reclaim the crown so make sure its clear.
Its time for me to go but hold my words dear,
Inside your hearts, the war is about to start.
He goes outside the door before he disappears.
The people in the room cant believe their ears,
The bartender almost spills the beer.
A grown man tells his son now,
Take this horse and ride to town,
Make sure the word is heard for miles around.
Prince _last name_ is back to reclaim the crown……
people literally died over this one........
A destroyed man, layin in the sand.
Traveled a long way, his destination was The Land.
But got caught in the crowds of screamin fans,
The world the better of him.
Meanwhile the king of the land, chillin with his mans,
And them. Mistreated many, so many people mad at them.
Made up for it, whenever they could, they treated em good.
A very mystical man, it was understood.
This nigga was the ruler of his hood.
The worlds quiet, you can hear the message when its silent,
In the middle of the night, when the earth and planets align.
Line it up with a distant planet.
An evil man created a bomb just to plant it.
A tank so advanced, nobody able to man it.
We given many warnings, listen close you'll understand it.
Men scarred from fallin too many times in the granite.
Human nature, we take everything for granted.
Where do we go when we pass?
Judgement for the sins, every stash, every thought of ass.
Every memory, future or past.
You can't change the future, the future changes you.
Your life is ahead of you, do with it what you do
yet still not the best ones!
he has a blog with them
pretty good
^ lol now compare ours.
yours are funnier lol
the first one was good i found it hard to make out what the second one is saying to b honest
but still.. the first ones just shouting out..
MIND OUT!! IM THE DON AN IM COMIN
his styles really good though
:rolleyes: right right
my brother deserves a whole forum for his rhymes
i jus found a million of them on his myspace nd he does got clean ones
he calls him self "pharoah zack" nd when he becomes a rapper he is known as "pharoah zack" lol
LOL how do u not understand what he said in the second??format_quote Originally Posted by IbnAbdulHakim
the first one was good i found it hard to make out what the second one is saying to b honest
but still.. the first ones just shouting out..
MIND OUT!! IM THE DON AN IM COMIN
his styles really good though
i should sho him ur post, nd he'll sort u out (not really) unfortunoutly he's half way around the world..........
ohhh he's online right now
^ dont u find dat scary tho,
that he wants to call himself pharoah :|
i dnno i use to be all into those typsa "im a big bad man don chek me im gnna b shootin niggahs" lyrics when i was 15 but it kinda gets immature innit?
lol he's not 15, i am, he's 18, nd his rhymes aint all bout pharoah, thats jus his "name"
lol okformat_quote Originally Posted by truemuslimlol he's not 15, i am, he's 18, nd his rhymes aint all bout pharoah, thats jus his "name"
lets see
here i am, back again,
bout to kill da track again,
still got the Mack 10,
still got the black Benz,
with the fat rims, and the tints.
I buried my foes in Lake Erie,
no conspiracy theory,
but they destroyed those near me.
An older man's suffering,
i never really wanted it.
Without remorse, im gunnin em.
U think cuz i smile and joke now u know?
The hatred fills me,
i wish it would kill me.
Im twitchin like i got a seizure,
im livin hell on earth thats why i need you.
I see things like the sixth sense,
and try to make sense,
but it seems i'll never win,
Im facing ignorance,
and thats dominant to the end.
But look at me now,
now that im grown,
look what i own,
an upstate home,
and an iphone.
Streets littered with bones,
this isnt all of it, the rest is a bit..."**" ish so i rather not post it here
moore...
In school we used to fake fights,
I stayed awake nights.
I saw lights, flashin in the distance.
What do I see in my future for instance.
Trapped in our own thoughts,
A battle is won even before its fought.
Drama that they wanted so it was drama that I brought.
When we was kids, writing on sidewalks with chalk,
Till we was big, buy a new car and never leavin it stock.
[deleted bad parts]
My niggaz carry biscuits like Ritz,
We catch the snitch like Quidditch
And make him beg for death before we finish.
We didn't say it unless we meant it, get it.
Take my money from me nigga forget it.
Now we was young and we was dumb,
But we still had fun.
I remember my first gun.
I was only ten.
I came across many jealous men.
And many enemies.
Many wanna bury me, and many girls mad at me.
Many people doubted me,
Surrendered foes shoutin please,
While getting knockin out on their knees,
And getting killed in their sleep.
When u chillin with me, getting the work cheap,
Ridin like 50 deep, when its rainy.
You know me, I put you to sleep like rabies.
[deleted bad parts]
hmm...since he's online i should ask him if he could make something islamic in 5 minutes, lol he did once, its gone now
the first one was not soo bad but the second one , no comment...:X
yeah ask him , im interested what he would write
his got talent... i can see that
but so far im not respecting a single poem
i bet you hate me now :|
lol no i dont hate u now
i agree
he writes some deep stuf bout life nd death, nd like respect to muslims nd bout terrorists nd how we aint them, nd all, but i think he took em off his blog coz i cant find em!! i think theyr buried inside the haram
lol guven no i can ask him for real i was messin, he would ask me how i kno his myspace :X i dont even got an account on it.
omdaysthese r sik!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!format_quote Originally Posted by truemuslimhere i am, back again,
bout to kill da track again,
still got the mack 10,
still got the black benz,
with the fat rims, and the tints.
I buried my foes in lake erie,
no conspiracy theory,
but they destroyed those near me.
An older man's suffering,
i never really wanted it.
Without remorse, im gunnin em.
U think cuz i smile and joke now u know?
The hatred fills me,
i wish it would kill me.
Im twitchin like i got a seizure,
im livin hell on earth thats why i need you.
I see things like the sixth sense,
and try to make sense,
but it seems i'll never win,
im facing ignorance,
and thats dominant to the end.
But look at me now,
now that im grown,
look what i own,
an upstate home,
and an iphone.
Streets littered with bones,
this isnt all of it, the rest is a bit..."**" ish so i rather not post it here
moore...
in school we used to fake fights,
i stayed awake nights.
I saw lights, flashin in the distance.
What do i see in my future for instance.
Trapped in our own thoughts,
a battle is won even before its fought.
Drama that they wanted so it was drama that i brought.
When we was kids, writing on sidewalks with chalk,
till we was big, buy a new car and never leavin it stock.
[deleted bad parts]
my niggaz carry biscuits like ritz,
we catch the snitch like quidditch
and make him beg for death before we finish.
We didn't say it unless we meant it, get it.
Take my money from me nigga forget it.
Now we was young and we was dumb,
but we still had fun.
I remember my first gun.
I was only ten.
I came across many jealous men.
And many enemies.
Many wanna bury me, and many girls mad at me.
Many people doubted me,
surrendered foes shoutin please,
while getting knockin out on their knees,
and getting killed in their sleep.
When u chillin with me, getting the work cheap,
ridin like 50 deep, when its rainy.
You know me, i put you to sleep like rabies.
[deleted bad parts]
hmm...since he's online i should ask him if he could make something islamic in 5 minutes, lol he did once, its gone now
mashaAllaah thats good, ask him innit to write something deep wiv a good islamic message n show usformat_quote Originally Posted by truemuslimlol no i dont hate u now
i agree
he writes some deep stuf bout life nd death, nd like respect to muslims nd bout terrorists nd how we aint them, nd all, but i think he took em off his blog coz i cant find em!! i think theyr buried inside the haram
mashaAllaah it'd b best for you to keep it that waylol guven no i can ask him for real i was messin, he would ask me how i kno his myspace :X i dont even got an account on it.
Assalamu Alaikum
lol ahlaam, i kno!
i never can contact him tho, when he calls he goes straight to talk to my other brother nd they start rhymin,format_quote Originally Posted by IbnAbdulHakim
yeh i kno, myspace aint good for notin but stealin my brohters rhymes
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