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    Freestyle Poetry Thread (OP)


    6:am: i prayed after a struggle to wake up
    getting ready... my face barely meets a touch of make up
    tieing the scarf feeling cagey...
    but proudly standing here bravely
    on my right hand i have the pin
    encouraging myself that if i do it..its a win win-
    -situation, the summation is i will evade another sin
    and of my lord im afraid and so i have conviction within
    the whisperer comes when the time is critical
    but my faith is strong tho, his effect is minimal
    'take it off,if you want boys??'
    NO! ,..thanks for the ploy
    im happily covered and not indiscreet
    cus i know in the jungle...what happens to exposed meat
    Vulturous men have free access to see!!
    im still standing here
    from the rushed thoughts i say 'bismillah' to get clearer
    one final look at the mirror
    i see Beauty and a girl so sweet far from being dissolute and bitter
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    LADIES AND GENTLEMEN WELCOME the man named 'REVO'! who stands for REVOLUTION,
    in this laboratory like prison,we hold clenched fists high whilst breathing in the city's POLLUTION,this time round its not the working class who is at fault,that was a fabricated INTUITION,we're the innocent lab mice for derogatory TACTICS,whilst we pay stupendous TAXES to these AXIS.....of evil.....as an angry TEENAGER... sooner or LATER im going to riot and perform a great stunt like KNIEVEL, dam.n! the PARLIAMENTwe have to do everything to fend off this fascist ESTABLISHMENT, satan's REGIMENT tweaked to be blindly accepted by the FLOCK nowadays treat conspiracies as facts,because truth will not be aired on tv, we just have to lap up the usual CROCK temptations through modern entertainment,how do i pull my SOCKS… easy! when you see from the HORIZON the approaching PYTHON just STEER! life is delicate like strings on a VIOLIN,have FEAR and DISAPPEAR to perform the daily prayers to deprogram pick up good deeds by the tonnes and reduce inner evilness to minor MILLIGRAMS
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

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    But our beloved prophets was like this[]X[]X million.
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    hellooo ladies and gentlemen.....im back
    with rhymes that are wack
    i lack the vocab....
    mr czgibson
    with thick english teachers glasses drinking his lipton,....
    wont be too impressed
    thats why an awry post in an obscure thread lest.....
    people dont get annoyed 'and say abdullahi give it a rest!'
    ayyo im all out macho..........when its prayer time i retreat like a stranger
    but i kick butt like the power rangers....
    when its down to self discipline
    i have more patience than an old lady with parkinsons
    attempting to sew with a shaky pin


    some wack rhymes
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    i throw thunder punches
    heavy on your stomach like school lunches
    Ive weathered this recession storm,. starting everyday by eating credit crunches
    and a glass of orange juice a wonderful feeling of victory and rejoice
    im back job hunting,composed and poised
    its a big race society is the hare......so i guess its a happy ending for the tortoise?
    temptation is calling....i have to block out the deceptive whispering noise
    shadows of my old self,i need to elevate me and fly like a sparrow
    and follow the righteous path thats narrow
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    format_quote Originally Posted by Abdullahii View Post
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    i haven't freestyled since...forever
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    hmm dnt kno, mayb because i've been busier these days, or mayb i lost my freestyling/poetry talent
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    i throw thunder punches
    dirty like school lunches
    Ive weathered this recession storm,. starting everyday by eating credit crunches
    and a glass of orange juice a wonderful feeling of victory and rejoice
    im back job hunting,composed and poised
    its a big race society is the hare......so i guess its a happy ending for the tortoise?
    temptation is calling....i have to block out the deceptive whispering noise
    shadows of my old self,i need to elevate me and fly like a sparrow
    and follow the righteous path thats narrow
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    i wanna be devout im the sorry dude who's trying to be religious
    My brain is a battle ground similar to the dangerous brazilian favelas
    catch me chilling in the prayer room next to that old building
    and when im out i be killing these bacterial scums like penicillin
    summers here the sun is out
    my muslims compatriots indulging in shaytanic fun makes me far far far from proud
    someone get me a gun gu gu gun so that i could shoot myself before these temptation have me plun plun plunged
    this life is one tough struggle.ive been thrown endlessly like frisbeeeeyhhh
    in this short life of mine ive been very busy almost as occupied as a beeeeyh
    studies,work and the stress that comes along so readileeeyh
    plz do listen
    its a matter of minutes before im done and you can say good riddance
    i know y'all are experiencing the same **** and are saying why would i want to listen to this
    if you are not happy just be patient for abit-
    ....problems are getting worse the BNP are getting more parliamentary seats
    waiting to get the chance to kick us out the blacks and the people from the east
    all out ..all out soon will have to fight back
    but im patriotic so i wont go as far as wiping my ass with the union jack!
    i am british tryna study hard to make this country filthy rich
    if anyone was to get ditched how about we start with the MP's Who spend the people's money,,like Jacqui smith what a *****
    this earth is a field trip and im a traveler
    devising a plan to escape the Illuminati and co also THE treacherous baffler
    they can perplex
    but im not affected if i keep my iman in check
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    Islam is my deen
    But it can't be seen
    I have to work on it
    So I can fit
    In heaven or hell
    When will I have to sell my story to Allah
    About what I did and said
    He will know what I did
    And he'll put me in my pit
    Where I belong
    And when my times up there's going to be a bong
    My time in hell is done
    It wasn't fun
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    its a blessing full of melanin
    paranoid still, filled with adrenaline
    treated as a freakazoid,gremlin
    by the ignorant,prideful and the creators of 'famine'
    one colour segregated from the other just like a game of backgammon
    perpetuated stereotypes 'the colour black is an imbecile'
    but physically strong worthy to work only in a cornfield
    instructed at the sound of the master's whistle
    A leather whip ready,if you dare to fizzle
    The young start early barely of their mother's nipples
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    I live in kuffar area
    people give me looks coz im from asia
    i put my trust in Allah hes my savior
    Need to regulate their behaviour
    This fitna wont break me
    im Muslim! nah they cant phase me
    1 day they'll rate me
    Coz i praise Allah so greatly
    Enjoinin the good and forbiding the evil
    Oh my Muslim people! Rise up!
    Islam is the truth
    Make the most of your youth (echo) youth youth youth youth... lol
    Last edited by nebula; 04-28-2009 at 12:23 AM.
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    I act like a kuffar
    But there's no puffer that I can use to help me
    I don't pray ,I don't read the Quran
    I hope I do before my time down
    I wish I could be found
    And be a true muslim like the rest of us! Ameen!
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    Ne sois pas triste !
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    Re: Freestyle Poetry Thread

    hmm I fail to see that in abdullahi's and Nebulas posts (perhaps indeed I have missed something), nonetheless, I have removed my post..

    carry on!
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