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    Freestyle Poetry Thread (OP)


    6:am: i prayed after a struggle to wake up
    getting ready... my face barely meets a touch of make up
    tieing the scarf feeling cagey...
    but proudly standing here bravely
    on my right hand i have the pin
    encouraging myself that if i do it..its a win win-
    -situation, the summation is i will evade another sin
    and of my lord im afraid and so i have conviction within
    the whisperer comes when the time is critical
    but my faith is strong tho, his effect is minimal
    'take it off,if you want boys??'
    NO! ,..thanks for the ploy
    im happily covered and not indiscreet
    cus i know in the jungle...what happens to exposed meat
    Vulturous men have free access to see!!
    im still standing here
    from the rushed thoughts i say 'bismillah' to get clearer
    one final look at the mirror
    i see Beauty and a girl so sweet far from being dissolute and bitter
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    Re: freestyl

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    u mean confusing.

    thank u thats even better than unique. knowing it is.

    u kno wat, the way i do my lines . is writin it in a way all the high rappers do, they get all dis words nd all, u fnk theres no message or something, but ther is, nd its wayy out than wat u thought.
    so yeh confusin works thank u

    nd thank u m421
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    Re: freestyl

    ^ sis ive heard the best lyrics lol, they aint suppose to b confusing


    you got talent, i read that "wanna b fre" one n was like oh: WHOAH!!!!!

    but lol its NOT suppose 2 b confusing
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    Re: freestyl

    Its a killa
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    Re: freestyl

    format_quote Originally Posted by Mz View Post
    ^ sis ive heard the best lyrics lol, they aint suppose to b confusing


    you got talent, i read that "wanna b fre" one n was like oh: WHOAH!!!!!

    but lol its NOT suppose 2 b confusing

    u actually wanna kno wat they say here when som american loser who cant rap says its confusing? they say "cuz, getta lyf, get a job, graduate, nd undastand devilish ways more , nd notin will be confusin." comin from nonmuslims '
    soo... i say bro, get ya skills, freestyle fo lyf, nd get to kno shaitanic ways more, nd notin will be confusing
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    Re: freestyl

    Spectacular!
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    Re: freestyl

    ^ lol ok
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    Re: freestyle

    dayam, thats freestyle??? thats (one) of the best u've written............no wait the 6o clock one was better... ya actually they all good the same. u cant decide!
    Mashallah talllent!

    nd "bambii" ! wait... wen did i suggest that again?
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    Re: freestyl

    Whatever ya do but dont rap like jay z. Hes a shame man
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    Re: freestyl

    he's a lame man. nah actually he's on the top list, it goes, tupac, biggie, nas, snoop, jay-z, then all the lame ppl, nd on the very bottom is lil wayne, nd the hip hop murdera, soulja boii.

    dont matter they all suck in my view now.
    i rap my way, my style, my remixed english language, nd myyy topix
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    Re: freestyl

    Actually dr dre tops all of them. But yeah its good to have your own free style. You gonna make a label?
    truemuslim labels lol
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    Re: freestyl

    ooo how could i forget him on the list :eek: ! he goes after tupac tho.
    actually dusnt matter
    naah i freestyle for fun not fo voice/attention/faame
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    Re: freestyl

    my brain is rusty at the moment. its raining so bad here and i feel miserable. i think it depends in your mood and what your thinking for the words to come outta ya brain
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    Question freestyl topics

    yehh se i can make a two lines the second one word appears in my head......

    but i need topicccs, thats wher my brain freezes.

    so the first topic comin to my head right now if i try to freestyl, is kill.
    so now i got this

    tonights the night we gon kill
    this tym we do it fo real
    so say ur prayas nd write yo will

    .. those are the first lines that pop to my head when i think of any word.

    but se the topic aint good. as u can se.

    nd now i need sum good topics from good topic comer upers.
    u ppl write stories im sure u can com up wit topics n a sec so help me out here :laugh:

    also i need a topic for skol poem again.
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    Re: freestyl

    Wannabe =P

    ^ Das wan word Lol


    Heres the rest:

    *Poke & hugs*

    I think you try too hard, please be yourself..you don't seem genuine to me.


    No hard feelinz, =D
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    Re: freestyle

    *Pokes bambi several times*

    *Eats bambi*

    *Burrrps*

    Ahh all gone! =D
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    Re: freestyl topics

    lol how is it possible u ppl notice i didnt say please cant get away with anything here can you! :'(

    PLeeeeease?



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    Re: freestyl

    format_quote Originally Posted by Pk_#2 View Post
    [FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Wannabe =P

    ^ Das wan word Lol

    What do y0u mean?
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    Re: freestyl topics

    u wan't a topic? umm write about the Prophet

    and a school one: u lol
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    Re: freestyl topics

    lol why would i write about me for skool?? besides we did that in the beginnin of the year.

    the prophet.hmmmmmmm....too hard......
    i go narrow it down , DEATH, death, death, grave, dirt, underground, killing, blud, the bluds, the crips.
    u kno?
    so i need a ........"down" topic
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    Re: freestyl topics

    do one bout tortures of grave?
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