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    empty blank pages
    empty words wizout meanin
    empty world
    empty heart wizout a soul
    just write rhymes to pass the time
    gives me somethin to do when i feel weak and blue.
    as my days r filled wiz gloom
    nothin ahead but doom
    as i block my problems out.
    keep stress and presure away
    focus on the task ahead as i will try ma best
    even tho everyday brings a new test, so i gotta find some strength
    to be straight and true no quick and easy shady routes
    no seconds thoughts
    keep it a void in ur mind
    keep it empty for all of time
    so nothin hurts
    but the hardest is letting go
    dettach and cut off- quick and sharp
    no ill feelings as we part
    no chocked up throat-no battle wiz the tears
    no second thoughts to ur fears-cos they're already here.

    peace xx
    drop me ur comments and let me know ur thoughts...hope u liked it x
    Last edited by true believer; 11-26-2008 at 05:00 PM. Reason: forgot a word
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    Re: empty-poem

    Assalamualykum,
    Wow thats a really heartfelt poem...
    I felt as is if it applied to me when I was reading it...Cause thats exactly how im feeling at the moment...lol

    hope u liked it x
    Yeah I loved it Sis...

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    Re: empty-poem

    thats really good sis mashallah i wish i could make sense like you when i write lol
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