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"unrequited love" a poem

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    "unrequited love" a poem

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    I want you lot to figure this out...clue: it has nothing to do with what it seems...


    you come to me beatified on a silver plate
    yet cunning and burdensome, in my heart you have taken your place

    a mad love I possess
    to one who couldn't care less

    A deluded love I confess
    A love shared by the thousands

    through you, iam constantly tried,
    you've snatched me, its as if I've been swept by a power tide

    sinking deeply underneath
    a weight you are, pressing intensely upon me

    to my cries (for help) you are headless
    and against you i find myself powerless

    a strange reaction, is it not, for a love unrequited?


    and still despite my knowledge of your cunningness
    I will be constantly be besotted by your beauty

    and from your silver plate
    your forbidden fruits I will take

    a strange reaction, is it not, for a love unrequited?


    begone away from me O cunning beauty
    lest my deluded love (for you) destroys me
    "unrequited love" a poem

    ...desperate for husnul-khitaam...


    please make dua that Allah grants me a good end (to my life). please make dua that Allah guides me.

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    Re: "unrequitted love" a poem

    oooo
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    My heart, so precious,
    I won't trade for a hundred thousand souls.
    Your one smile takes it for free.Rumi
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    Re: "unrequitted love" a poem

    Love of the dunya, I'm guessing..?
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    Re: "unrequitted love" a poem


    ^yeps...but what made you think that?
    Last edited by Ummu Sufyaan; 05-13-2009 at 07:22 AM.
    "unrequited love" a poem

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    Re: "unrequitted love" a poem

    Mainly these lines:

    -A love shared by the thousands
    -and against you i find myself powerless

    But the whole general idea is clear, I guess.. Lovely poem, btw, mashaAllah.

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    Re: "unrequitted love" a poem

    format_quote Originally Posted by crayon View Post
    Love of the dunya, I'm guessing..?
    was gona post the same thing! lovely poem sis
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    Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
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