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    "O ye who belive! Endure, outdo all others in endurance, be ready, and observe your duty to Allah, in order that you may succeed"

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    Re: My poetry thread

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    ^great poem mashAllah.
    is this about Stephen Hawking? :X
    except that hes not 40 but is crippled for 40 years, i thought i should confirm
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    Re: My poetry thread

    format_quote Originally Posted by Malaak View Post
    ^great poem mashAllah.
    is this about Stephen Hawking? :X
    except that hes not 40 but is crippled for 40 years, i thought i should confirm


    based on someone I know and a general description of some others I have known. Wanted to get across the bleakness of this kind of life, I feel I have not done the people justice but will leave poem as it is and write again later
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    Wow!!!!!! Superb bro Tony, mashaAllah. I pray your talent never ends. Ameen
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    Re: My poetry thread

    THE DEADLY SLUMBER

    As if me and religion don't belong....


    Heard this before in a different song
    though the music died, the lyrics still strong
    it warped my mind and sent me wrong
    away from the places my soul belong

    indellible stains on my weakened soul,
    the marks of sin when the devils control, the
    sublte temptations, gently cajole
    to a place in hell and a fiery hole

    The beast is near, it blocks the light
    blackens my soul and narrows my sight
    distracts my mind from the need to fight
    when I know im wrong, it tells me im right

    And I cry inside while shaytan grins
    coz I'll die with pride and other sins
    but I still backslide and the evil wins
    I could have tried but my emaan spins

    I do good deeds but there not enough
    no brother told me it could be this tough
    that you get knocked down and treated rough
    from the devils who hate you and call your bluff

    Just when I thought my emaan was a tower
    it crumbled and fell and I lost the power
    to praise my Lord for the tiniest flower
    to fear and prepare for the ultimate hour

    So now im lost, stripped of His grace
    a speck in the desert, a grain of disgrace
    far and away from His wonderous face
    in the darkend bowels of a trecherous place

    I pine to be back in the light of God
    and though you might see this as nothing but odd
    I cannot seem to onwardly plod
    when weighed down with sins like a devilish clod...........of earth

    but the earth is beckoning
    the fire is greeting
    the day of reckoning
    our time is fleeting
    the roar is deafining
    and soon our meeting
    a last repenting
    a final beating
    A chance to be free of the pain
    To stand and cry JIHAD again
    I will not allow hells reign
    I will not be one of the sleign
    I will try to live in refrain.................

    ........Please Allah help me again............
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    Re: My poetry thread

    Lol, poetry gives a lot away bro :X

    good stuff though.
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    Re: My poetry thread

    format_quote Originally Posted by Tony View Post


    Please make Dua for my Mum to come to Islam and to accept that Allah is the only one who can forgive, and to show her that her sins are not so many that Allah will not forgive them. Ameen

    I had such a chuckle with this poem, hilarious amazing, what a talent.. still reading, they get more and more amazing... Masha'Allah.. you are blessed in ways you don't see

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    Re: My poetry thread

    Thanks sister glad you are enjoying these, Allah has blessed me with much and I am guilty of offering little thanks, i gave a copy of this thread in hard copy to someone who has been contemplating reverting for several years, Allah guides us and blesses us
    My poetry thread

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    Re: My poetry thread

    ameen..

    I used to have my poems on a site called poetry.com but they have changed to this shady site called lulu so I retrieved my poems from their customer service and created a blog on google (they are free) and a good way to keep a diary and such.. thus I put out there for your consideration the idea of having a blog filled with your poetry?

    My poetry thread

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    Re: My poetry thread

    format_quote Originally Posted by Gossamer skye View Post
    ameen..

    I used to have my poems on a site called poetry.com but they have changed to this shady site called lulu so I retrieved my poems from their customer service and created a blog on google (they are free) and a good way to keep a diary and such.. thus I put out there for your consideration the idea of having a blog filled with your poetry?



    haha, i dont get the blogfacetwitterbookmyspace thingamajig to be honest, but who knows maybe i could try
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    Re: My poetry thread

    format_quote Originally Posted by Tony View Post
    haha, i dont get the blogfacetwitterbookmyspace thingamajig to be honest, but who knows maybe i could try
    neither do I, and I can't tell you how resistant I was to the idea, until I discovered that it is safer and better than having it at that poetry.com site.. at least my private information are safe and I can make my blog by invite only if I desired, and of course you don't have to put pictures..

    if you are considering it, it is as easy as 123

    https://www.blogger.com/start

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    welcome back bro! Keep smiling and sharing your talent with us inshaAllah!
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    Re: My poetry thread

    I discovered a chink in his armour today
    though the steelly glare in his eye remained
    I saw longing briefly stroke his face
    flicker, blaze then become restrained.

    hardened, cruel and battle scarred
    evil incarnate
    spewing bile and politics
    and spreading rascial hate

    Ox blood boots and shaven head
    allegiance to the right
    nazi symbols etched in ink
    and soul as dark as night

    A fearesome man who hunts in packs,
    a viscious snarling beast
    who bites and kicks his way through life
    as violence is released

    He marched to stop Islamic spread
    he beat an Asian male
    he fire bombed a corner shop
    but left a guilty trail.

    The parents of the orphaned girl
    were laid within their grave
    the animal now stood at trial
    defiant, bold and......brave

    The details of his hideous crime
    related to the court
    though not a flicker of remorse
    nor regretful thought

    Quick the verdict, straight and true
    his cold hard eyes still glare
    but all the hatred in his heart
    failed him to prepare
    for the gentle nudge that hastened next
    and revealed to him despair.

    The orphaned girl no more than ten
    held his steelly gaze
    when her broken heart so softly spoke
    it left him in a daze

    "Thankyou for not concealing your hate
    as many others do,
    your honesty is plain for all
    and part of what makes you,
    my parents trial is now at end
    with Allah lies their fate,
    I pray He takes away your pain
    before it is to late.
    I forgive the thing you did too us
    revenge cannot be mine,
    my broken heart belongs to God
    in this there is a sign,
    for you to come to know your sins
    and for you to then repent,
    and I pray that Allah guides you
    to a higher pure intent.
    Muhammad (pbuh) was the best of men
    what he bought to us is clear
    that we shall live our righteous lives
    only Allah shall we fear."

    The fleeting glimpse of recognition
    scurried across his face
    the stregnth of a ten year old orphaned girl
    rocked him to his base

    The moment passed and his sneer returned
    guilt had left no trace
    but in his heart a light had stirred,
    the touch of Allahs grace.
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    "O ye who belive! Endure, outdo all others in endurance, be ready, and observe your duty to Allah, in order that you may succeed"
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    format_quote Originally Posted by Tony View Post
    I discovered a chink in his armour today
    though the steelly glare in his eye remained
    I saw longing briefly stroke his face
    flicker, blaze then become restrained.

    hardened, cruel and battle scarred
    evil incarnate
    spewing bile and politics
    and spreading rascial hate

    Ox blood boots and shaven head
    allegiance to the right
    nazi symbols etched in ink
    and soul as dark as night

    A fearesome man who hunts in packs,
    a viscious snarling beast
    who bites and kicks his way through life
    as violence is released

    He marched to stop Islamic spread
    he beat an Asian male
    he fire bombed a corner shop
    but left a guilty trail.

    The parents of the orphaned girl
    were laid within their grave
    the animal now stood at trial
    defiant, bold and......brave

    The details of his hideous crime
    related to the court
    though not a flicker of remorse
    nor regretful thought

    Quick the verdict, straight and true
    his cold hard eyes still glare
    but all the hatred in his heart
    failed him to prepare
    for the gentle nudge that hastened next
    and revealed to him despair.

    The orphaned girl no more than ten
    held his steelly gaze
    when her broken heart so softly spoke
    it left him in a daze

    "Thankyou for not concealing your hate
    as many others do,
    your honesty is plain for all
    and part of what makes you,
    my parents trial is now at end
    with Allah lies their fate,
    I pray He takes away your pain
    before it is to late.
    I forgive the thing you did too us
    revenge cannot be mine,
    my broken heart belongs to God
    in this there is a sign,
    for you to come to know your sins
    and for you to then repent,
    and I pray that Allah guides you
    to a higher pure intent.
    Muhammad (pbuh) was the best of men
    what he bought to us is clear
    that we shall live our righteous lives
    only Allah shall we fear."

    The fleeting glimpse of recognition
    scurried across his face
    the stregnth of a ten year old orphaned girl
    rocked him to his base

    The moment passed and his sneer returned
    guilt had left no trace
    but in his heart a light had stirred,
    the touch of Allahs grace.
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    Stunning!!

    Really amazing bro. MashaAllah!
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    Hey you guys
    how you doin
    Im back once again
    from the brink of ruin
    been sat right back
    festered and stewin
    but watch this space
    coz my spirit is brewin
    with the urge to write
    like a dove just flewin
    and kissed my mind
    with the peace in which I knew Him


    Some work should be winging its way to these enlightened pages soon, peace brothers and sisters, speak soon
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    Re: My poetry thread

    ^
    Long time no see, Tony.

    It is lovely to see you around.
    How have you been? How is your job? What brings you back here?
    I hope you and your family are well.
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    Here I stand.
    I can do no other.
    May God help me.
    Amen.

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    and kneel before the Lord our Maker

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    asslaamu alaykum wa rahmatullahi wa barakatu akhi & welcome back!

    Sorry to hear things haven't been good for you. But hamdulillah things are better now. May Allah set all your affairs in order. Ameen.
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    Re: My poetry thread

    I miss reading this brother's poetry and his powerful, insightful words that never failed to amaze me.. hopefully he's well by the mercy of Allaah!
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    Re: My poetry thread

    format_quote Originally Posted by Hayaa View Post
    I miss reading this brother's poetry and his powerful, insightful words that never failed to amaze me.. hopefully he's well by the mercy of Allaah!
    I agree. Hope you and your family are well, Tony.
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    I can do no other.
    May God help me.
    Amen.

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    Thanks guys I appreciate it. I havent forgotten the forum and will be posting some poems soon
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    format_quote Originally Posted by Tony View Post
    Thanks guys I appreciate it. I havent forgotten the forum and will be posting some poems soon

    Br. Tonnnnnnnnnnnnyyyyyyyyyyy so good to have you back.. insha'Allah all is good and well with you..
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