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    Loves young dream
    A girl and a boy
    holding hands
    in the park
    loves young dream
    but all is not how it seems

    The guys got a beard
    The girls wearing a hijab
    They look Islamic
    But the realities tragic

    Boyfriend and girlfriend
    Hand in hand
    Romeo and Juliet
    The Muslim kind

    Parents don’t know
    And cant imagine
    Their child up to no good
    Breaking all the taboos

    Beard and hijab just for show
    Away from the family
    Almost anything goes
    When in Rome do as the Romans
    Seems to be the motto


    Appearences can be misleading and decieving
    Never judge a book by its cover
    But it’s a good way for fooling the rents
    Leave home with books every morning
    Then engage in flirting and other things
    Instead of studying
    Who needs that baggage

    Dating leading to marriage
    That’s the game plan
    Its better then parents arranging
    Cousins back home disapointed
    Never mind
    They can visit
    And do a runner

    Boys wanting a quick fumble and lay
    I love you and presents
    Seem to be the quickest way
    But the girl wants commitment and something stable
    So make promises of marriage one day
    To get your way

    When things turn sour
    The girl gets a bad rep
    Slag and w***e
    While the guy gets rated
    And adds another notch
    The girls life botched
    And destroyed
    But that’s just the way it goes
    In the liberated west

    Few relationships last long
    And most don’t even last a term
    Some lead to all sorts of harm
    STIs and abortions
    But no one cares and follows blindly
    This trend of dating which leads to infamy

    So what to follow and who to obey?
    Hmm, that’s the big question
    Maybe our creator and his commands.
    Instead of whims and desires
    Which lead to haram
    Loves young dream

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    Re: Loves young dream



    It is a very good poem.
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    Re: Loves young dream

    That is a realistic poem with a serious message... well written!


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    Re: Loves young dream

    Walaykum salaams
    JazakAllah for the kind words, please forward widely inshAllah, so that others can benefit inshAllah.
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    Re: Loves young dream

    Salaam

    Intresting poem

    peace
    Loves young dream

    Do you think the pious don't sin?

    They merely:
    Veiled themselves and didn't flaunt it
    Sought forgiveness and didn't persist
    Took ownership of it and don't justify it
    And acted with excellence after they had erred - Ibn al-Qayyim
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    Re: Loves young dream



    Masha'Allaah,nice poem. Why don't you join the LI Writing contest too? The link is one my signature,you still have a week left..
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