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    Valentines day, female version

    I’ve been waiting
    For
    Feb fourteen
    Anticipating
    Getting all dressed up
    And dating

    Counting
    How many cards I get
    Guy’s texting and calling
    Won’t leave me alone
    It’s all flattering
    And a sign of my beauty
    And popularity

    Yes I’m a teen
    And seen
    And appreciated for my beauty
    And the clothes I wear
    This makes every male look and stare
    Even the ones old enough to be my father

    All this attention
    I need
    To feel good about myself
    And the many guys on my phone list
    And the two that I am dating

    They say they love me
    I stay non-committal
    Not my problem if they want to play themselves
    And get all emotional

    Not ready for marriage
    Just experimenting
    And playing the field
    And it aint hard
    Offers daily
    As I go back and forth from college and work
    Like a model on a catwalk

    It gets boring
    All this dating
    So I take a break from men
    A few days
    But they just can’t seem to leave me alone
    As my mail box fills up with texts and messages

    So now I’m worried
    Who to date
    And spend Valentines Day with
    The one who spends the most cash
    Or the one who says the most romantic things
    Maybe flick a coin
    Or go out with both
    On the same day

    Oh! Woe is me
    And my dilemmas with guys
    One day I’ll marry
    And miss all this
    Husband, kids and a family
    And won’t be chased for my figure

    Or maybe
    Turn religious
    Cover
    And not bother
    With pagan kufr festivals
    As I submit to my lord
    And follow all the commands gladly

    But in the meantime
    I follow my desires
    And lusts
    As I go around following the crowd
    And doing things that I know I shouldn’t
    But I make intention
    To make tawba one day

    N.B: No copyright in Islam, please forward widely inshAllah.
    Valentines day, female version

    www.Muslimways.com, check out the poetry section
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    Re: Valentines day, female version

    May Allah swt guide us all, & give us a chance to repent before its too late !
    Valentines day, female version

    If you begin to live life relating to the God who is all around you, every moment becomes a prayer.
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    Re: Valentines day, female version

    I’ve been waiting
    For
    Feb fourteen
    Anticipating
    My new dress is green
    I'll be dating


    Counting
    How many cards I get
    cute guys acting like pests
    All the late night texting and calling
    so irresistible, i can't be left alone
    It’s flattering
    my beauty shone
    when my body was shown
    and yes Im a teen but this is all harmless fun

    the clothes I wear....the way i style my hair
    makes guys stare
    after some practice a suggestive giggle is now under my guise
    i can now seduce calmer guys
    Even the ones old enough to be my father.



    i played around with it...this is my wacky version couldnt be arsed to finish it

    nice poem tho mashaAllah
    Last edited by Cabdullahi; 02-07-2011 at 07:26 PM.
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    Re: Valentines day, female version

    format_quote Originally Posted by Showkat View Post
    Valentines day, female version

    I’ve been waiting
    For
    Feb fourteen
    Anticipating
    Getting all dressed up
    And dating

    Counting
    How many cards I get
    Guy’s texting and calling
    Won’t leave me alone
    It’s all flattering
    And a sign of my beauty
    And popularity

    Yes I’m a teen
    And seen
    And appreciated for my beauty
    And the clothes I wear
    This makes every male look and stare
    Even the ones old enough to be my father

    All this attention
    I need
    To feel good about myself
    And the many guys on my phone list
    And the two that I am dating

    They say they love me
    I stay non-committal
    Not my problem if they want to play themselves
    And get all emotional

    Not ready for marriage
    Just experimenting
    And playing the field
    And it aint hard
    Offers daily
    As I go back and forth from college and work
    Like a model on a catwalk

    It gets boring
    All this dating
    So I take a break from men
    A few days
    But they just can’t seem to leave me alone
    As my mail box fills up with texts and messages

    So now I’m worried
    Who to date
    And spend Valentines Day with
    The one who spends the most cash
    Or the one who says the most romantic things
    Maybe flick a coin
    Or go out with both
    On the same day

    Oh! Woe is me
    And my dilemmas with guys
    One day I’ll marry
    And miss all this
    Husband, kids and a family
    And won’t be chased for my figure

    Or maybe
    Turn religious
    Cover
    And not bother
    With pagan kufr festivals
    As I submit to my lord
    And follow all the commands gladly

    But in the meantime
    I follow my desires
    And lusts
    As I go around following the crowd
    And doing things that I know I shouldn’t
    But I make intention
    To make tawba one day

    N.B: No copyright in Islam, please forward widely inshAllah.
    Thanks for sharing,Shoukat.Its indeed a sad reality.I found this part funny.

    This makes every male look and stare
    Even the ones old enough to be my father
    Lol....even in that old age people are unable to control their gaze.

    And this one..
    Or maybe
    Turn religious
    Cover
    And not bother
    With pagan kufr festivals
    As I submit to my lord
    And follow all the commands gladly

    But in the meantime
    I follow my desires
    And lusts
    As I go around following the crowd
    And doing things that I know I shouldn’t
    But I make intention
    To make tawba one day
    I really feel uneasy with this one.Who knows what comes next.We will live or die,who knows
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    Re: Valentines day, female version

    JazakAllah for the kind words, and the updated version, mashAllah very nice. Also ameen to the dua for Allah swt to make us strong in the deen inshAllah.
    Valentines day, female version

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