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Struggling 2011
No one believes in hope anymore
No one thinks positive these days
We've been shaken to the core
Exposed to our negative ways
I bow my head and pray
Fives times a day
To push the Jinn away
And keep the Devil at bay
No one cares about one another
Rape their sisters, kill their brothers
Everyone wants more wealth
To spite their own health
I struggle to survive
To keep my head above water
I can't falter
My son needs me alive
We're killing ourselves
Empty bookshelves
Ignoring our history
Blinded by the TV
All I want is a life
I can smile about
Nice kids and a beautiful wife
I can talk about
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Re: Struggling 2011
nicely arranged thought in poetry
When there is nothing left but Allah that is when you find out that Allah is all you need.
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Re: Struggling 2011
Nice poem and good rhymes. =)
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it is a beautful poem. i wonder if it's just a poem or those are your feelings? don't give up, btw.
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Re: Struggling 2011
Nice poem.
format_quote Originally Posted by
JeffX
To push the Jinn away
And keep the Devil at bay
There are some good jinns too, hope they dont feel ffended:
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