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    No one believes in hope anymore
    No one thinks positive these days
    We've been shaken to the core
    Exposed to our negative ways

    I bow my head and pray
    Fives times a day
    To push the Jinn away
    And keep the Devil at bay

    No one cares about one another
    Rape their sisters, kill their brothers
    Everyone wants more wealth
    To spite their own health

    I struggle to survive
    To keep my head above water
    I can't falter
    My son needs me alive

    We're killing ourselves
    Empty bookshelves
    Ignoring our history
    Blinded by the TV

    All I want is a life
    I can smile about
    Nice kids and a beautiful wife
    I can talk about
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    Re: Struggling 2011

    nicely arranged thought in poetry
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    When there is nothing left but Allah that is when you find out that Allah is all you need.
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    Re: Struggling 2011

    Nice poem and good rhymes. =)
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    Re: Struggling 2011

    it is a beautful poem. i wonder if it's just a poem or those are your feelings? don't give up, btw.
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    Re: Struggling 2011

    Nice poem.

    format_quote Originally Posted by JeffX View Post
    To push the Jinn away
    And keep the Devil at bay
    There are some good jinns too, hope they dont feel ffended:
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