[Inspired by Writing] Can you put this picture into words?

expulsion from eden

really?

expulsion?

you dont think the picture surmises transcendence towards eden?


and also i meant write a paragraph in which that whole picture can be visualised in a more beautiful form.


expulsion from eden makes me picture the clouds seperating and gods creatures falling towards the earth... no stairs

guess it depends on the direction of the stairs people don't fly toward earth from heaven- do they? they take the steps there on their own recognizance

staircase to heaven

lol would htose words really help you visualise an extremely beautiful picture?

how about this picture

earthrise

lol this threads turned into

"explain the following picture in as little words as possible"

ok how about: the sky was blue and empty, going on for infinity but not as empty as my heart felt on this sad day. the scene should've made me happy but when you're this sad, nothing can cheer you up. and i knew change would not come. life would never be the same. just then i noticed a ball in the beautiful blue sky. it looked like a huge planet, almost like the pictures of the earht i had seen so many times. only this seemed to be coming nearer and nearer, seeminly rolling toward the earth. before i knew what was happening, there was a horrible crashing sound and a shaking i had never felt, plunging me toward a far distance. the earht had been hit. that was my last thought before i lost consciousness.

format_quote Originally Posted by WRITER

ok how about: the sky was blue and empty, going on for infinity but not as empty as my heart felt on this sad day. the scene should've made me happy but when you're this sad, nothing can cheer you up. and i knew change would not come. life would never be the same. just then i noticed a ball in the beautiful blue sky. it looked like a huge planet, almost like the pictures of the earht i had seen so many times. only this seemed to be coming nearer and nearer, seeminly rolling toward the earth. before i knew what was happening, there was a horrible crashing sound and a shaking i had never felt, plunging me toward a far distance. the earht had been hit. that was my last thought before i lost consciousness.

muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuch better.

but still wouldnt let me visualise that picture (harsh but true !)


hey im not saying I could do any better... hmm


lets have a go



"I stood on the stony blue ledge and gazed upon the brilliant blue earth rising before me. The skies had parted but what revealed itself wasn't a deeply dark space, no, rather a tranquil sky with white stars from the far distance could be seen twinkling brightly. The earth however was strange... as though Land and Human life had not yet formed. It was blue and white from its clouds and water. It was fresh... it had yet its whole story to tell..."

well, it's good but if you need to use adjectives (such as brilliant) then you're not describing well enough.

i admit i'm not so good at descriptions. it's one part of my writing that i need to work on. scene description is really important.

also, maybe you shold include something about the icy blue mountain.

lol im no good at writing sis. I only read non-fiction thats probably why


yeh I didnt feel too good using those adjectives either tbh

format_quote Originally Posted by IbnAbdulHakim

Assalamu Alaikum

I thought about this for a while now. How many of us can put a picture like below into truelly transcendent words? In a way that can actually, without seeing this picture, enable us to visualise it in an even more beautiful way.

Okay,im going to try this one.As im an infant in this field,no one is allowed to make fun of me

Here i go.**Gulp**

Her heart was full of grief and sadness and sleep was far away from her eyes so she stood up,offer two rakahs and opened her heart before her Rabb,said every thing to Him,the one who knows everything,who has the power over everything and who console in the best way.After crying much,she felt lighter and her heart was filled with peace.She went to bed and fall in a deep,sweet sleep.She saw a dream where she was walking alone in a deep,dark jungle where there were trees like monsters and darkness was deep like disappointment.But she kept walking and suddenly,she saw a ray of light.She ran towards it and when she reached it,she stuck.It was the light of clouds.Yes,clouds.Clouds all around the place.Bright,soft,white.Like the wings of angels.Like the glory of good deeds.She was fearless,calm,happy,headless.She stepped in and walk between the clouds.She walk and walk and then,she saw a ladder.A ladder from earth to heavens.She went near and start climbing up.Every single step that she was taking of that bright,cold,white ladder,she was feeling herself full of bliss and tranquility.When she reached in the middle,an echoed voice said,"Those who believed and used to fear Allah much (by abstaining from evil deeds and sins and by doing righteous deeds).
For them are glad tidings, in the life of the present world, and in the Hereafter. No change can there be in the Words of Allah, this is indeed the supreme success.

And with this,her dream ended,she woke up and look at her mother who was calling her for break fast.

well played sis. well played

brother

scary one this time...

Trampolines made of fire rock like hell.

the sun has come too close to the earth

an ocean of fire