Rhymes and Poems by StrivingforDeen

**The-Deist** · 03-10-2015

Assalamu alaikum wa rahamtullahi wa barakatuh.
I hope all of you are well in shaa Allah.

I will post here all of my "writings" so it's more simple to find them in one thread

JazakAllahu Khair

**The-Deist** · 03-18-2016

Originally Posted by Serinity

The life of this world decieved you,
In the bolt of lightning and sin you strove,
for a fading dunya,
the shattering pieces of glasses,
amist the ashes, burnt to frickled trash,
you were partying and striking your fists,
hoping for a bargain,
and in your mind you were loved,
and the people roared and greeted you, pleaded you,
The ego, the lust, the arrogance, and pride,
took flight in a shape of snakes,
all 4 welded together, forth you went,
In deep sorrow you were sowed,
as flakes twinkle in the winter,
forever flourished, seeped,
the line of light,
Pleading you, fleeing you.

Serinity

You can make your own thread.

Invaders are not allowed.

**Serinity** · 03-18-2016

Originally Posted by StrivingforDeen

You can make your own thread.

Invaders are not allowed.

The invaders from the galaxy,
striving for insanity!
The spaceships smashed into vanity!
crushed with a lightsaber, burnt with blazing paper.
The toilet got flushed, now on to the show.
wow, don't crouch, ouch!

Ok.. I won't post.

**The-Deist** · 03-18-2016

Is it not strange, we won't change.

Uniting the world under one nation, no need for immigration.

This world is a hell, no need to tell.

Seein children die on TV it really hurts me.

Cops are unjust who can we trust? As hearts start to rust, a new page is a must.

Murders with guns, rivalries with Crips and Bloods.

The society will be what it will be, the change starts from YOU always stay true.

**Umm Abed** · 03-20-2016

Your first few poems were of really good. Thats the high standards I was talking about that you had, StrivingforDeen.

**~ Sabr ~** · 03-21-2016

Lol, so much lol in this thread.

You say you are not Muslim, yet you use Islamic phrase?

**The-Deist** · 03-21-2016

Originally Posted by ~ Sabr ~

Lol, so much lol in this thread.

You say you are not Muslim, yet you use Islamic phrase?

I made some of these poems as a Muslim.

**~ Sabr ~** · 03-21-2016

Oh, so you are an apostate?

that's even worse as being a non Muslim in the first place...

Clever you

**The-Deist** · 03-21-2016

Originally Posted by ~ Sabr ~

Oh, so you are an apostate?

that's even worse as being a non Muslim in the first place...

Clever you

Yes I am, long story.

**~ Sabr ~** · 03-21-2016

SubhaanAllaah, I don't want to hear it. You didn't trust in Allaah. You succumbed to the Shaytaan, khalaas.

**The-Deist** · 03-21-2016

Originally Posted by ~ Sabr ~

SubhaanAllaah, I don't want to hear it. You didn't trust in Allaah. You succumbed to the Shaytaan, khalaas.

You're making assumptions there.

**~ Sabr ~** · 03-21-2016

Originally Posted by StrivingforDeen

You're making assumptions there.

Nah. If you left Islam, that's it. Shaytaan won.

**The-Deist** · 03-21-2016

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**Umm Abed** · 03-21-2016

Originally Posted by StrivingforDeen

Yes I am, long story.

May Allah guide you to the beauty of Islam, and open your heart to the spiritual noor of deenul Islam, which is the only success, ameen! I pray that for you.