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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
salamualikum.
okay now am goign to be more serious && not mess about inshallah well here goes one
I Have mastered a method to suppress my pain
No longer will I let my cheeks have a tear stain
I will wake up each day with a smile on my face
Appreciating life's moments for time is no race............
salamualikum
OMR... what have i done i always write sad poems am sorry :'( just sharing my hard times
Making the effort to embellish all 5 senses
Wearily lettin go of the walls I built for defense'z
Now bearing the burden to be something I am not
This is not the happiness for which I ad sought
Outward appearancez r fairly easy to contain
Difficulty arises trying ta mask my internal pain
Repeatedly ma cherished dreams are torn apart
Freely I let the crimson tearz bleed from my heart
you see sis theres an islamic method
for every haphazard
from eating your favorite custard (
to healing those broken wings
you see, these beautiful teachings
taught by the best, have intricate meanings
sealing the doors to shaytaan
he aint roamin in ur heart, that aint his place
his a disgrace and the heart of a mu'min needs not his trace
takbeer
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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salamualikum
OMR... what have i done i always write sad poems am sorry :'( just sharing my hard times
Making the effort to embellish all 5 senses
Wearily lettin go of the walls I built for defense's
Now bearing the burden to be something I am not
This is not the happiness for which I ad sought
Ma'assalama
WOOOOOOOOW that one was amazin :eek: im out of reps tho!
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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poetry is the most beautiful when it fills you wiv this happy feeling lol, lets not turn it into twisted art where they draw creepy depressing stuff all the time :vomit:
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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prayer is da basic pillar of Islam
It is mentioned again and again in the Qura'an
The importance of prayer is in 7 hunddred places
But in da mosque, do u see many young faces? (do we)
Prayin in da mosque gives 27 timez da r-ward
Prayin with da intention dat ur pleasin ur Lord Al-Mighty
When you walk to da mosque, just remember within
You gain a reward and ur losing one of ur sin
For every step towards your destination
prayer is da basic pillar of Islam
It is mentioned again and again in the Qura'an
The importance of prayer is in 7 hunddred places
But in da mosque, do u see many young faces? (do we)
Prayin in da mosque gives 27 timez da r-ward
Prayin with da intention dat ur pleasin ur Lord Al-Mighty
When you walk to da mosque, just remember within
You gain a reward and ur losing one of ur sin
For every step towards your destination
ma'assalama
subhanAllah!!! MORE!!!
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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the Qura'an as foretold dat before you are dead
say ur prayers before ur prayers are said upon you
before they stand upon your grave
and the angels come to ask you how is it you behaved
before Allah takes into account
the sins which pile up to a scary ammount
say your prayers before you see those two (munkar and nakeer)
who when they come, wont even say boo
azrail (AS) will take ur soul as its due,
so forget this dunya and foget your crew
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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spreadd this word prayer to Muslim sisters and brothers
prayer will sepearte Muslims from others
prayer is a blessin which Allah subhanwatallah gave
it will intercede && protect us in da grave..
spread the word sis i spread the peace
spread it wiv my heart and tongue
spreadin it now and i've only begone
or hav i? i aint been told my time of death
it could be when im prayin or when im in debt (audhubillah)
while im blastin out tunes or walkin away from a catastrophe i cudda prevented...
for all i kno my life, i might hav already spent it,
last breath, feels like it cud be anytime now,
ok gettin emotional, its time to bow now....
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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Ayat-ul-kursii reading afta fardh must be read
it will lead u ta paradise *inshallah* afta ur dead
not performin prayer will lead you ta hell
surrounded by serpants in a deep well
Allah subhanwatallah has showered us with his grace
&& we have ta be worthy to show our face
Whateva we do we’ll pay the price
In da depths of hell or in paradise
but lets not take it for granted (his grace i mean)
we dont want Allah sayin its he we shanted
so my brothers and sisters understand
and be prepared for the day where we stand with deeds at hand...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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this is dedicated to my best friend who gave his life so i could live right
i remember the first time i was shot,
it was my arm that tip was from a glock,
worst thing wasnt the pain it was the tears in mammas eyes,
telling me 'soldier u coulda been iced'
next time got lodged behind my ear,
im lucky it missed my brain and im still here,
mamma cried,
'soldier u coulda died',
third time my closest friend saved me,
took 5 tips to the chest for me,
froma driveby that was meant for me,
took his life to teach me a lesson,
i try to honour his memory by praying to my lord 5 times,
rest easy little godfather.
The freed slave shall walk on the blood of his masters
"Coffee is the only thing I like integrated" - El-Hajj Malik el-Shabazz (Malcolm X)
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that one was amazin :eek: im out of reps tho!
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