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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
from this world departs....
but o believers don't be scared this is jst a start,
of the life after death, no more evil desires dart,
cuz we the believers enjoyin every part,
with no worries or disease in our heart
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
from this world departs
i dont even give part of a penny
to a world devised of so many
lil evil lyin boot lickers
prolonging the war
can you tell me whats sicker?
they kno right from wrong
yet stay strong in opposition
kno their fight is wrong
yet they follow evil intuitions
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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format_quote Originally Posted by AhLÄÄM
from this world departs....
AssalamuAlaykum
On the day your soul from this world departs...
Success will depend upon the condition of your heart
The softness, the willingness...did it submit to Allah?
Did you have hope in Him enough, to get you to Jannah?
Because unfortunately today, the state of hearts are such
That after a small test of faith, we feel its all too much...
But one thing to remember, to remind you...please dont forget
Allah loves the patient...And He'll replace the sadness with whats best
And He'll replace the sadness with whats best
in him my trust rests
he knows my best interest
n i detest those who go against him
do they know better then AL-HAKIM?!
they lose their minds over emotional grims
a lost boy/girly, so sad it seems
but they need a splash of ice
akhirahs reality, wake up from ur dream
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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Wake up from the satanic dreams
And you'll realise things arent what they seem
Realise....that all of it is fake, know its all a plot
To rid you of Allah's Mercy, and instill in your heart a clot
A clot of disobedience, a screen to cover the truth
But it'll only lead to misery, for that I'll give you proof
But it'll only lead to misery, for that I'll give you proof
WassalamuAlaykum
its shaytaans artillary makin your life a joke
his bak there laughin while you choke
makin your face red wen u spoke with piety
embarassed to act righteously
makes you seem like the odd one out
ur in a fight with shaytaan
hope u win this bout..
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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Insha'Allah we will...we aint gonna lose out
If we stick close to the path and ignore the satanic shouts
Ignore him shoutin, screamin, he's tryna dissuade...
Wants to take you with him to hell...see how he's tryna pursuade...
By showin you jewels of this Dunya, but look there's one thing he forgets
The most priceless diamonds are with Allah...the One who'll leave u no debt,
Whereas everytin shaytaan gives comes at a price,
Take one sip from his cup..you'll be left with hell and it aint nice
sorry for killing it
not really your drillin it
more then i can say for my emaan
i think im spillin it
now re-check my rhymes
this is wat u call killin it
lol
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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am looking at this world's brutality
reoccurenses of evil thoughts in my mind far from a vitality
devil will keep ply his trade on me
so let him be
i aint listening imma stuff cotton wool in my ears
an stay away from zina and twisted peers yo!
stay away from zina and twisted peer
turn a blind eye to the jeers
we should ignore the fault finders
to the sinners they behave kinder
but to us we on a different level
they see us as infected
but we see them as followers of the devil
my rhymes lost it, my brain hurts !!
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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sorry for killing it
not really your drillin it
more then i can say for my emaan
i think im spillin it
now re-check my rhymes
this is wat u call killin it
lol
AsslaamuAlaykum
You think your spillin it?
Not really you're increasin it...
Its just shaytan wantin you to feel you're failin it
This test of like he wanta see you fall...
But you gotta stamp out his whispers, gotta ignore his calls
WassalamuAlaykum
format_quote Originally Posted by AhLÄÄM
this is wat u call killin it
look at the ummah's blood, how people r spillin it
dunno why all of a sudden i feel so down
upon my face is a frown
thinking about what this life is in reality
am looking at this world's brutality...
AssalamuAlaykum
Am looking at this world's brutality
In awe at -apparantly- believers mentality
thinking this life is nothing, thinking they can live it easy
Then when they fall, they wonder what went wrong
But they gotta open their eyes coz the hereafter wont be long
tha the rhymes will flow automatically...
ye it's gnna cum to u naturally,
when u talk abt sumthng u luv,
then you gnna see wht real wit no bluff
so keep doin wht u doin no matter how tough
in the end it will all pay off
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
format_quote Originally Posted by AhLÄÄM
tha the rhymes will flow automatically...
AssalamuAlaykum
^^^ That rocked! oh: Masha'Allah!
The rhymes will flow automatically
and I'll no longer have to see
that crying mother, she lost her son to the crazy streets
That lil girl in filasteen, left to die in the burning heat
Or that poor bro in Gitmo, thinking his days are coming to an end...
No I dont wanna see em hurting, this dunya's goin round the bend
a big pay off sounding good to me
something real not imaginary
no more migraines, cancer or STD's
free flowing pleasure without limit
its somethin i wish for but can i get it?
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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im breaking off now
hurtin brain breaking off now
lets see if my message can hold pure
while i try to ignore
this hurtin brain,
ima a mu'min raised to ignore excess straining
im trainin to be somethin special,
be the sunshine when its raining
engraining the methodology of the prophet
im an entity, a strong moving force and you cant stop it...
workin towards somethin bigger, not a meager profit
all excess desires i drop it !
any good deed i see i wanna cop it
if you see a bit o stain on ma heart help me mop it
hurtin brain no longer hurting
lemme give this rhyme a name i call it the hurtin brain
Alhamdulillah !! loll
Last edited by IbnAbdulHakim; 02-15-2008 at 04:56 PM.
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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Coz we're all little fishies living in the fish bowl of life
Wana meet our creator and get along without misery and strife
But one thing we gotta remember is not to get caught up in the weeds,
Weeds are the devils rope...he'll make you succumb to his needs...
his needs being the desire to see you burning in hell fire...
So whilst swimming along your way...Smack him back and make him pay
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