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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
Harun bring doom quicker than a delivery delivered real soon,
Stats enter in at 1,018 posts, 3449 reps,
I'd turn him into a gost, in 3.79 secs,
Yet I use my force to enforce a fotress of old,
Where His dragon cant enter, i'll tear his jargon agenda,
And render his profile, nothin but letters formed by a senile in denile.
in the words of Chris Tucker in Rush hour..' Ima WOOOP yo ***' [posteria aka gluteus maximus]lol
Truly we have a linguistic magnifiiiigue on Li
Last edited by H4RUN; 02-15-2007 at 10:59 PM.
Reason: cant spell again
I had a wrestle with an alligator, i had a tussle with a whale, I handcuffed lightning, thrown thunder in jail! Only last week i murdered a rock, injured a stone, hospitalised a brick, im so mean i make medicine sick
"If you even dream of beating me you'd better wake up and apologise!" kay:
in the words of Chris Tucker in Rush hour..' Ima WOOOP yo ***' [posteria aka gluteus maximus]lol
Truly we have a linguistic magnigiiiigue on Li
compared to days of old it took my rusty old mind a whle to think of that! but yes Harun,
I'll bring doom to you real soon if you dont cease and inciate peace treaties!
The path is long but I hope we meet,
After the grave and the Day, in paradise in bliss upon a reclined seat.
A traveler traveling - travelled from shirk to tawheed,
If I'm remembered for anything - let it be the Mercy I seek.
Yes I'm a ghost writer who writes in a state of death alive like a martyr,
Parta' me is sucessfully wanting to be a bird green on a heavenly tree,
Yet I go on killing sprees with my artilery made of words,
As the opitamy of good versus evil in my own world,
Keep cold, feel old, peep as i reveal the real Lord,
The one who Istawa, over, His Throne,
In a way which befits His majesty, always remember there is none like He,
So when I state I did rake my mind and wrote the above lines will you believe me?
^^that rite there...is words of art....that is ill....like bro khalil said....use it for like islamic poetry.....u can even publish a book...
"100 Top Ill Islamic Poems" .....
By. Al Habeshi....
how comes no-ones rhymin anymore! Al-Habeshi bring some more on!!
because there are certain rhymes
that make you think
it'll all be over by the next wink
so you kno u can eiva swim
or deep as hell you can sink ffended:
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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I've not really freestyled before but i'll try my best
Try not to ignore the fact that life is a test
U don't realise but some things are for the best
Just keep ur deen strong, forget the rest
This world is nothing compared to the Hereafter
If u believe it is, u couldn't be dafter,
Don't u understand the purpose of life
The reason behind all these wars and strife?
Worshipping Allah the Almighty is before
You do anything else, this is the core
Belief for a Muslim to have in their hearts
From Islam, don't keep yourself apart....
P.S. What dyou think
i think you smacked it sis with a great message
this whole life is just a mere passage
that we all must go thru like travellers in a carriage
so brothers n sisters realise lifes not all about marriage :P
ok lol i kno that was weird but still mashaAllah sis your rhyme was good
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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...Marriage is still part of life they say
As long as you do it the right way
With the help of Allah Subhan Wa Taa'la
U do nothing wrong and you'll find a good partner
Just have your trust in Allah Almighty
Leave all your worries and Anxiety
Make a promise to yourself this day
You'll follow the teachings of Islam straightaway...
mashaAllah my heart says your right
how can we deny this bright light
im talking about islam sublime in its plight
nothing else can make u reach greater heights..
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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The back is best, I mean the best is back,
An attitude grotesque but Id guess you'd expect that,
From iblees the 1 who feasts on evil feats,
Pleading please give me respite that I might miguide the least,
Of mankind who sway away from the righta way,
Hey, I pray autho Billahi minash shaytanir rajeem,
I been cleen since utterin that noone is rightfully worhiped but Him.
Know what I mean?
The path is long but I hope we meet,
After the grave and the Day, in paradise in bliss upon a reclined seat.
A traveler traveling - travelled from shirk to tawheed,
If I'm remembered for anything - let it be the Mercy I seek.
...I know what u mean but don't put me down
I'm just a beginner trying ma best not to frown
Yes the Shaytaan, known as Iblees Trying to fight him to get some peace...
Read Surah Ar Radd, Ayah 28 then contemplate with ease,
It thus states that in rememberance of Allah do hearts find peace,
We all begginers belonging to the best ummah,
Longing for paradise on this day of jummuah,
Remember dont take leaps only baby steps,
Then take heed of the need for that which is correct,
Don't conceed to greed lest you disconnect,
From Ar Rahman's Rahma
Which Is What We Need For The HereAfter
The path is long but I hope we meet,
After the grave and the Day, in paradise in bliss upon a reclined seat.
A traveler traveling - travelled from shirk to tawheed,
If I'm remembered for anything - let it be the Mercy I seek.
How about this form of jugglin words: Im, Purposly Providing ProvisionsSo you can, Inevitably Invite me to make InscionsDeadly Discions Desicevly Deletin you like DemolitionRappin Repetition got me Reattractin your Revison...
I got a headache reading that. I only read about 4 lines, not saying its bad its really good maasha`Allaah but it was justmind boggling.
Al-Habeshi you are like the halal version of blakstone!!!!! LOL
mashaAllah broo!!
because halal is the way we been instructed
we want good deeds without it gettin deducted
by this dunya we'll never be seducted
wen we get to jannah inshaAllah we'll hav clamped it!!!
stamped it! our passport to jannah!
strivin 4 haq, believin in Allah
sadaqAllah, may Allah accept it
we wanna be winners may Allah protect it!!!!!!
ALLAHU AKBAR
Last edited by IbnAbdulHakim; 03-02-2007 at 09:46 PM.
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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Al-Habeshi you are like the halal version of blakstone!!!!! LOL
mashaAllah broo!!
because halal is the way we been instructed
we want good deeds without it gettin deducted
by this dunya we'll never be seducted
wen we get to jannah inshaAllah we'll hav clamped it!!!
stamped it! our passport to jannah!
strivin 4 haq, believin in Allah
sadaqAllah, may Allah accept it
we wanna be winners may Allah protect it!!!!!!
ALLAHU AKBAR
And protect our souls,
Till He resurect us all,
Keep me a fan of emaan and a man not sold,
To the discord of the bold of old,
Free from his plan at hand to disrupt man,
I read nuniyah an inspiration to write poetry,
Dedication to poetically potray the destination of the pious.
The path is long but I hope we meet,
After the grave and the Day, in paradise in bliss upon a reclined seat.
A traveler traveling - travelled from shirk to tawheed,
If I'm remembered for anything - let it be the Mercy I seek.
Old nursery ryhme, and yes with the right beat it could just be a rap song...
Simple Simon met a pieman,
Going to the fair;
Says Simple Simon to the pieman,
"Let me taste your ware."
Says the pieman to Simple Simon,
"Show me first your penny,"
Says Simple Simon to the pieman,
"Indeed, I have not any."
Simple Simon went a-fishing
For to catch a whale;
All the water he could find
Was in his mother's pail!
Old nursery ryhme, and yes with the right beat it could just be a rap song...
Simple Simon met a pieman,
Going to the fair;
Says Simple Simon to the pieman,
"Let me taste your ware."
Says the pieman to Simple Simon,
"Show me first your penny,"
Says Simple Simon to the pieman,
"Indeed, I have not any."
Simple Simon went a-fishing
For to catch a whale;
All the water he could find
Was in his mother's pail!
but oh wait the story hasnt finished yet
a beautiful muslim simple simon met
he told him to look around and take a glance
could all this have come out by chance?
isnt it foolish to worship a partner
besides the one whos likeness can be matched by no other
simple simon thought and said oh yes
a muslim i'll be today god blessh
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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