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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
because you might be a higher sinner in God's eyes...
tell me guys hav you ever felt boiling hot
like you jus came outta your baby cot
had no time to grow put on the spot to rot
and then have you reminisced to shed tears
knowing how fast Allahs strengthened you through the years
whilst you see men in their 70's
headin for a punishment lasting eternity
yet your young and you believe in ALlaah so strong
with tears you realise your past feelings were wrong
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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so Alhamdulillah for the guidance...
i await the day i dance in serene light
ocean breeze in sight and clear vision durin the night
delicious bites sized just right
might have to give the insight to those who doubt
to ignite emaan for the souls that are deprived
to deny acts of danger which could harm emaan
and stick strictly to al-islaam
paving a road so strong it cant be broken
so in jannahs streams we can be soaking
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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so in jannahs streams we can be soaking
allah said in the quran, and he aint jokin
now i dunno wut u been smokin
but u gotta learn islam, keep on learnin
now dont let shaitan take it on yo chin
coz u can defeat him, u can win
on this forum alone
many people have grown
they turned to islam, they in the right zone
coz the other faith, they thought they known (? duzen make sense?)
but it wasnt right so they were on there own
in the begining there was adam, and there was eve in who he trusted, trusted, trusted, the lord said please believe in me and the fruit of the tree please dont touch it, touch it, touch it
see once upon a time adam lived in heaven, enjoying the benefits 24/7, bumping beats in the car park of 7/11, then through the snakes mouth he was cast out, and thats reminiscent of me the son of man, trying to be on the lords right hand, but tripping over the devils plan, my sins fan the fires of hell, i guess i need eve to feed the good sentiments in me, and maybe i'll see a way out throughout the forest and all the trees,
in the begining there was adam, and there was eve in who he trusted, trusted, trusted, the lord said please believe in me and the fruit of the tree please dont touch it, touch it, touch it
ok, i'm really tired (havent slept in two days) ... if thats crap dont blame me
The freed slave shall walk on the blood of his masters
"Coffee is the only thing I like integrated" - El-Hajj Malik el-Shabazz (Malcolm X)
fruit of the tree please dont touch it, touch it, touch it
but Shaitan whispered to him and he touched it
disobeying Allah but he soon repented
Cried to allah, Please forgivve me
Don't make Hell my final destiny
Grant me your forgiveness and mercy
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
fruit of the tree please dont touch it, touch it, touch it
but Shaitan whispered to him and he touched it
disobeying Allah but he soon repented
Cried to allah, Please forgivve me
Don't make Hell my final destiny
Grant me your forgiveness and mercy
I'll write it in simplest form poetry,
I try to submit, yet fail and commit, lowly deeds,
Though I recieve, that which I need,
Take heed, of this example please:
I be like an animal soaring on two wings,
This be a parable, one be hope the other fear, let me bring,
The third component which is the bird's heart!
Its equivilent be my love, and this is the scholarly example of Ibadah!
Get it? Ibadah is like a bird, on one wing is fear, on the other hope and the essential is the heart, aka love.
The path is long but I hope we meet,
After the grave and the Day, in paradise in bliss upon a reclined seat.
A traveler traveling - travelled from shirk to tawheed,
If I'm remembered for anything - let it be the Mercy I seek.
Its equivilent be my love, and this is the scholarly example of Ibadah!
Ibadah: Dhikr, Sawm, Salah
Fearing Allah and obeying him
staying in the light not becoming dim
Life is just temporary
Not something that’s gona last for eternity
Yet we act like we’re gona live forever here
Our Lord, we disobey him and in our hearts we don’t have any fear
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
Our Lord, we disobey him and in our hearts we don’t have any fear
But through a sin, one may end up in Paradise,
And a through a good thing, one may end up where fire lies,
For a sin, should 'cause' pain within,
'pause' vow to not do the same again,
But a good action, may prove attraction,
to pride, showin off to bring satisfaction,
The path is long but I hope we meet,
After the grave and the Day, in paradise in bliss upon a reclined seat.
A traveler traveling - travelled from shirk to tawheed,
If I'm remembered for anything - let it be the Mercy I seek.
But a good action, may prove attraction,
to pride, showin off to bring satisfaction,
fill their minds, u'r better then the rest
u'r the man, u'r the best
then he starts changin his initial intension
his deeds are now worthless, just full of deception
he's ruined himself cuz of that pride
climbed aboard Shaitan's free ride
free in the begining later u'r gona pay
don't cry, u'r the one who chose the wrong way
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
and now I cry begging Allaah to forgive me...
open my heart and shower on me his mercy
keep my feet steadfast on the sirat al-mustaqeem
and keep my strong no matter how hard everything seems
I’ll encourage myself and never give up to anyone
Praying is gona be my number one goal, its gona be fun
To be prayin in the last third of the night
But it’s also gona be hard and I’m gona have to fight
My Nafs tht wants to sleep
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
that is the place they want me to retire...
they want me following all my desires
keep on sinning and never retiring
wasting my life not using it for good
acting like we're gangsters from the hood
others have nafs that lead them to right way
always nagging at them wen they dont wana pray
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
always nagging at them when they dont wana pray,
that why I have to stay,
each n everyday,
on top of the devil n my desires,
cuz i dont wanna end up in those fires,
full of hypocrites and liars...
do u think u can take it?!
think abou tit while now in front of the computer u sit
think bout how u'r gona pay for every sin
think bout the molten rock thats gona burn your skin
think bout the angels that are gona strike u with hot iron sticks
think bout the angels that are gona prick your skin with sharp pricks
think bout the intense punishment and heat
think bout how much u'r gona get beat
still think you can stand it?
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
and then i cannot speak...
u just have to show a bit more courage, don't let the devil think that u'r weak
cuz u'r not, u'r stronger than u think
with your Iman u can reach the peak
of Jannah and then u'll be able to speak
saying, Alhamdulillah, i'v beat the desires and their techniques
Last edited by Na7lah; 05-31-2008 at 08:04 PM.
Reason: typo
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
and then i cannot speak...
cuz I gonna be so weak
full of stress, strain, grief and pain,
gonna be in need,
for someone to hand me a deed,
askin for a favour,
thinking suddenly life has lost its flavour…
So work and labour, I aint speaking political parties,
So you earn the favour, forget student's ritual parties,
Try and save your private parts, 'for your soul departs,
And jaws get ripped apart, pause and start,
Thinkin before speakin, and dont be drinkin and eatin',
If its alchol and pork at the table which your sittin',
The path is long but I hope we meet,
After the grave and the Day, in paradise in bliss upon a reclined seat.
A traveler traveling - travelled from shirk to tawheed,
If I'm remembered for anything - let it be the Mercy I seek.
thinking suddenly life has lost its flavour
am asking Allah for only one favour
to enlighten my grave and make it bright
filling it with Nur, light
don't wana be waitng for the judgement day in a dark room
that's full of punishment making the person feel so gloom
thinking u'r gona be stuck in eternal doom
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
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