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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
And then strive for jannah, a place you can call home
we so far from home sweet home
feelin like a lil oppressed gnome
not that chubby but u gt what i mean
try havin taqwa and keep in all steam
supress al trials hopin its worth the while
singin praisies with daisies
puttin up a million smiles
miraculously the fakeness turns real
and sakeena replaces what we tried to conceal
Allah watches our every attempt
so never hold Allahs name in contempt !!!
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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so never hold Allahs name in contempt !!! He'll reward you for each and every penny that you've spent Spent in His way just for reward in the hereafter Do good in this world and in the aakhirah there'll be laughter
Lol lil sis crying over one second of pain But thats what you gotta take if Jannah you wanna gain So smile when you're feeling sad to keep yourself sane
So smile when you're feeling sad to keep yourself sane
coz it helps you refrain the complaints
i worry bout speaking when im bored
jus in case i utter that which displeases my lord
just incase i cant afford
the retribution required to purify my transgression
so i can start from scratch for my salvation
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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thats no reason to be crying keep trying, stop sighing, rhyming blocks got you defying the talent already clearly exposed, we know the hidden depths of lyrics proposed by none other them muslima421, so wiv islaam in mind take this mic son
(sry i know ur a sister but i just felt like saying son)
Assalamu Alaikum
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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So i'm back on my rhyming spree so let me spit one
I feel like a new born baby starting over a new life
This time I'mma do it right no matter how much I have to thrive
Be careful of the devil distracting me all over again
Inshallah this time I'll think twice before I fall into the devil's den
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
Inshallah this time I'll think twice before I fall into the devil's den
souljette back to make this thread live again
it died for a while but it thrives again
i wish the poets wud bless this thread once more
coz we kno we had deep poems strikin our hearts core
dnt even try tellin me there aint more in store
coz i kno these LI poets got poetry to sweep the whole floor
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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coz i kno these LI poets got poetry to sweep the whole floor
Back when I first came I read rhymes that made my heart sore
Everytime I read one I cried out for more
Where the real poets at?
Gave up or just too busy to do all that
Respect to the ones who still keep this place alive
Alhamdulillah keep doing it, soon new poets will arrive
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
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Alhamdulillah keep doing it, soon new poets will arrive
and our deep meanings let us dive
in oceans of feelings
dealing with healing the heart
so we can be nearing to a creator
so appealing it makes our hearts soften
as we constantly wishing for a meeting
with one so powerful he keeps our heart beating
where the greatest doctors fail... he keeps our heart beating
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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where the greatest doctors fail... he keeps our heart beating
Only He can cure the heart that's bleeding
Only He can cure the heart that is weeping
Can't wait to accomplish the place of which I've been dreaming
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
Can't wait to accomplish the place of which I've been dreaming But cant seem to overcome shaytaans evil scheming Darn he's getting to me cant even think straight anymore Wanna be lifted to heaven but find myself lying on the floor but take a second to think to myself am i really guna give up? Nah im guna get to jannah man about shaytaan i dun give a stuff he'll get what he deserves he'll see its hot on the other side But insha'Allah we'll be saved if by Islam we abide
if by Islam we abide
die wiv nothin to hide
hands open and secrets exposed
die wiv every door to shirk closed
choose your own abode whilst u breathe
coz it'll be too late wen u leave...
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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coz it'll be too late wen u leave
it'll be to late to grieve
When you down 6 feet under
with the world blown asunder
you got no time to waste
rectify that blunder!
Repent for them sins,
the ones u do without a thought
Thats the only way
Jannah can be bought
Jannah can be bought
All the devil's obstacles I fought
Until I couldn't do it anymore
Fell and got up all sore
Alhamdulillah I asked Allah to forgive me
That I had realized and was to blind to see
He showed me a way I could make up for it
Inshallah I won't fall astray again, it's time for the devil to sit
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
I need to get away from that incest
Inshallah Allah(S.W.T) will help me through the obstacles ahead
Hijrah is hard but being without my family is like being behead
Momma gonna be by my side always
No matter where I go she gonna find ways
to be there with me for all my days
That's all i need for now
My lord and my mom so i leave with a bow
In another world i'll be the next time I come here
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
u gotta make sum sacrifices and then your Lord
will help you and give u reward...
wat if u spent years in fear
fearing you'll lose wat wasnt there to begin wiv...
what if u pulled out every hair tryin not to care
jus strivin everyday to live
what if the chance knocked on ur door
stretchin out its hands askin u "come forth"
will u sacrifice all
will u neglect the call
n spend life wonderin....
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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and i say raise it as high as can be
i'll never question my given destiny
i kno my free-will my choices are mine
for my dream come tru cant expect an intervention divine
but my dreams keep on repeating
the same old hearts keep beating
i jus wish to be seating
in a position fil dunya which leads me to jannah's blessed meetin..
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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