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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
Raising our hands lets call and say
i'm gona start obeying Allah from this day
i'm gona turn back from the wrong way
put my face to the ground and pray
Learn silence as you have learned speech.
Speech will guide you, and silence will protect you.
Put my face to the ground and pray
Ain't taking no more humilation
I'm here to stay.
Ready to fight, not just by name,
True in our aspirations, feelings don't condradict our words
Actions speak instead for our mouths,
Enough nonsense is constantly uttered, so leave it be.
Act rightly and believe!
Searching no fame,
Only the true gain.
Islam is our life, in this place, non-existent are our rights,
Rigtheousness we try to maintain,
Guarding ourselves from vain.
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WOW, it's been a long time.
Last edited by Al-Zaara; 10-02-2008 at 06:34 PM.
“If only I had checked myself”
—
Guy who wrecked himself
True leaders don't create followers...
.... They create new leaders.
Guarding ourselves from vain.
Lay down your head
And go to sleep
May you dream
Of gardens sweet
Close your eyes
And dream away
Of Allah’s gifts
To you this day
The sun that rose upon your head
As you lay within your bed
Green grass, blue skies and waters deep
Of this and more, dream in your sleep.
why not? ur good
(to god) put my face to the ground and pray
regret the times i tried to betray
i turned against u and strayed away
i was kidnapped by shaitan, sorry for delay
now here i am with u , keep me everyday
unfortunoutly its hard, since im in usa
i fink i might fall, but u say i'll be okay
(to racists)
yeh yeh its ur neck i wanna slay
its ur eyes i wanna peppa spray
its u thats makin u say
how come she goin that way
towards that allah, oh she gonna pay
dam she is so uglay
she aint even bright as day
nor dead as grey
i gues its just may (me)
i want u all to be
just like me
then it'll be we
nomo killin spree
then we all be free
drink a cupa tea
move the stingin bee
OUTTA THAT DAYDREE(m)
where ya goin,
ima muslim
u can disagree
i can throw into the big red sea
but then you'd kill it, you'd just chill it
or mayb firey?
please dont drill it or i'll spill it
yeh its ur blud, i guaruntee
you should chill it so i could grill it
hell for u is free
unless u fulfill it, take sum islam, pill it
the it'd be us three
Oops a bit late
Now in the grave and left to ma fate
Will I see the angel waiting, ready to grip my soul
Will I ever be free, from that fatal stranglehold?
before the hour
or in the hereafter...
but dont sweat it
theres always a new chapter
why people lettin themselves drown
always wearing that same ugly frown
spendin nights soakin tears every gown
seekin sympathy like they so down
whats wrong look around tell me whats changed
everythings the same, feelings to blame
coz every thought n notion
stirring in ur mind like a potion
is your own doing, coz nothings changed
ur still you, everyones still them
the feelings you going through
is stuk in ur minds frame...
Last edited by IbnAbdulHakim; 10-03-2008 at 12:30 PM.
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My tears testify that i have a heart
yet i feel me and shaytan never part
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is stuk in ur minds frame...
Man that excuse is lame
Why blame the mind
when if you look around you'll find
that the cause ain't just mental
But also physical
The cause of pain we see
Only by prayer we'll set ourselves free
By changing your ways its true
You'll take a step through
The trials and tribulations of this dunya
In order that you may succed in the aakhirah..
Sorry bro, don't mean to offend, jus needed to rhyme..
Is stuck in ur minds frame
U wanna make the moves, think ppl are a game
change em how u wish, mould em and display
Keep that image fixed...dictate how they move n keep an eye on wat they say
This life is a play...
You don't wanna end up the wrong way,
But you will if you don't make the right move,
Committin sins & not ashamed, who you tryna prove?
Turn over a new leaf and change your ways,
Believe me they'll be your best days...
" Its sometimes better people don't get to know you..
Cuz the more they know you, the less they understand & accept you..
Alone is better, what say " - SRK
To smile wide and just be strong
That's something I haven't done for long.
Life is busy, along with my mind
I can't hold track of everything inside,
My thoughts are swaying away,
Some feelings I can't express in words,
I take help from the story told through my eyes.
Friends know, friends see
They don't need my lips and tongue to form what's real
Everything is shown, in the mirrror of my soul.
Now I smile, quite wide again
What a pretty smile I've got,
More often I should smile they say.
Easy to talk, it's much harder to walk.
If they saw life through my eyes,
took my place,
Read my mind,
felt my heart,
the burdens' weight,
the pain in my soul, the grief in my home,
I doubt they'd smile,
but I hope they'd try, Just like I do, from time to time.
“If only I had checked myself”
—
Guy who wrecked himself
True leaders don't create followers...
.... They create new leaders.
Just like I do, from time to time,
faceless individual that I am,
one of the thousands everyday,
never to be seen again, gone.
Trying to find a place called home,
have a house, but that's just brick and stone.
Trying to find a place of rest,
something to fill that niche in my breast,
Ive looked left and Ive looked right,
pondered at dawn, reminisced at night,
patiently searching, for that which I may never find.
Hope keeps me going,
so my feelings keep flowing,
hours, days, months, and years,
time, in its cruelty, feeds my fears,
oh my soul, please don't fall behind,
don't pursue a Day where you'll cause me to be raised blind...
[My first humble attempt at poetry, inspired to try and write something...hopefully it wasn't too painful to read]
“Do not argue with your Lord on behalf of your soul, rather argue with your soul on behalf of your Lord.” - Dhul-Nun
"It is the very pursuit of happiness that thwarts happiness." - Victor Frankl
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