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Hay, i have an idea...instead of just ryming, we can make it a challenge. Like what i mean is, Say someone writes a ryme, then the person to post after him has to START his ryme, with the SAME line as the person ended with before him.
Example:
I got so angery at the violation that i couldnt see.
So angery that i retaliated and wished to hurt thee.
Wish to make you plead, and if im lucky make you bleed.
head shots and body slams, until you can-not breathe.
So then the person after that says:
Head shots and body slams, untl you can-not breathe
all the morals and laws that day were not with me
it was not for me to think, or even imagine what would come
i shouldve sat like ive been taught, not got so mad, not been so dumb
now im racing im pacing, cant forgive cant forget, cant relax, cant think
Now i understand the laws of Islam,shouldve understood be4 i decided 2 drink
And so on and so forth, but you get the idea, i hope?...anyone who thinks its a good idea, or wants to play along let me know, and then we can start InshaAllah...and and by the way, just because you start with the persons last line, doesnt mean that your ryme has to be the same idea or plot as theirs.
straggler on a road
blind to whats been showed
deaf to whats been told
its too intense to hold....
so he wonders about his purpose
with a burden too deep to confess
every once in a while he grows careless
when he feels the worlds caress
his soul emits what his body hides
and he feels his worship is full of lies
so in remorse at night he cries..
wishing to be saved from a painful demise...
Last edited by IbnAbdulHakim; 10-23-2012 at 05:41 PM.
Masha'Allaah! I'm absolutely wowed. The members of past and present have Ta-lent. With a capital T.
I've attempted at it... it's up to y'all standards
format_quote Originally Posted by IbnAbdulHakim
wishing to be saved from a painful demise...
One day, he woke up before sunrise
Saw the beauty, and began to cry
Fell on his knees, held his hands high
"Ya Allaah, The All-Merciful
Forgive this sinning, worthless servant
For I have worsened
In all ways, going further
Further away, from the better
I need Your Help, Guidance
For I'm frightened
Lest I again go astray
Don't want to delay
My shortcomings shall be my fate
In the Hereafter, it's becoming too late
For me to undo what I've done
But I need You, Allaah, The Pure One
The Watchful One, The Loving One
Now I know, You shall always be The Witness
I can feel the richness
Of opening my heart and praying to You
Ya Allaah, my tears are true
Only You, Allaah, Only You
Can give me the strength and courage to plunder on
In this world, for I know I have to be strong. I have to be strong"
Last edited by Qurratul Ayn; 02-01-2013 at 09:26 PM.
I thought I would carry it on... Please don't mind. This was trying to come out for quite some time now.
A beloved sister
O have Mercy upon her
For in her heart
There is a grievance
Debating on her allegiance
A weight she cannot bear
She is not there
In her mind, far away
Far away, her mind portrays
She thinks and dreams
Low in self-esteem
Oh, how she despairs
She hasn't got the strength
To face her death
Death that's coming closer
Her composure
Slips and crumbles
Down she goes, tumbles
Onto the cold, unforgiving land
Outstretched is her hand
Attempting to utter
The words falter
Blackness descends
Soul ascends
فَبِأَيِّ ءَالَآءِ رَبِّكُمَا تُكَذِّبَانِ "Then which of the favours of Your Lord will ye deny?"
Al-Qur'aan; Surah Ar-Rahman
o soul of mine don't you dare pretend
that you don't see your own ill end
after all the sins you do
do you dare dream of forgiveness too?
do you think you deserve a glance from Him
who you disobey just for a whim
do you dare dream for Him to relent
after all your half hearted attempts
do you not see the fire beneath your feet
as you fill your life with treats
has the true nature of life so blinded
that of His wrath you have been so absent minded.....
The day is near
Smell of fear
Is pungent in the air
It's definitely there
Loud is the wail
Clear is the terror
So frail
Yet a battler
The strength to remain
Upon this terrain
Is not strong enough
Tough.
The days have gone
Tarried too long
Immersed in worldly desires
Ungratefulness is acquired
The need to pray
To The Almighty
The Utterly Just, The All Praiseworthy
O forgive me
Forgive me
Forgive me
I beseech You
I need You
Without You, I am nothing
My life is incomplete
I am not worthy
of Your Compassion
Your Love, Your Guidance
Stretched out is the absence
Please
Please
Please
Forgive me
She cries all day
Yet her tears aren't spent
She starves all day
Yet her hunger unrepents
She prays all day
Yet her answers are silent
No spark. No hope.
No line. No rope
To go forward
To propel herself
Have the energy
To increase her health
She weakens
She can't
She tries
She starts
She fails
The wails
That protrude
Can't express her feud
Half wants success
Half becomes depressed
When will it end?
It's going on too long...
Too long has she endured
The cruelty of the world
The unkindness of humans
The savagery of life
"O what You have planned
Shall indeed come to pass
But I need Your Solace, Your Help
It's withheld
The ask of forgiveness
The ask of repenting
The ask of aiding
The ask of loving
It's becoming easier
To start asking You
But most of all I ask of Peace
Peace that only You can grant
O O "
ill cherish you with my every heart beat
can't wait for the time we shall meet,
As time goes by, the groups divide
Truth distorted only to confuse the side,
I will never give up my creed,
I will not go wherever they lead,
I ask Allah for utmost strength,
Ask for patience for a longer length
Times ahead will only poke our faith,
Depend on Allah to be our aid,
While we won't let our prophets honour
be used as bait
i hv attempted after a whilee so excuse me
“The believers in their mutual kindness, compassion and sympathy are just like one body. When one of the limbs is afflicted, the whole body responds to it with sleeplessness and fever”.
Who Calls the beauty into light?
Who Weaves the stars into the night?
Who Puts the waking dreams to flight?
Who Weighs the Balance, wrong and right?
Who Made the waves in cosmic seas?
Who Brings the potent to their knees?
Who Does whatever He May Please?
Who is the Cure for all dis-ease?
Who Blows the soul that gives us life?
Who Gifts us growth disguised as strife?
To Whom do we belong, should pray?
To Whom shall we return One Day?
Who Rips the webbing from our eyes?
Who Smites the heart encased by flies?
Who Knows the Truth our Selves despise
When stripped of Self-deceptive lies?
Who Clothes with Love the trembling Self?
Who Rains Forgiveness from Himself?
Who pours the joys of worlds Unseen
With Kindness, for His slaves, now clean?
Oh!
Who Sings creation into sight? Who Sets its dance in patterns bright? Who Folds it up when He Deems right? Who Owns all power, Who has this might?
Who Calls the beauty into light?
Who Weaves the stars into the night?
Who Puts the waking dreams to flight?
Who Weighs the Balance, wrong and right?
Who Made the waves in cosmic seas?
Who Brings the potent to their knees?
Who Does whatever He May Please?
Who is the Cure for all dis-ease?
Who Blows the soul that gives us life?
Who Gifts us growth disguised as strife?
To Whom do we belong, should pray?
To Whom shall we return One Day?
Who Rips the webbing from our eyes?
Who Smites the heart encased by flies?
Who Knows the Truth our Selves despise
When stripped of Self-deceptive lies?
Who Clothes with Love the trembling Self?
Who Rains Forgiveness from Himself?
Who pours the joys of worlds Unseen
With Kindness, for His slaves, now clean?
Oh!
Who Sings creation into sight? Who Sets its dance in patterns bright? Who Folds it up when He Deems right? Who Owns all power, Who has this might?
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