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    Tears.. . . . . . .

    Tears as deep as an ocean,
    as sharp as dagger,so sharp,enough to
    cut through someones heart,
    so heavy,enough to rip through metal,
    ships float on these tears,tears of
    immense emotion hidden within the utter darkness,
    inside a capsule waiting to be set free,
    tears of red blood,sticky and dark,
    leave scars inside,forever and forever,
    tears of joy,tears of sadness,
    drowned within the shadows of my tears,
    hard to get out,hard to get out,
    tears don't just come out the eye,physical,
    tears stay inside,mental,
    souls cries inside,waiting to be set free from the torture,
    each paticle inside is screaming for help,waiting to be full of joy again,
    drowned within the sparkles of imagination,living in dream world,for how long,
    until the bitter wind of reality comes and consumes u,eats you up,swallows you,
    my,myself and I. . . . . . . . . . .

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    p.s. I'm not depressed,just like to convey strong emotions and feelings in my poems
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