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    Here is a love poem I wrote...I called it,,,,,,Good times


    Do you remember, radiant rose?


    The good times we shared?


    The topics of talk, the games we chose


    And how it fared?


    Do you remember when work was small, and all was held


    When they were tall, and our presence was felt?


    Perhaps not


    But we can improve our lot


    Be my friend and a rain to death


    As we were new to the end of death


    And be my girl and smile at me


    So I can smile, until I see


    The end of my time, overtaking me


    And the end of yours, before we enter


    The garden of God…..or memories


    Which fell like letters-


    Letters from the sky, to future folk and their memories


    And you can laugh, as I hold you near


    And we will no longer have any fear


    But be garments of warmth and fireplace buddies


    Friends to go on, and fight the quest


    And lovers to tango and giggle…..be funny


    And share each other like the distance yearned


    As it cried out when I sent my praises


    From afar and rules of modesty


    As a man needs rules but can not see


    And pecks of kisses I imagine now


    And your kisses, oh your kisses,oh, I want them now….


    For if you do, ill give you mysoul


    But if you don’t ill give you mytears


    And in your role, you own my life


    And can turn me to dust from myfears


    And you can give me strife


    But it sure is a delight to loveyou, and love you,


    And even if you turn me down


    I will always love you, for you’llalways hold….


    The crown of attachment, in myheart, and in my soul….


    my playmate, friend, and radiant rose……
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    Re: Love poem

    bump @sister herb if you clicked thumbs up on my poem please discuss, please don't leave me hanging!
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    Re: Love poem

    At first I thought it was talking about parents then it developed into something else contrary to thought...
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    Re: Love poem

    Well, it seems you have put your inner thoughts to the paper. It´s sometimes good way to clear ideas and dreams. Not bad try at this time.
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    From Occupied Palestine:

    We have suffered too much for too long. We will not accept apartheid masked as peace. We will settle for no less than our freedom.



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    Re: Love poem

    format_quote Originally Posted by Mustafa16 View Post
    bump @sister herb if you clicked thumbs up on my poem please discuss, please don't leave me hanging!
    Anyway why write something you have not experienced yet in a halal way

    that's bad research
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    Re: Love poem



    Use them high testerone levels in building your body.

    Allahu alam.
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    Re: Love poem

    format_quote Originally Posted by Serinity View Post


    Use them high testerone levels in building your body.

    Allahu alam.
    omd it's da Serinity

    I should make a love poem about you
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    Re: Love poem

    format_quote Originally Posted by Kiro View Post
    omd it's da Serinity

    I should make a love poem about you
    By taking advantages of testerones, one may even use them to transform one's body, and make one's weakness, into one's strength?

    Too much testerones, and it gets out of control.. However, by using it to train, one can use one's weakness as a source of strength. Right?

    Allahu alam.
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    Meaning of Shirk according to The Qur'an
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    Re: Love poem

    format_quote Originally Posted by Serinity View Post
    By taking advantages of testerones, one may even use them to transform one's body, and make one's weakness, into one's strength?

    Too much testerones, and it gets out of control.. However, by using it to train, one can use one's weakness as a source of strength. Right?

    Allahu alam.
    Youre right, I seriously need to work out....it's just that I haven't in awhile, and I am really weak.....but I guess I need to start small...
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    Re: Love poem

    format_quote Originally Posted by Mustafa16 View Post
    Youre right, I seriously need to work out....it's just that I haven't in awhile, and I am really weak.....but I guess I need to start small...
    One push up per salah

    than more when you're ready
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