I should write, my very old poetry as I wrote them over ten years ago.
Sonnet #1
One day as i walked along the beach
wet yellow sand under my feet
a cold wind blew over my face
blowing bits of sand all over the place
the warm summer sun shining above
filled the place with a glow
a cool wave washed over my feet
calling me to the deep blue sea
I decided to enter it just a bit
and that's what I did
suddenly a huge wave came over me
pulling me deep into the sea
try as I might I couldn't break free
and that was the end of me.
I should write, my very old poetry as I wrote them over ten years ago.
Sonnet #1
One day as i walked along the beach
wet yellow sand under my feet
a cold wind blew over my face
blowing bits of sand all over the place
the warm summer sun shining above
filled the place with a glow
a cool wave washed over my feet
calling me to the deep blue sea
I decided to enter it just a bit
and that's what I did
suddenly a huge wave came over me
pulling me deep into the sea
try as I might I couldn't break free
and that was the end of me.
For some reason, the sea in your poem reminded me of the world; it tempts you with its beauty, eventually attracts you, and then traps you.
That was a great poem [MashaAllah], I want more! =)
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