My Poetry

[Sahabiyaat]

i was cleaning up one day and found an old picture of me and my siblings on eid day , I must have been 8 or 9,were all sitting together, bursting with happiness, lol i cant remember why, but we looked so happpy and innocent, i was inspired to write this short poem.Its about childhood and innocence and dreams, only the way children can dream..If you like it, ill post more of my stuff.Enjoy.




An Old Picture

I look at this picture
its of all four of us
just four
the fifth and sixth
i choose to believe do no exist

Our streching smiles
can only show
our childish joy
that i so miss
How much weve changed
Now, too much we know
they say 'ignorance is bliss'


How big the world
looked back then
uncharted, undiscovered
the very same world
how small it is now
im so suprised


You see those sparkles in our eyes
thats not the cameras flash
those were our dreams, our hopes
and feverant wishes, disguised
in the cameras light.

Smooth unscathed skins
oblivious grins
hide mischevious secrets,
unplanned adventures.


And when we
closed our eye,
we grew wings,
we always knew
we could fly.

 

[Re.TiReD]

:salamext:

That.....is cute oh:

Ahhh man the memories we grow up too fast

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

i choose to believe do no extist

i choose to believe do not exist



you know... when you gain wisdom and knowledge and leave the bad stuff in dunya, you can go back to that old innocense...

 

[Sahabiyaat]

you can go back to that old innocense...

innocence

 

[Güven]

Aww This Was A Beautiful Poem ,

Innocence , InshaAllah Bro ^^

 

[Cabdullahi]

good stuff!

 

[Re.TiReD]

You spelt unscathed wrong also sis

Nah babies are just too innocent, cant ever match that

 

[truemuslim]

^ lol

mashallah cute poem. reminds me of our eid pictures wher we're bursting with happiness. but i kno that was because we get to miss school and go to the masjid. i choose it the other way 'round now

 

[Sahabiyaat]

lol

i know how to spell! its just a typing error,...although i cant say the same for IbnAbdulHakim:X

JazakAllah everybody, im glad you liked it!

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

innocence

pedantic :rollseyes

Nah babies are just too innocent, cant ever match that

i use to look at babies, and then look at my dhaddi, look at babies, then look at my nanny... and honestly the innocense was pretty much teh same except the nanny seemed so wise mashaAllaah

with wisdom comes innocense...

 

[Güven]

Is There Another Spelling Correction Crew Orsomething Stop Correcting People lol :Evil:
It Was A Nice Poem yeah

 

[Re.TiReD]

He really cant spell :X lol

i use to look at babies, and then look at my dhaddi, look at babies, then look at my nanny... and honestly the innocense was pretty much teh same except the nanny seemed so wise mashaAllaah

with wisdom comes innocense...

Yeah I guess I agree to an extent, but there's a certain innocence that comes from not knowing....not knowing about all the evils in the world, the grudges, the arguements, the feuds and cultural rubbish that is soo plaguing the minds of many a fish

 

[Sahabiyaat]

i just had this feeling you were going to bring fish into this somewhere....

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

Yeah I guess I agree to an extent, but there's a certain innocence that comes from not knowing....not knowing about all the evils in the world, the grudges, the arguements, the feuds and cultural rubbish that is soo plaguing the minds of many a fish

to me its greater to know it... and not be affected by it


mashaAllaah what a blessing

 

[Re.TiReD]

i just had this feeling you were going to bring fish into this somewhere....

Sorry sis, its second nature now :-[ But is true though innay. Innocence comes in many forms I guess.

 

[Re.TiReD]

to me its greater to know it... and not be affected by it


mashaAllaah what a blessing

Isnt that difficult? Trying not to get affected by it? Thats why my lil sis is much more innocent, she dont know and she can go to sleep at night dreaming about candy-floss

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

Isnt that difficult? Trying not to get affected by it?

yep only the wise manage it


cant be wise without taqwa...

 

[Sahabiyaat]

actually i cant really percieve any other form of innocence other than childhood.....especially being elderly!.....i think your the least innocent when your elderly! lol , but thats my view...when your old, your too tired to be anything else, so its not really innocence, it more like accepting defeat.

im getting all philosophical....and if i spelt that wrong...dont care!:X

 

[truemuslim]

aw mashallah sis nice poem

*tryna bring it back on topic or the sis will hate u forever for gettin her cute thread closed!*

 

[Re.TiReD]

yep only the wise manage it


cant be wise without taqwa...

so if you fear Allah the evils of this dunya will not get to you...:?

actually i cant really percieve any other form of innocence other than childhood.....especially being elderly!.....i think your the least innocent when your elderly! lol , but thats my view...when your old, your too tired to be anything else, so its not really innocence, it more like accepting defeat.

im getting all philosophical....and if i spelt that wrong...dont care!:X

looll ur sooo mean sis ;D lol you're too tired to do anything else ;D

lol Some elderly people ooze innocence and wisdom you fish. It aint like accepting defeat either. Its just accepting that life will end some day but innocence comes from peace also I guess. So if you're at peace with urself, your Lord then that peace makes you beautiful and seem innocent coz then you dont got no ....I dunno