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[truemuslim]

........

yehh i.. i cry in the rain
soo i .. i get out the pain,
nd my.. my heart got slain
but i.. i aint to complain
no i.. i keep it in a chain
yeh i .. i feel to explain
my cry.. my cry from my vien
nd i.. i aint here to entertain
i try.. i try to maintain
but i.. i just dont obtain
that lie.. no i gotta new train
so i.. i ride on the right lane
yeh i .. i dont try to gain
no reply.. but i do it for the pain

but the reason why i do it
is coz nobody would kno it
yeh there i just admit it
the rain and tears dont split it
it looks like one , ya get it?
so try again and yo get it,
yeh yo, yo throat im gonna slit...


...

yeh i disgust myself .......
i feel so ashamed of myself, dont u?????? no seirously wot is that??

and no i dont really cry in the rain
as u can tell i am just really really really bored...

 

[TrueStranger]

Nice, but i thought tears were reserved for the night, from the prison cells in Walla Walla to the cages of Gitmo. People think you are snoring while you are actually sobbing. :skeleton:

 

[Güven]

whats with all the throat slitting? :Evil:

nice tho:thumbs_up

 

[IbnAbdulHakim]

whoah :| the first part was deep

 

[Ashjan95]

salaam

lovely

nice 1 sis hehe (thats wat am like wen i am bored hehe)

 

[truemuslim]

Nice, but i thought tears were reserved for the night, from the prison cells in Walla Walla to the cages of Gitmo. People think you are snoring while you are actually sobbing. :skeleton:

*sigh* i hate it wen i cant understand some people :-[

whats with all the throat slitting? :Evil:

nice tho:thumbs_up

its called a life nd death threat froma gangsta

whoah :| the first part was deep

psh yeh deep beneath the gangstaless blud?

salaam

lovely

nice 1 sis hehe (thats wat am like wen i am bored hehe)

...thank u

 

[Khayal]

Good one! thanks.




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[noorseeker]

nice use of commas

 

[truemuslim]

nice use of commas

OMG I USED COMMAS!!!!!!!!!
i told u i disgust my self...
time to edit.

tank u for noticing

 

[Nájlá]

lol^

that was a good one :thumbs_up

 

[noorseeker]

OMG I USED COMMAS!!!!!!!!!
i told u i disgust my self...
time to edit.

tank u for noticing

Sorry i meant ful stops. i like how you say a few words of the sentence then you take a pause.

Dont know if you meant it like that:enough!:

 

[truemuslim]

^ yeh i kno, its supposed to be like that. lol
just dont ever notice anymore grammar things other wise i would go insane.

and najla, tanks yo