Unveiled Feelings

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Mashâ'Allâh, it's so beautiful ukhtii.. It's like I can feel all those feelings, and I just wanna cry.. Mashâ'Allâh, you are a very good writer ukhti.. :love:
Hope you add asap!

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libyanhero said:
wow Mashallah thats some amazing writing and very inspirational and beautiful, keep it up

I don't know if this is question is too personal for you but how old are you? if you don't mind saying

you don't have to say if you don't want to but thats some talent, keep it up Mashallah
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I am VERY old brother. Only messing. Errrr, well, lets just say, Im a first year college student.
JazakAllah for the kind words brother.

Allah ma3ak

Ms. Amira said:
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Mashâ'Allâh, it's so beautiful ukhtii.. It's like I can feel all those feelings, and I just wanna cry.. Mashâ'Allâh, you are a very good writer ukhti.. :love:
Hope you add asap!

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JazakAllah for the kind words my darling.

Allah ma3ik:loving:
 
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I wasn't going to write any more, but I was itching to get somwhere with this story. I must warn you, and I am VERY serious. The next part, is....not as good as I thought it'd be. The story is getting pretty....boring....my ideas are running out and I am sorry!!
So, you'll have to live with it I suppose.lol.

*sigh*

I am trying!!

Allah ma3akum
 
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(dnt say I didnt warn you)



I can hear footsteps coming my way; my body feels so weak that I am unable to open my eyes. The footsteps stop! I wait.
They are now beginning to get louder and closer. My mouth now begins to feel dry and my legs feel asleep.
I try to move my legs but they don’t wish to be disturbed. I try to open my eyes, but they don’t wish to be exposed to what may lay ahead. I feel the same feeling of guilt wash over me, which, has once before visited.
Someone is now standing next to me. I don’t know who it is, but I wish to find out.
I disregard the feelings of my eyes and as open them at once, the bright light strikes. Ouch!

My eyes instantly recognise this person. It’s my mother! What is she doing here? I look around and I recognise the colours around me. I’m in my bedroom!
My gaze of utter shock locks into my mothers.

‘Are you okay my dear?’ she asks.
‘Yes mommy…’ I look around. ‘ It was just a dream wasn’t it?’ Tears gather in my eyes, I want to cry my heart out, but a feeling deep down tells me not to.

‘I heard you crying, I thought I ought to come and check in on you,’ mommy says.

I look down and see that I am lying in bed.

‘Yes mommy, it was just….’ I pause. Mother looks at me in question.
‘Yes sweetheart, it was just a nightmare?’
 
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salam
sis doesn't matter, just as long as we all get to read your excellent stories
when are you going to post it? soon?
wasalam
 
salaam
mashallah sis that is extraodinary talent. i cant describe it. its so sad and yet so....
wassalaam
 
aisha said:
salaam
mashallah sis that is extraodinary talent. i cant describe it. its so sad and yet so....
wassalaam
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Argghhh...sis, u dnt understand, its getting worse by the day. It really is. Its annoying me. Im out of ideas. Well, I have sum but I think itll make the story really really boring. Its getting pretty boring as it is.....


Allah ma3ik
 
salam
lol sis i posted as soon as you posted yours, so i didn't know
mashallah the story is good but i'd rather you foucus more on makkah and the Kabah
wasalam
 
salaam
no sis its not boring. really. maybe if you take a break it'll be easier to write afterwards?
wassalaam
ps chek ur inbox.
 
metsudaistwice said:
salam
mashallah the story is good but i'd rather you foucus more on makkah and the Kabah
wasalam
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TSI proves it going down the drain.*akh!!*

Allah ma3ak
p.s:in the story, I realise Im at home. Im in england, brother. It breaks my heart to realise it was all JUST a dream = so I wish to cry. But deep down, I know not to!
 
salam
ok sis jazakallah, what does TSI mean? and sis maybe you should take a break and then write more about makkah and kabah
jazakallah
wasalam
 
ooh wooow im stunned siss masha allah ur soo good maybe you should be a writer, i bet u would make a great writer
where ever did u come up with such good and touching senteses, it made me almost cry actualy it did make me cry it wass sooooo soooo beautifuly writen

masha allah sis keep up it up:)
 
Angel said:
ooh wooow im stunned siss masha allah ur soo good maybe you should be a writer, i bet u would make a great writer
where ever did u come up with such good and touching senteses, it made me almost cry actualy it did make me cry it wass sooooo soooo beautifuly writen

masha allah sis keep up it up:)
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I just put pen to paper and write to my hearts content. Whenever I feel unhappy, I imagine myself performing Umrah and the thoughts and feelings come straight away.

I am glad you enjoyed it.:)
I hope to produce a better story-inshAllah.

Wasalam
 
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Wow mashaAllah sis! I'm almost speechless... So much talent subhanAllah. Plz don't give up writing.
 
Muslimah_Sis said:
Wow mashaAllah sis! I'm almost speechless... So much talent subhanAllah. Plz don't give up writing.
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JazakAllah sister.
I am trying to write another story but I really want the grammer to be perfect. So, it may be a while until my next story is released. InshAllah.

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Syed Nizam said:
[BANANA]hahaha, couldn't agree more than that...;D [/BANANA]
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Actually, writing stories is a hobby but is not part of my studies.
I will take back what I said earlier and will continue my studies in Science.inshAllah.

Just a reminder: Please no off topic (or free posting).

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Ameeratul Layl said:
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Actually, writing stories is a hobby but is not part of my studies.
I will take back what I said earlier and will continue my studies in Science.inshAllah.

Just a reminder: Please no off topic (or free posting).

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Dont get me wrong. Surely a hobby is more like a passion. Where there is passion, there is some beauty in it. That's all. I'm from the science background, but i did appreciate some aspects of literature. I supposed all of us needs some kind of variety in life....:thankyou:
 
Ameeratul Layl said:
:sl:
Actually, writing stories is a hobby but is not part of my studies.
I will take back what I said earlier and will continue my studies in Science.inshAllah.

Just a reminder: Please no off topic (or free posting).

:w:
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more stories sis plz pretty plzz
me want more stories NOW:grumbling HEHEHEH i can be very demanding
but plz do write i enjopy ur stories, they make me remember who i am and wat i am made for. more sroties plzzz:) :)
 

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