*Poetry Contest - The Poems*

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Vote ur fave poem please

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I skipped :embarrass but I really liked the poem "sincerity". It was short and sweet :statisfie
:thumbs_up to whoever wrote it! :D
 
:sl:

im stuck between poem 3 and poem 4! :hmm:

i cant choose.

maybe i'll just go eenie meenie minie mo. :embarrass
 
Hafsah said:
Poem 3


he tries to smile as his eyes well up in tears,
and i can feel on his shoulders a mountain of fears..

for i heard that brother whisper inside
"My lord forgive me.. for that which i hide..."
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Hafsah said:
Poem 4

His face shone like light, as if witnessing something beyond his dreams
A smile played on his lips as he enjoyed the delight of eternity

A concession to the terrors of a Great Day he was given
In the heart of a green bird he took residence
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^ my favourite lines. masha'allah.
 
i wasnt annoyed, i find people getting annoyed very annoying lol




reminder:


people vote !
 
Hafsah said:
Votes are public, u have three days to vote, please do not vote ur own entry or u will succeed in fishing me off. Thank you very much.
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What part of the above do some people not understand? :raging: I think I'm going to have to get an admin to delete one of the votes insha'Allah.
 
Hafsah said:
What part of the above do some people not understand? :raging: I think I'm going to have to get an admin to delete one of the votes insha'Allah.
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lol ;D

i finally voted... kinda reluctantly tho but in the end i went for poem 3 coz that was the one i could relate to i guess but i wish i could have voted for poem 4 as well. imsad
 
I was thinking of moving poll to helpdesk and getting mods to vote so that the winner can be announced later, we'll see though insha'Allah. If votes remain as they are we'll probably just have a 1st place winner and maybe a 2nd. That sound ok?
 
Hafsah said:
I was thinking of moving poll to helpdesk and getting mods to vote so that the winner can be announced later, we'll see though insha'Allah. If votes remain as they are we'll probably just have a 1st place winner and maybe a 2nd. That sound ok?
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:sl: fishface

i cant believe it, the number of voters is dismal. imsad

i didnt expect that at all. :skeleton:

i thought this forum loved poetry. i must have imagined it. :hmm:
 
ajnabee said:
:sl: fishface

i cant believe it, the number of voters is dismal. imsad

i didnt expect that at all. :skeleton:

i thought this forum loved poetry. i must have imagined it. :hmm:
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Wa'alaykum As-Salam shutkiface

I cant blv it either, but its always been like this. Which is why I prefer Ummah for contests :skeleton: mefinks you dreamt it, some of the old poets of LI have left now or are too busy, masha'Allah at all the entries tho I guess, and ur one to talk, you didnt even enter!
 
Hafsah said:
Wa'alaykum As-Salam shutkiface

I cant blv it either, but its always been like this. Which is why I prefer Ummah for contests :skeleton: mefinks you dreamt it, some of the old poets of LI have left now or are too busy, masha'Allah at all the entries tho I guess, and ur one to talk, you didnt even enter!
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shutkiface? awwww thats so sweet :wub: i lub shutki! :D

anyways back to topic, yeah when we had ummah poetry contest, there was a lot of interest in it by the forum and like 50million voters... ok maybe not 50million, more like 50 odd but still... :nervous:

i didnt enter because i feel shy here :embarrass n i knew i couldnt compete against the LI poets who in my opinion are just woweeee masha'allah. :statisfie
 

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