English learners

[Who Am I?]

I think university education should be free for anyone that wants it. I don't think you should have to pay for it.

But that's another topic for another day.

 

[Riana17]

I never went to university to study for the very simple reason that I came from a poor family that could not afford the university fees.

Salam
same here we had a hard life and even if we had money I dont want to go to university haha!
I am lazy at studying, I'd like to work and work, but now I am forcing to learn Arabic inshallah

Pls make Duaa for me brothers and sisters, coz I wanna go to Umrah and Hajj with Arabic knowledge inshallah

 

[Pure Purple]

Sis safiya chalo mai essay likhti hun
Topic..Embarrassing moment of my life
I have a very bad habit that when I used to study I really got Involved seriously I forget what is happening around me.If I am solving some mathematics sum until I get answer I don't move to next problem..
Once I was solving mathematics sum,the door bell rang.I got frustrated If someone disturb during my studies.I move towards door.One man was standing and he was asking for keys of his house.(one of my neighbor stays in foreign only during vacation they come for few days ,they keep one set of keys with us.so that if their if relatives come we can give them)
I move towards key stand where all the keys were hanging.I took the key...but I was continuously thinking about that mathematics sum's solution.I opened the door partially so that only my hand can pass thorough that and I move my hand forward.Again thinking about that sums..after some time I realize I am standing here for how much time why the hell this man is not taking the keys.Then I opened the door with a bang fully.I look towards him with very FRUSTRATED,ANGRY,i don't have words DEADLY DANGEROUS LOOK??and he was continuously looking towards my hand in which I was holding keys..His expression was very weird,his mouth was partially open,his eyes was protruding outwards..?
Then I look towards my hand..OOOOPS It was a nail cutter..
Instead of taking keys I took nail cutter..
for few seconds I was not in situation what should I do now??
then I took the keys correctly and saw that man was trying to control on laughter but he was not able to do that.He was looking downwards..
I know what he must be thinking about me at that point"THIS GIRL IS TOTALLY MAD"
phew ..ho gaya itna sa likhne ke liye mujhe 15 minute lage..
Chalo ab mujhe correction batao safiya

 

[Innocent Soul]

I have a very bad habit that when I used to study I really got Involved seriously

It's not a bad habit. I too have this habit.

I got frustrated If someone disturb during my studies

Mujhe lagta hai ke agar aap generally baat kar rahi hai ke 'mujhe bohot gussa aata hai jab koi mujhe padhte waqt koi pareshan karta hai' to aap ko 'get' use karna chahiye. aur agar aap keh rahi hai ke 'mujhe bohot gussa aaya tha' to aap to 'got' use karna chahiye.

I move towards key stand

'moved' kiyunki aap maazi (past) ki baat kar rahi thi.

thorough

'through' bolna chahiye kyunki thorough ka meaning kuch aur hai.

I look towards him

'looked' kiyunki maazi (past) ki baat ho rahi hai.
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Aap ne bohot ache alfaz istemaal kiye hai :thankyou:. Bas thodi aur practise ke baad achi tarah aur galdi likhna aa jayega. Mein ne apni puri koshish ki galtiya nikalne ki hew. Agar mujh se koi galti ho gaye to meherbani ka ke maaf kar dena :hiding:. Other urdu members who are good at English can also point out the mistakes in sis Rahila's post and my also.

 

[abdussattar]

my also.

MINE also

until I get answer I don't move to next problem

It should be like "I don't move to the next problem until I get the answer" because the reason cannot be before the assertion(the statement)

(one of my neighbor stays in foreign only during vacation they come for few days ,they keep one set of keys with us.so that if their if relatives come we can give them)

It should be "one of my neighbours(since you have many neighbors, but you are mentioning one among them) stays in a foreign city/county/land.Only during vacations they come for few days / They come only for a few days during vacations (I think the second variation to be more appropriate, though first one is not wrong) they keep one set of keys with us (fullstop should not come) so that if their if relatives come we can give them.

Just pointing out that you rightly said "one set of keys" but forgot that rule while writing "one of my neighbor"

after some time I realize I am standing here for how much time why the hell this man is not taking the keys.

Should be "after some time I realize that I am standing here for such a long time / how long I've been standing here why the hell is this man not taking the keys.

I look towards him with very FRUSTRATED,ANGRY,

I think you meant "I looked towards him with very FRUSTRATED,ANGRY, look/face/expression.

eyes was protruding outwards..?

eyes are plural so were, protruding just out, not outwards.
"eyes were protruding out?"

for few seconds I was not in situation what should I do now??

It should be "for few seconds I was in the situation what should I do now??"
since you were in the thinking what should you do, so the not shouldn't come.

control on laughter

it should be control laughter. On shouldn't be used.


Hope you have fun improving english




Note:- I am not an english teacher

 

[Innocent Soul]

MINE also

I really thought after seeing my post that maybe it should be mine but I thought maybe while trying to point out mistakes in sis Rahila's post I am thinking too much :heated:.

 

[Who Am I?]

I never studied in school. I always found something else to do.

 

[Pure Purple]

Hope you have fun improving english

jazakallah brother. for giving correction
SAFIYA kya correction ki tum ne...Tum to mujh se bhi zeyada gayi-guzri nikli.
English bhi nahi aati...kya hoga is desh ka future?

 

[Innocent Soul]

kya hoga is desh ka future?

Is desh ke logon ko jab t.v dekhne se fursat milegi to log padhenge. ^o) Meri ek galti aap ko itni badi lagi. Insaan apni galtio se sekhta hai aur mujhe bohot khushi hai ki main ne ye galti ki kyunki agar mein ye galti asli dunya men karti :uuh:.

 

[Pure Purple]

Is desh ke logon ko jab t.v dekhne se fursat milegi to log padhenge.

kya yum T.V dekhti ho??Mujhe to itni boring lagti hai..10-15 minute channel change karke dekhne ke baad ya to cartoon ya t.v band..Idiot Box me kuch nahi aata..

Meri ek galti aap ko itni badi lagi.

mai us galti ki baat nahi kar rahi hun..Brother ne mujhe kitni galtiyan batai aur tumhe sab kuch mere post me sahi nazar aya..Ankhon ka checkup karao..mujhe lag raha hai tumhare chashme ka number badh gaya hai..
Meri English kamzor isliye hai ki school tak waise bhi English to mashallah thi ..phir 11th 12th maine English ke lectures hi nahi attend nahi kiye..shuroo me 11th me ki phir uske bad meri ek friend ko English ka lecture bahot achcha lagta tha..to English ke sab lectures attend karti thi..pata nahi usme use kya achcha lagta tha.Woh pure do sal meri English ki proxy lagayi aur mai uski maths me.use maths nahi pasand tha.Alhumdulliah aur meri proxy sirf ek bar hi pakdi gayi.phir kya hua woh alag story ..Us waqt mujhe apni friend bahot achchi lagi..Lekin ab aisa lag raha hai agar usne mera sath nahi diya hota to aaj meri English Itni kamzor nahi hoti.
Lekin tumhari English ko kya hua safiya?

 

[Innocent Soul]

kya yum T.V dekhti ho?

Nahi. TV dekhne se time barbaad hone ke alawa kuch nahi hota hai.

Lekin tumhari English ko kya hua safiya?

:clever: Aap ko kya lagta hai aap mujhe is tarah pareshan karne ki KOSHISH karenge aur mein pareshan ho jayongi to aap ghalat soch rahi hai .

Aur aap se kahani ke taaluq mein mujhe ye story yaad aa gaye .

A man found a cocoon for a butterfly. One day a small opening appeared, he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through the little hole.

Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and could go no farther. Then the man decided to help the butterfly.

He took a pair of scissors and snipped the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly then emerged easily.

Something was strange. The butterfly had a swollen body and shriveled wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body, which would contract in time.

Neither happened. In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and deformed wings. It was never able to fly.

What the man in his kindness and haste did not understand, was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the small opening of the cocoon are God's way of forcing fluid rom the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.

Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life.

If God allowed us to go through all our life without any obstacles, that would cripple us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been.

Not only that, we could never fly.

 

[Pure Purple]

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Aap ko kya lagta hai aap mujhe is tarah pareshan karne ki KOSHISH karenge aur mein pareshan ho jayongi to aap ghalat soch rahi hai .

Bhale hi tum -----badi ho lekin tum meri dost ho.Mai tumhe kiyon pareshan karungi.?;D;D
Ye kahani tum ne mere liye post ki hai?kis bare me meri kuch samajh me nahi aaya?+o(
..Itni badi kahani padhne ka kuch faida nahi hua^o)
..
koi Naya topic do mai us par kuch likhungi.:statisfie

 

[Innocent Soul]

^ aap ka kuch bhi likhna ka man kar raha ho to likheye kiyunki mujhe aesa lagta hai ki agar hum apne dil ki baat kahe to mazmoon bohot acha lagta hai .

 

[Pure Purple]

Sis safiya I don't have anything to write..I want to learn english..
..I am going to write a story which I had studied in my school ..It is very senti story..Childish but I like it..
It is a story of ancient times ,a boy who was living in a village.His father was expire when he was kid.His mother was doing work at homes in a village as a maid .But it was very difficult for her to manage household expense.But she has to manage.After ramadan, night before Eid was excited for a boy.All his friend was very excited because tomorrow will be Eid.Every body was discussing about what they will be going to wear.Boy came very happily to his mother and started asking about what he will going to wear.His mother was kept silence.She don't had money to buy a new cloth.When boy slept she took one of his old white cloth and make that blue by using cloth Ink.When boy was awake in morning she showed him that cloth and said I buy this new cloth for you.His mother gave him 5 paise as a eidy .Boy was very happy.Boy went to Eid gaah and prayed Eid salah .After they went to fair.All his friends were buying toys ,sweets etc..boy was very confuse what to buy .He was having only 5 paisa.He can buy only 1 thing.After taking careful observation he bought a tong for his mother. he came back to home he gave tongs to his mother.his mother ask why you bought this.he told I am seeing you when you are cooking you don't have tongs because of that your hands were burned.That is why I brought this for you.His mother broke into tears .
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Safiya check karo.Ye kahani bahot achchi hai par use mai english sahi se likh nahi payi.

 

[Innocent Soul]

expire

'expired' because we are talking about past.

a boy who was living in a village.

'who used to live in a village.' Agar aap 'living' istemal karengi to present (fil waqt) ki baat ho jayegi.

he will going to wear.

'what he will be wearing' or 'what he is going to wear'.

After ramadan, night before Eid was excited for a boy.

'On the night before Eid he was excited for Eid'. 'Eid was excited for him' ka matlab hai. eid ek ladke ke liye excited lekin yaha par ladka eid ke liye excited hai.

She don't had money to buy a new cloth.

I don't/do not = Present
I didn't/did not = Past

I am seeing you when you are cooking you don't have tongs because of that your hands were burned.

'I always see when you cook you don't have tongs because of it your hands burn.' Mere khayal ye sentence hona chahiye .

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:><: Hai mein ne bhi ye kahani bachpan mein padi thi . Mashallah :thankyou: aap to bohot mehnat kar rahi hai. Aur Agar mujh se koi galti ho gayee ya phir mein ne kuch zyada hi galtiya nikali to meherbani kar ke maaf kar dena :nervous:. Inshallah mein bhi kabhi fursat mein kuch likhungi yaha par.

 

[Kas1m]

lol jo bhi hai, wo nail cutter wali story barri mazahia thi lol aisa kon sa maths ka sum hai jis se aadmi ko chaabi nail cutter lagti hai lol rahila superb

 

[Pure Purple]

Hai mein ne bhi ye kahani bachpan mein padi thi . Mashallah aap to bohot mehnat kar rahi hai. Aur Agar mujh se koi galti ho gayee ya phir mein ne kuch zyada hi galtiya nikali to me

Jazakallah..
Any good sites to learn English?imsad

lol jo bhi hai, wo nail cutter wali story barri mazahia thi lol aisa kon sa maths ka sum hai jis se aadmi ko chaabi nail cutter lagti hai lol rahila superb

Pata nahi mujhe sahi se yad nahi hai?shayad woh Integration ka problem tha.

 

[Innocent Soul]

Mujhe thodi si sites mili agar aap ko pasand nahi aai to .
http://www.tolearnenglish.com/
http://www.urduhome.net/category/learn-to-speak-basic-english-from-urdu/

 

[Pure Purple]

Mujhe thodi si sites mili agar aap ko pasand nahi aai to .
http://www.tolearnenglish.com/
http://www.urduhome.net/category/lea...ish-from-urdu/

nahi achchi nahi haiimsad.Aisa kuch jaha par moderators hote ho check karne ke liye.

 

[Innocent Soul]

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Aap be koi classes Lena shuru kiya? Sirf books padh kar bhi seekh sakti hai.