Rhymes By Simply Logical

my confession...

this is my confession where i must confess,
the way i feel words cant even express,
i love it when we cuddle n caress,
when we talk about our stress,
without you id be a mess,
without you id wanna live less,
when i aint with ya i dont feel content,
maybe itz cuz for me you were sent,
maybe itz cuz together we were always meant,
i dont believe in karma,
ya help me thru all the drama,
when i lose my temper ya make me feel calmer,
ya whisper right into my ear,
ya tell me what i wanna hear,
through the mist ya makes it appear all clear,
ya make me relax when im full of anxiety n fear,
ya there for me thru the sunshine n rain,
ya there for me thru the heartache n pain,
for ya im ready to make any sacrifice,
maybe itz cuz ya amazin n so d-a-m-n nice,
ill be the first to admit,
to you its so easy to commit,
i dont care about any other ladies,
i want ya to be the mother of my babies,
i want ya to be my wife,
i want ya to complete my life...
 
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Simply_Logical said:
my confession...

this is my confession where i must confess,
the way i feel words cant even express,
i love it when we cuddle n caress,
when we talk about our stress,
without you id be a mess,
without you id wanna live less,
when i aint with ya i dont feel content,
maybe itz cuz for me you were sent,
maybe itz cuz together we were always meant,
i dont believe in karma,
ya help me thru all the drama,
when i lose my temper ya make me feel calmer,
ya whisper right into my ear,
ya tell me what i wanna hear,
through the mist ya makes it appear all clear,
ya make me relax when im full of anxiety n fear,
ya there for me thru the sunshine n rain,
ya there for me thru the heartache n pain,
for ya im ready to make any sacrifice,
maybe itz cuz ya amazin n so **** nice,
ill be the first to admit,
to you its so easy to commit,
i dont care about any other ladies,
i want ya to be the mother of my babies,
i want ya to be my wife,
i want ya to complete my life...
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new poem bro??? its different to say the least lol

na its good your good at expressing emotions and feelings through your poetry
 
muslim007 said:
new poem bro??? its different to say the least lol

na its good your good at expressing emotions and feelings through your poetry
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nah i wrote that poem some time ago now, just have quiet a few poems to still post lol

yea i like to keep it real with the poetry...
 
Simply_Logical said:
nah i wrote that poem some time ago now, just have quiet a few poems to still post lol

yea i like to keep it real with the poetry...
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yeah well make sure you do post the few poems that you haven't posted yet lol, would love to read more inshallah

you thought about doing youtube vids on your poems???

didn't brother umar mention that idea to you??
 
muslim007 said:
yeah well make sure you do post the few poems that you haven't posted yet lol, would love to read more inshallah

you thought about doing youtube vids on your poems???

didn't brother umar mention that idea to you??
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well i created a facebook page and i started to gain a bit of interest,
one guy who has quiet a big following on facebook he offered for me to do a video so we could post it on his page and link my facebook page to the video,
i dont know i wasnt sure at the time and facebook felt a bit long winded at the time so i just closed my facebook page up...

part of me is thinking of maybe doing it again but im not sure, take it as it comes lol
 
Simply_Logical said:
well i created a facebook page and i started to gain a bit of interest,
one guy who has quiet a big following on facebook he offered for me to do a video so we could post it on his page and link my facebook page to the video,
i dont know i wasnt sure at the time and facebook felt a bit long winded at the time so i just closed my facebook page up...

part of me is thinking of maybe doing it again but im not sure, take it as it comes lol
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dude your mad if that kind of offer comes up again then go for it inshallah, people read poetry to escape from their problems and also can relate to it in a very poetic way, you get my drift???lol

if you were to make a video would it be like rapping it out and that or have quite sound music like only voice backup singers and that lol
 
muslim007 said:
dude your mad if that kind of offer comes up again then go for it inshallah, people read poetry to escape from their problems and also can relate to it in a very poetic way, you get my drift???lol

if you were to make a video would it be like rapping it out and that or have quite sound music like only voice backup singers and that lol
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well he did say to me he's been on facebook for years and videos help to get you out there a bit more,
then i thought if peeps see my ugly mug they wont want to know about the poetry lol

yea i get where you're coming from, i do think you can really touch peeps through words but although its words it has to be sincere, you can tell if its fake

honestly not sure how the video would come out, i have considered making a youtube channel and stuff though, not sure whats holding me back exactly..
 
like a drug so addictive...

i aint gonna tell any lies,
before we even realise,
feelings startin to arise,
temperatures startin to rise,
i can feel the chemistry,
shes puttin me out my misery,
she so gentle,
sweet n sentimental,
full of love n passion,
mercy n compassion,
when it comes to fashion,
so sultry n attractive,
cool, calm n collective,
like a drug so addictive,
maybe its cuz those amazin eyes,
or maybe cuz she never tells any lies

shes from the big city,
shes so amazin n pretty,
to me its apparent,
shes full of talent,
ill tell ya the reality,
i love her mentality,
id be tellin lies,
if i said shes doesnt give me butterflies,
i cant lie i must confess,
i cant think of her any less,
shes always on my mind,
shes so sweet n kind,
shes one of a kind,
this love is makin me blind,
someone like her i didnt think id find,
we got this natural connection,
for each other we got this natural affection...
 
a nobody...

isnt it funny n strange,
how people easily change,
actin like theyre ya friend,
they jus act n pretend,
as a matter of fact,
all they do is act,
id rather live life lonely,
instead of with these fakers so phony,

sorry to be blunt,
i aint the type to front,
now whether its a admirer or a hater,
sooner or later,
the true colours show n appear,
over time their intentions become crystal clear,

on these peeps i got no time to waste,
in ma mouth they leave a bitter taste,
they leave a bad taste on the tip of my tongue,
theyre straight up weak not strong,
i hate these people with passion,
they dont deserve any mercy n compassion,

attitude of some peeps drive me mental,
sick of those peeps so judgemental,
lookin down on other cuz of their sins,
do they really think theyve never committed any sins?

sick of those who dont practice yet preach,
sick of those that preach yet never teach,
sick of those leeches that leech,
those blood suckers will suck ya blood till ya dry,
they just wanna see ya die,
wanna see ya soul leave your body,
wanna see ya become deceased a nobody...
 
A Disease Called Pride...

dont ya eva for a second wonder,
give yaself a second n ponder,
that ya claim to judge by whats apparent,
cant ya see ya own sins arent they apparent?
its funny cuz ya quick to tell others n remind,
but when it comes to yaself ya suddenly blind,
ya think ur on the straight n everyone is astray,
just cuz ya sin in a different way,
ya mentality is straight up deluded,
this conclusion was easily concluded,
at least ill be me, myself n i,
until the day day i die,
another day im livin,
is another day im sinnin,
im full of bad deeds,
thats something i can admit n concede,
but ya goin on like youve got heaven guarenteed,
peeps like me dont even think about heaven,
cuz we think about hell twenty four seven,
in the hereafter ya assume youll flourish,
ya look down at me ya assume ill get punished,
so much for being humble,
a couple of devilish whispers n ya crumble,
ya cant even see that inside,
ya got a disease called pride...​
 
skeletons in the closet...

aint no coincedence,
that ya full of arrogance,
now that ya started to pray,
ya lookin at peeps in a certain way,
on ya face ya have a frown,
all ya do is look down,
ya so quick to judge others,
who are you to judge ya sisters n brothers,
ya think youre the only one on the straight,
if anyone disagrees ya hate,
ya stick with ya clan,
dont take knowledge from no other man
ya quick to put all ya eggs in one basket,
dont forget we'll be on our own in the casket,

all ya do is look down on us,
thinkin ya so righteous,
the devils whispering n grinnin,
ya dont realise pride is winnin,
whilst ya lookin down on those sinnin,
ya dont realise your the one whos sinnin,
ya may give in charity,
but ya lack humility,
ya forgot GOD's given ya the ability,
without GOD ya wouldnt have the capability,
now that ya started to fast,
ya forgot about ya past?
ya decided to close it,
the door to ya closet,
dont mean youve got no skeletons in the closet...
 
:sl: cool poetry! This is mine :X

I look at the time it's exam time
Heart pumping from all over the artery
I almost forgot what the subject is going to be
Tick tock, tick tock I'm at the exam hall
Waiting for my paper nervously
Silently watching other people writing down freely
Did I study, did I sleep or did I fool around lazily?
Whatever it is I'm not getting out of this easily

Tick tock, tick tock why is it dark?
Why is so dark and dusty?
Why can't I move around freely?
Is this the end of my life?
I'm shaking nervously,
For the next test is going to be judged by the Almighty..
 
Samiun said:
:sl: cool poetry! This is mine :X

I look at the time it's exam time
Heart pumping from all over the artery
I almost forgot what the subject is going to be
Tick tock, tick tock I'm at the exam hall
Waiting for my paper nervously
Silently watching other people writing down freely
Did I study, did I sleep or did I fool around lazily?
Whatever it is I'm not getting out of this easily

Tick tock, tick tock why is it dark?
Why is so dark and dusty?
Why can't I move around freely?
Is this the end of my life?
I'm shaking nervously,
For the next test is going to be judged by the Almighty..
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good stuff bro, keep it up :ma:
 
oh my lord...

oh my lord,
love youve always showed,
ive just always ignored,
ive been so blind,
to me youve been so kind,
without me liftin anything,
you gave me everything,
youve given me seconds, hours n days,
for me to change my ways,
i dont wanna go astray,
sometimes i feel like im a stray,
my lord this world has me stressed,
forgive me my lord for i have transgressed,
my time on this earth is gettin thinner,
done so many sins im such a sinner,
if i die with faith then im a winner,

good deeds i hardly have any,
bad deeds i have too many,
i may not have always paid heed,
but ive always believed,
in your oneness n tawheed,
i hope for your mercy,
from this world so bloodthirsty,
when im hungry n thirsty,
its you who provides for the bill,
when i go to pay at the till,
when i knock back a pill,
you give the cure through ur will,
i could have ended up born still,
but you gave me life n free will,
yet i still neglect your rules n regulations,
even though im under the best of nations,
im goin thru trials n tribulations,
you wanna test me cuz heaven aint free,
may have an education or degree,
but ill never understand the wisdom of ur decree,

im not after material gain or fame,
i just want the angels to know my name,
dont care about makin money n profits,
just want to be with the companions n prophets,
so im hopeful that hopefully,
the angel of death will take my soul peacefully,
like when you remove a petal,
in my grave i hope i easily settle,
ill be returnin to my roots,
heaven will be full of amazin fruits,
gardens under which rivers flow,
id tell u to picture it but youll never know,
your mind cant even comprehend,
the rewards that he will send,
to those who were sincere n didnt pretend,

in life so many feelins ive felt,
cant beat the one when my knees are knelt,
when i prostrate my heart will always melt,
before my lord you i couldnt recognise,
but now i realise,
i was livin a life full of lies,
ignorin my lord n creator,
like i wont return to him sooner or later,
to you ill be soon coming,
so forgive me for my shortcomings,
life is a ruff ride full of bumps,
when i hear your words it gives me goosebumps,
makes the hair rise on my neck,
gives me a reality check,
that death is the destroyer of pleasures,
when i return to you i hope its full of heavens treasures​
 
Death...

death soon we will meet,
death i wonder how youll greet,
death ya kinda surreal n strange,
death when i think of ya i wanna change,
death before ya come ill try to prepare,
death i dont know how ill fare,
death this life im livin aint fair,
death your so close its like i already stare,
death youll take me without even a care,
death will ya take me whilst im young or got white hair,
death will ya come up on me n creep,
death will ya take me whilst im asleep?

death sometimes i forget ya cuz im ignorant,
death sometimes i fotget ya cuz im arrogant,
death why doesnt nobody like to talk about you?
death your the only thing in life thats really true,
death is when ya got no where to run n hide,
death is when its the end of the ride,
death i wonder how ya taste,
death my time i hope i didnt waste,
death youve followed me since i was born,
death it doesnt matter if im on my own,
death on the journey youll take me all alone

death over me one day youll have a tight grip,
death i hope that day the testimony is on my lips,
death when ya seperate my body n soul,
death six foot down is where ill fall,
death into that deep dark hole,
death when im deep in that soil,
death hope i dont get in deep turmoil,
death youll take me deep down in my grave,
death my lord is the only one who can save,
death is when ill return to my lord as a slave
 
Simply_Logical said:
oh my lord...

oh my lord,
love youve always showed,
ive just always ignored,
ive been so blind,
to me youve been so kind,
without me liftin anything,
you gave me everything,
youve given me seconds, hours n days,
for me to change my ways,
i dont wanna go astray,
sometimes i feel like im a stray,
my lord this world has me stressed,
forgive me my lord for i have transgressed,
my time on this earth is gettin thinner,
done so many sins im such a sinner,
if i die with faith then im a winner,

good deeds i hardly have any,
bad deeds i have too many,
i may not have always paid heed,
but ive always believed,
in your oneness n tawheed,
i hope for your mercy,
from this world so bloodthirsty,
when im hungry n thirsty,
its you who provides for the bill,
when i go to pay at the till,
when i knock back a pill,
you give the cure through ur will,
i could have ended up born still,
but you gave me life n free will,
yet i still neglect your rules n regulations,
even though im under the best of nations,
im goin thru trials n tribulations,
you wanna test me cuz heaven aint free,
may have an education or degree,
but ill never understand the wisdom of ur decree,

im not after material gain or fame,
i just want the angels to know my name,
dont care about makin money n profits,
just want to be with the companions n prophets,
so im hopeful that hopefully,
the angel of death will take my soul peacefully,
like when you remove a petal,
in my grave i hope i easily settle,
ill be returnin to my roots,
heaven will be full of amazin fruits,
gardens under which rivers flow,
id tell u to picture it but youll never know,
your mind cant even comprehend,
the rewards that he will send,
to those who were sincere n didnt pretend,

in life so many feelins ive felt,
cant beat the one when my knees are knelt,
when i prostrate my heart will always melt,
before my lord you i couldnt recognise,
but now i realise,
i was livin a life full of lies,
ignorin my lord n creator,
like i wont return to him sooner or later,
to you ill be soon coming,
so forgive me for my shortcomings,
life is a ruff ride full of bumps,
when i hear your words it gives me goosebumps,
makes the hair rise on my neck,
gives me a reality check,
that death is the destroyer of pleasures,
when i return to you i hope its full of heavens treasures​
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subhan'Allah beautiful poem, felt emotional reading it..........masha'Allah
 

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