my first poem in english after my sister's died may allah have mercy on her soul

[Umm Malik]

my first poem in english after my sister's died
i write in arabic but in english this is the first one
i hope to correct me and give me your opinion about it
jazakum allahu khairan
When my eyes was full of tears
When my head destroyed
When I say oh allah please
Please be by my side
When my life get so hard
and my happiness stopped
When I see everything as bad
When I lose my hope
just Hajoura come to me
Everything gets better
her speaks in my heart is
Like the need of water
When my sister Hadjer speaks
When she asks or sings
When she draws or writes or reads
I forget everything
Hadjer left and she let me
But her sounds yet rests
And allah is still with me
I have learned from the past
She is a gift to me from Him
And to Him she has returned
she has become like a dream
Like the sun and moon
I will meet you for sure one day
And you can hug me
You will meet me and you will say
That you are missed me
maryam rahmouni

my sister's photo

she was disabled in her feet
she was dream to be a daiiyah

her program of the day

 

[LaSorcia]

Hugs to you. I am so sorry for your loss. What a sweet and precious child. God have mercy on you and her. She will love jumping and running in Jannah. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt poem with us.

 

[Umm Malik]

Hugs to you. I am so sorry for your loss. What a sweet and precious child. God have mercy on you and her. She will love jumping and running in Jannah. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt poem with us.

thank you soooo much sister for this good reply
yes subhanallah she want to see her lord with her disability to tell him your creation and your gift to me is better to me then my dream of walking and allah accept her douaa and take her soul before healing in the last surgery
she was like my self
she was tell me i am updating version of you .... she was my heart