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...HOWEVA...
you gotta realise things are not foreva!
if you put the hard work in
and stop livin a life of sin
you may be of those
who Allah chose
to live in the time of Isa
dont be ungrateful, coz as Awlaki said
we're one lucky ummah!
all the hardships we face
will only help us pave
our path to Jannah
INSHA'ALLAH!​
 
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InshaAllah, if we just opened our eyes
realised, ALlahs watchin from above the skies
despite our sins he sustains us
respite he gives and guides us
but do we love him like we should?
would you do more knowin that you could !​
 
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we need to do more, with the hereafter in mind
forget the kuffar ways, coz they'll only bind...
...your heart and soul in the ways of Iblis
remember Allah and your heart will find its peace
when you feel you cant go on and nobody sees to care...
you gotta pray to Allah coz He's always there
but when things go good
you forget who helped you when things were rough
you play your partwhen others find it tough
and you'll see the blessings from up above :)​
 
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these words givin me a strong feeling
but how long will it last
i wanna help this ummah in its healing
but my heart keeps sealing
wiv all this fitnah subhanAllah
wiv all this how can i get to jannah..​
 
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when we're faced with troubles we moan and lament
but yo, you gotta grieve and repent
when seeing the troubles that are sent
to our brothers who are innoCENT!​
 
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i was weaned on them hip hop streets,
with them hip hop beats,
now, hip hop meets islam,
greets it with open arms,
this is my way of dawah,
some say its a waste of time,
when they see me spit a rhyme,
say my dawah aint worth a dime

why dont we do a freestyle competiotn? split into teams? whos up for it?
 
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i only rhyme hoping to wake
those who treat islam like its fake
for gods sake
who gives much more then he takes
so stay strong and dont let yourself break​
 
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IbnAbdulHakim said:
i only rhyme hoping to wake
those who treat islam like its fake
for gods sake
who gives much more then he takes
so stay strong and dont let yourself break​
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But brake from cake high stakes state our fate
Dont wait 'for it'll be to late to escape
Take this moment dont postpone it till a later date
Allah be great my mate Allah be the highest companion
Above horizons 7 heavens see His hijab light of many colours
A fright for disbelievers a joy for many scholars
The day not long away
To be dealt the reward of the good and punishment of those astray​



His hijab refering to Allah usin light on the time when the Prophet peace be upon him went up to Him
 
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Salaams

here is something i wrote a while ago.

please do NOT COPY!

I'm like a reason for treason,
All cuz I didn’t please em,
Ull never hear me cry,
I never give up after the first time I try,
I’m out to win against the jinn,
Life without sin,
I’m ur neighbour, it don’t cost anything to smile,
His love lasts longer then the river Nile,
More valuable then a golden mile,
I stacked up and packed up cuz my life’s on trial,
Allow living in denial,
Time flies and every one dies,
There will come a time with truth will be victimised by lies,
Already ur parents have become spies in disguise,
And ur only ten,
Not even wise women or men,
Honesty and dignity step aside,
The Satan we abide,
Let sin take our pride,
Drink, sex and drugs on our mind,
Continue committing crime,
Disown ur parents,
Live life against the 10 commandments,
Snakes and crooks working for the government,
Brothers and sisters living under feuds,
Creating anger in ur moods,
Shed a crocodile tear,
God we longer fear,
Shed tears of blood,
Uve become a wanted thug,
Create pain, make ur prey insane,
Allow the weed to mess up ur membrane,
U aint no different ur the same,
Satanic mind frame, u think this’ll bring u fame,
Don’t worry,
One day we’ll all see how u used to be,
The Satan will applause ur cause,
Eternity in the seventh hell is ur destiny,
Don’t recollect Islam for weeks,
Ur future looks bleak,
Quran always speaks, calls out ur name,
But to u its only another mind playing game,
It brings u and ur peers shame,
Ur parents dnt know where u are cuz u so far,
U used to be their shining star,
Now uve left then with an inerasable scar,
Like a footprint in the tar,
Before u know it, the angel of death is here,
Too late to fill up with fear,
Or even shed a drop of tear,
Nothing u can do about it, its here,
Its crystal clear,
U just wanted the best,
U failed to realise life’s a test,
Behind u and in front of u is a big mess,
Ur mum and the rest weep at ur death,
The sharp claw snatches ur soul,
Drops it back into the ground from the pits of hell,
U scream, but no one can hear the sound,
No one can help u now,
Now’s ur chance to take a bow,
Show all the crowd how high u is now!
 
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I never knew daffodil could be so real,
Still I chill, spill then refill my mind,
With composed composition of greater admission,
Bear Shahada knowin Allah is far from a lier,
Picturing promises pertained within pages,
Of Mushafs passed through the ages,
Anyhow, Copy Rights in Islam?
Am not a copy cat but I understand!
Sister still stands that for peace in Afghanistan,
They should bring back the taliban,​
 
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Mr. Baldy said:
i was weaned on them hip hop streets,
with them hip hop beats,
now, hip hop meets islam,
greets it with open arms,
this is my way of dawah,
some say its a waste of time,
when they see me spit a rhyme,
say my dawah aint worth a dime

why dont we do a freestyle competiotn? split into teams? whos up for it?
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but whats the use of all the rhyme
if you not even gonna take the time
to act on your words bro
you can spit, you can write
but its only gonna show...
...when the orphan child aint crying no more
when the lil Palestinian girl doesnt have to witness all the gore
of murder and people dying
of broken hearts and families crying
whats the point of all the ryhme when you do it just for fun
I know you gotta spread Islam with each rising of the sun...BUT
dont you think it'd work better
if you took each and every letter
out onto the streets
combine it with hiphop beats
and show em what Islam teachs (had to make it ryme! :okay: )
theres no use if it's all under cover,
ther's no use if it dont tell no real story
you wanna make it worthwhile, dont censor all the gory
the details that the media cover
coz I aint no kaafir lover
you gotta show em what we're all about
you gotta shout it from the rooftops, yo you really gotta shout
if you wanna be spittin yo life story thats kewl
but these lines are a gift, yo they're a real tool
so use em, abuse em, just make sure you dont lose em...
lose em to the hip hop on these mad streets
Islam dont need hip hop
Islam juSt needs PEACE!​

yeah am up for the comp :)
 
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You call urself a poet
i dont feel it
its a waste of time writing it if has no meanig to it.
Your a fake
you might as well drown urself in the lake.

But my rhyme is deep
maybe weak
but im trying
without copying

this is to hard i give up
its hard to write a rhyme
it takes time
this i my rhyme.
 
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Daffodil said:
Salaams

here is something i wrote a while ago.

please do NOT COPY!

I'm like a reason for treason,
All cuz I didn’t please em,
Ull never hear me cry,
I never give up after the first time I try,
I’m out to win against the jinn,
Life without sin,
I’m ur neighbour, it don’t cost anything to smile,
His love lasts longer then the river Nile,
More valuable then a golden mile,
I stacked up and packed up cuz my life’s on trial,
Allow living in denial,
Time flies and every one dies,
There will come a time with truth will be victimised by lies,
Already ur parents have become spies in disguise,
And ur only ten,
Not even wise women or men,
Honesty and dignity step aside,
The Satan we abide,
Let sin take our pride,
Drink, sex and drugs on our mind,
Continue committing crime,
Disown ur parents,
Live life against the 10 commandments,
Snakes and crooks working for the government,
Brothers and sisters living under feuds,
Creating anger in ur moods,
Shed a crocodile tear,
God we longer fear,
Shed tears of blood,
Uve become a wanted thug,
Create pain, make ur prey insane,
Allow the weed to mess up ur membrane,
U aint no different ur the same,
Satanic mind frame, u think this’ll bring u fame,
Don’t worry,
One day we’ll all see how u used to be,
The Satan will applause ur cause,
Eternity in the seventh hell is ur destiny,
Don’t recollect Islam for weeks,
Ur future looks bleak,
Quran always speaks, calls out ur name,
But to u its only another mind playing game,
It brings u and ur peers shame,
Ur parents dnt know where u are cuz u so far,
U used to be their shining star,
Now uve left then with an inerasable scar,
Like a footprint in the tar,
Before u know it, the angel of death is here,
Too late to fill up with fear,
Or even shed a drop of tear,
Nothing u can do about it, its here,
Its crystal clear,
U just wanted the best,
U failed to realise life’s a test,
Behind u and in front of u is a big mess,
Ur mum and the rest weep at ur death,
The sharp claw snatches ur soul,
Drops it back into the ground from the pits of hell,
U scream, but no one can hear the sound,
No one can help u now,
Now’s ur chance to take a bow,
Show all the crowd how high u is now!
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wow! what a talent sis!
 
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I was going to say before,

I think a Topical Freestyle would be best,

Compatition could be to have two people who are online, and a third member to post a topic, then both the people have 10 minutes or what ever time limit to compose a x amount of lines on that topic alone, then people vote on which verse is better, there could be a voting structure too.
 
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khalil27 said:
You call urself a poet
i dont feel it
its a waste of time writing it if has no meanig to it.
Your a fake
you might as well drown urself in the lake.

But my rhyme is deep
maybe weak
but im trying
without copying

this is to hard i give up
its hard to write a rhyme
it takes time
this i my rhyme.
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Your ryhme is deep? go swim in it :okay:
 
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:sl:

ermm...ok i do get the freestyle thingamajig...so ermm...should we start now...and err...can i use the poems i have already written and posted :?

:w:
 
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Faraway said:
:sl:

ermm...ok i do get the freestyle thingamajig...so ermm...should we start now...and err...can i use the poems i have already written and posted :?

:w:
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It wouldn't be freestyle if you did lol. The aim of freestyle is to put something together on the spot.

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Ok, is anyone online now that wants to do a verse, two people, when they both reply I will state a topic and then you both need to have your verses of lets say 10 lines within 5 minutes of the post of my topic.
 

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