Personal statement..

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salams,

^jazakhallah for the du'as bro, they are aprreciated. I'll make du'a for u too. Inshallah we'll all get accepted! I've been checking UCAS everyday, but nothin :( I guess I just have to wait until after the christmas hols..so not looking forward to it... if i don't get accepted i dunno what i'll do :( :( :(
 
after reading through this thread, inshallah i hope all goes well for you. :okay::D
 
Salam,

Well I got an interview in one of the uni's to which I applied.. it's like 2 hours away from home, the only negative thing about it. Im havin second thoughts now about going to study pharmacy. the uni i want to get in doesn't take AVCE which i have and that's the only uni closer to home. I don't wanna move out and stay at campus..so im really confused now :(

I wanna do pharmacy more now than ever, but the distances of all the uni's are depressing. and I've got so many more worries in my head bout the tuition fees etc im just wondering if i should even bother.

Im so down at the moment, Im just praying so hard that I get into the uni closer to home (and which doesn't accept AVCE)..the more i think about it..the more distant it seems.

Please bros n sisters keep me in ur du'as. jazakhallah

w'salam
 
Sofia whens your interview InshaAllah?

InshaAllah ill post some topics for you to research on and clue up on prior to your interview. Also are you a college entrant or graduate?
 
Salam brother,

^ im currently in university studying biomedical science. My interview is on wednesday.. im not sure if i'll be going into further education after all.. i found out that i won't be able to pay the tuition fees as the goverment only pays for one undergraduate degree (which im already doing!)

So I don't really know whats going to happen now. I might just end up taking a gap year, and try n decide in that time what my next step will be. I'm actually thinking of going into teaching now.. lol i know it's completely different from pharmacy, but now to tell u the truth i dnt think pharmacy is for me.. I just have to tell my parents n sister now, which i still haven't done so as im quite scared of their reaction to my change of plan. Please pray for me :(

Im a lost soul I know.. :(

Neway jazakhallah for offering to help brother.. may Allah (swt) reward you.
 
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Sis. There ARE grants and loans available for students like yourself.
I'm sure the uni will have 'hardship grants' available.

They WILL help you , knowing that the fees is actually completely putting you off uni. Trust me.Theres so much help for people to actually pursue higher education. MashaAllah Alhamdulilah.

Ask around. Don't give up..:)
 
Who told you that sis???

If i was you, thoroughly research the issue of finances by ringing up students loan company and the university before you decide on pulling out. For now though, go to the interview anyhow that way you know you tried atleast and you wouldnt be letting go of such an opportunity that others would dream of lol.

As i said, if you decide to attend it let moi know....ill go over some pointers with you inshaAllah.
 
Salam,

^ I made my decision.. and I have decided not to go into pharmacy after all.. i know after alllll that! lol I know it's a huge change in plan in sucha short space of time, but i feel so much lighter after making that decision :D I only told my family y'day.. gosh it took all my courage to do so! Normally, i would have burst into tears after tellin em.. coz i know i would have dissapointed them, but i was so strong! lol and i didn't end up cryin :)

Surprisingly, they all agreed that I would make a wiked teacher..and that I am great at teachin things to people (like my little sister)... so i have decided to do a tecahing course instead..only takes a year to do and im actually excited about it :D :D

My mum was a bit angry though..i think purely for the fact that i left it so late to tell them..and applied for pharmacy when I didn't want to in the first place :( the thing is i actually did want to do it..but there were just so many things that were putting me off from doing so...am glad I chose to forget bout it..i feel much happier..subhanallah :)

Neway im rattling on.. jazakhallah brother for offering to help with the interview it was so much appreciated..just the fact that u offered to help a sis out (it was only a uni policy thing to interview anyone who applied for pharm anyway).

also jazakhallah to the other brothers and sisters who helped me out.. for the personal statement and everything.. May Allah (swt) reward you for all your kind efforts :)

*smiling and feeling very happy*

W'salam
 
Sofia...Have you tried Medical sales ?

Im finishing the same degree :)
Are you doing biomed?

With all due respect, Medical sales is a load of wack and at the time the industry and job prospects on a decline. Your basically having to go sell yourself by resorting to silly stuff and having people laughing behind ya back etc.

If you are doing biomed, look into the regulating society for that profession, do a portfolio thing bit like a pre-reg and inshaAllah youll find a nice job in a hospital setting.
 
Salams,

Round 2 lol please bros n sisters let me no what u guys think of this teaching PS. Any critism also welcome :)

Jazakhallah

“I want to be a scientist” was the response I received when I asked my younger cousin what he wanted to be when he was older. I was surprised that it was completely different to what other boys his age would say, such as a pilot, car racer or lawyer. He seemed so excited about science and showed great enthusiasm for the subject. That was the point in my life when I decided on teaching children at KS1 and KS2 as a career. I want to help children achieve their future aspirations by teaching them to use their strengths to their advantage and overcome their weaknesses. I believe that I have the skills and the ability to make a great teacher.
I have a helpful personality. I am always helping my younger sister with her schoolwork when she is facing any difficulties. This will be a valuable characteristic within a classroom. I know that I would feel great satisfaction in knowing that I helped a child to overcome a challenge. I want to teach children that they can defeat any obstacles in their way if they are determined.
With a career in teaching, I know that no two days will be the same. Children are very curious and are constantly asking questions and working with them will be an exciting challenge. Learning should be fun and I want to fuel their interest in all the subjects via fun as well as productive activities.
I have excellent time management and organisational skills. I can meet any given deadlines and I am punctual. These skills that I have acquired over the past few years are all essential in the teaching profession.
Carrying out presentations at university has given me the confidence to communicate fluently and effectively to an audience. My problem solving and communication skills are excellent. I can communicate effectively in a variety of coursework, presentations and examinations and can apply methods and subject knowledge accurately and carefully to a given problem. Working effectively with others within a group in order to achieve a goal comes naturally to me. This probably stems from my friendly and approachable personality, and as a result can build strong relationships within a team. This will allow me to develop positive relationships with other adults, professionals and children.
I have excellent listening skills; I listen attentively to what a person is saying and show understanding towards them. A skill that is very important as a teacher as they need to listen to the children and relate to them. I am able to demonstrate good ICT skills effectively too. I am good at most subjects taught within the national curriculum, with science and English being my strongest.
In my spare time I enjoy reading a wide variety of books, socialising, listening to music and I am a great fan of movies. Gujarati is my mother tongue, and I am able to speak it fluently, this will enable me to assist children whose first language is not English.
Though I don’t currently have any experience working with children, I am currently searching for work experience within a local school and hope to find one soon.
I believe that every child is different and has various needs. Your course will enable me to develop my knowledge, skills and understanding of what it takes to be a good teacher. I am looking forward to engaging in the practical as well as the theoretical side of the teaching course. Children are the future and I want to contribute in making it a bright one.
I think your university, with all it provides, will foster all my talents and allow me to become an effective teacher which will not only give me an opportunity to give something back to the community but will give me a rewarding career where both myself and other individuals will benefit.
 
MashaAllah its good.

I would advise you do some work revolving around children with special needs and that would go down fantastically in your personal statement. Obviously all children are diff but im sure there are very few who mention kids with special needs such as autism down on PS. If you put this down it shows you have worked around and managed to effectively carry out work with children of all kind.

Also where you list your key skills note examples down of where you have portrayed these skills as opposed to just listing them. Dont refer to the Uni as "your university" Just put summat like i believe i would be a great asset to the Uni not only on the educational front but by also contributing to other society's at the Uni etc.
 
Salam bro,

^ Jazakhallah for the advice, may Allah (swt) reward you. All the uni's are asking for like 5-10 days work experiance at a mainstream school... i don't currently have that..so im gonna have to somehow get some along with juggling my last year of uni *gulp* I so don't know how im gonna manage, but inshallah i'll be fine

I still aint completed the application, im still considering universities.. it's so hard coz im only allowed to put 2 choices down! that's not so good, coz it limits your options big time!

But inshallah by the end of this week, i should have posted it off.. keep me in your duas.

To all other bros n sisters.. anymore advice on the personal statement. I know we've been here before with me lol but it is appreciated :D

Jazakhallah in advance

W'salams :)
 


To all other bros n sisters.. anymore advice on the personal statement. I know we've been here before with me lol but it is appreciated :D

Jazakhallah in advance

W'salams :)
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inshallah ill have a look at it sis. ive got other stuff on atm, so i hope you dont expect anything too great :hiding:
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salam sis,

^ hehe nah don't worry bout it, i might just change it a bit here and there, and send it off ASAP.. so don't worry i understand that you've all got your own things to be getting on with... if you need any help..just holler :D

W'salam
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After having read your personal statement again sis, I would advise that you put something down as being able to work under pressure and handle heavy workload. As the course for teaching is supposedly very demanding in the sense of workload. Your evidence for this could be that you are in the final year of a undergraduate course and hence you are used to heavy workload. With personal statements etc the main thing is the use of "buzz words" and evidence based examples and standing out from other applicant by not writing the same stuff down lol. Google personal statements ONLY to get jist of what the main buzz words are and apply it to yourself.

Also i strongly suggest you do work experience, even if its one morning or afternoon at a school once or twice a week. Do community service work or work with special needs children i.e. children with autism etc. Also if you have ever taught any children madressah work i.e. Quran etc then put it down! :D
 
^ Jazakhallah brother again for the advice.. it's very appreciated. I've added a few changes already. inshallah im hoping to send it off tomorrow!
 
Well post it here before you send it off inshaAllah, so we can go through it one more time. When's the deadline for it?
 
Salams,

Yeh I know the deadline is gone.. but people doing a PGCE course can also be considered as late as May, as long as the uni's have a place. Most unis still have vacancies alhamdulillah.. so im jus giving it a shot and gonna see what happens. Plus there's clearing too.. so inshallah everything is gonna go ok :) If i don't get a place, it's Allah's will and im still sure evrything will be fine :D

w'salam
 

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