Arrogance!!

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salaam ma alaykam peoplings

diggidy diggidy ya best check yaselfs before you wreck yaselfs!!

Arrogance....

As i stand there, i wonder what have i done to be here!
I was the one you know, all popular and that, i was kool and square..
I was so happy unlike now, i had the cars, girls would look twice, thrice it was all funs
People told me to change, but they were the ugly borin ones

I feel so hot, i want to take my shirt off like i used to
i prayed most jummahs, but most times i was busy wit my crew
i hated those, who said everytin i did was haraam,
gosh they were so jealous, all they needed was a chill pill and needed to be calm!

Now as they move we forward, i remember my great life
I had the looks so what if i weren’t faithful to my wife,
It was good she went, parents forced her on me, she always buggin me to pray
And tellin me im not a good muslim, day and day

Im sweatin man, i cant see any way
I can see people i know, they must think i look so gay
I know him he was always sayin how he prayed, fasted, some said he showed off, i dont care he seemed good
As long hope he dont see me, otherwise down goes my rep in the hood

I want to scream out, its so freekin steamin
Why cant i jus go back to them days, when i had the music creamin
I had the money, everyone was bein like me, they jus dreamin
But this place is so hot man im fumin!

Right ive had enough of this place, “im goin, switchin lanes”
But they wont let me, they hav tied me with chains
what have i done, the more i struggle they take me higher
i realise my mistakes, but they sayin “too late”, as they throw me in the fire!


i know its get crap, but we aint all perfect :D

It was narrated from Abd-Allaah ibn Masood (ra) that the Prophet (peace and blessings of Allaah be upon him) said: No one who has an atoms-weight of arrogance in his heart will enter Paradise.
 
AssalamuAlaykum

*lost for words*

That wasnt crap, was amazing....

Just amazing...

WassalamuAlakum
 
^ *throws chilli powdered water on you* come back to reality now

jazakhallah :D

AssalamuAlaykum

*gets chilli powdered water in eyes* ^o)

Lol Wa Iyaak Akhee. Was top though masha'Allah. Missed your poems, aint read em in tiiiime.

WassalamuAlakum
 
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^ Then why's it in Islamic Poetry? ^o)

That was really nice mashaAllah. :thumbs_up

Jazakallah khair for sharing!
 
Did you make the poem up?
If so, you have talent Masha'allah..
And quit throwin chilli powder at those who complement you..
If I diss you, will I have chocolates thrown at me?
Kiddin..Anyways, the saying goes 'Throw dust at those who flatter you', So I guess chilli powder is dusty though innit?
:muddlehea
 
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^ Then why's it in Islamic Poetry? ^o)

That was really nice mashaAllah. :thumbs_up

Jazakallah khair for sharing!


poems sound sooo like a little girl collectin flowers in her bike with a basket:muddlehea

they are lines :D

jazakhallah khayr musaafir sis, me likes your username btw

and noo water chilli powder for all:D
 
AssalamuAlaykum

Sorry I forgot, they aint poems. They're lines :shade:

WassalamuAlaykum

EDIT: It got there before me :|
 
poems sound sooo like a little girl collectin flowers in her bike with a basket:muddlehea

they are lines :D

jazakhallah khayr musaafir sis, me likes your username btw

and noo water chilli powder for all:D
Thank you, I like my username too!
Anyways, what's wrong with calling it a poem..what on earth do you mean by lines? Don't 'Lines' make up a poem..
Ooh la la la..I thought girlies were fussy..
What about calling it a Blank verse..it's not very rhymy is it? So that'll suit it won't it? (Forgive me if I've used the wrong terminology..My GCSE Lit knowledge isn't quite up to scratch)
Anyways, seeing as you have the ability please write some more 'lines!' (LOL, I sound like a teacher)... or should I say 'Blank verse'
 
Thank you, I like my username too!
Anyways, what's wrong with calling it a poem..what on earth do you mean by lines? Don't 'Lines' make up a poem..
Ooh la la la..I thought girlies were fussy..
What about calling it a Blank verse..it's not very rhymy is it? So that'll suit it won't it? (Forgive me if I've used the wrong terminology..My GCSE Lit knowledge isn't quite up to scratch)
Anyways, seeing as you have the ability please write some more 'lines!' (LOL, I sound like a teacher)... or should I say 'Blank verse'

AssalamuAlaykum

Ooh masha'Allah fishter you sound high :D

WassalamuAlaykum
 
lol at both of you!
Am no fishter..and yeah am quite high..was eating a whole plate of tetullllllll...yummy..
Anyways, I still like my username and I will be waiting for some more 'lines' from Mr. Jalebi..
You can surely come up with some more good verses innit?
 
yeaah if you wana read more their is a rhyming thread, its full of stuff

and sister check my other threads from the user page thin, i got a few other line threads :D
 

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