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    This is beautiful.
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    No one came to the door when I pulled up in front of the house and honked
    the horn on my cab.
    So I walked to the door and knocked. 'Just a minute', answered a frail,
    elderly voice. I could hear something being dragged across the floor.

    After a long pause, the door opened. A small woman in her 90's stood before
    me. She was wearing a print dress and a pillbox hat with a veil pinned
    on it, like somebody out of a 1940s movie.

    By her side was a small nylon suitcase. The apartment looked as if no one
    had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered with sheets..

    There were no clocks on the walls, no knickknacks or utensils on the
    counters. In the corner was a cardboard box filled with photos and
    glassware.

    Would you carry my bag out to the car?' she said. I took the suitcase to the
    cab, then returned to assist the woman.
    She took my arm and we walked slowly toward the curb.

    She kept thanking me for my kindness. 'It's nothing', I told her. 'I just
    try to treat my passengers the way I would want my mother treated'.
    'Oh, you're such a good boy', she said. When we got in the cab, she gave me
    an address, and then asked, 'Could you drive through downtown?'

    'It's not the shortest way,' I answered quickly.

    'Oh, I don't mind,' she said. "I'm in no hurry. I'm on my way to a hospice".

    I looked in the rear-view mirror.. Her eyes were glistening. 'I don't have
    any family left,' she continued. 'The doctor says I don't have very
    long.' I quietly reached over and shut off the meter.

    'What route would you like me to take?' I asked.
    For the next two hours, we drove through the city. She showed me the
    building where she had once worked as an elevator
    operator.
    We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived when they were newlyweds.. She had me pull up in front of a furniture
    warehouse that had once been a ballroom where she had gone dancing as a
    girl. Sometimes she'd ask me to slow in front of a particular building or corner and would sit staring into the darkness, saying nothing.

    We drove in silence to the address she had given me. It was a low
    building, like a small convalescent home, with a driveway that passed
    under a portico.
    Two orderlies came out to the cab as soon as we pulled up. They were
    solicitous and intent, watching her every move. They must have been
    expecting her.I opened the trunk and took the small suitcase to the door. The woman was already seated in a wheelchair.
    'How much do I owe you?' she asked, reaching into her purse.

    'Nothing,' I said. 'You have to make a living,' she answered.

    'There are other passengers,' I responded.

    Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. She held onto me tightly.
    'You gave an old woman a little moment of joy,' she said. 'Thank
    you.'
    I squeezed her hand, and then walked into the dim morning light. Behind
    me, a door shut. It was the sound of the closing of a life.

    I didn't pick up any more passengers that shift. I drove aimlessly lost
    in thought. For the rest of that day, I could hardly talk. What if that
    woman had gotten an angry driver, or one who was impatient to end his
    shift?
    What
    if I had refused to take the run, or had honked once, then driven away?
    On a quick review, I don't think that I have done anything more important
    in my life.


    We're conditioned to think that our lives revolve around great moments.


    But great moments often catch us unaware-beautifully wrapped in what others may consider a small one.


    People may not remember exactly what you did, or what you said, but they will always remember how you made them feel.
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    Re: Great moments often catch us unaware...

    A heart-melting story...
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    Re: Great moments often catch us unaware...

    :'(

    Beautiful story.
    Great moments often catch us unaware...


    Somewhere over the rainbow, way up high, there's a land that I heard of once in a lullaby.

    Somewhere over the rainbow, skies are blue... and the dreams that you dare to dream really do come true.
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    Subhannallah
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    Re: Great moments often catch us unaware...

    SubhanAllah...
    Almost without thinking, I bent and gave her a hug. She held onto me tightly.
    'You gave an old woman a little moment of joy,' she said. 'Thank
    you.'
    I squeezed her hand, and then walked into the dim morning light. Behind
    me, a door shut. It was the sound of the closing of a life.
    That bit really choked me up..
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    Re: Great moments often catch us unaware...

    very beautiful story, thanks for posting
    salam
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