a poem not too good

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this is not a excellent poem but it has hidden feelings.....................most of them cannot be written.


every day i wake up
hoping his day is thumbs up

i leave the house
putting all my trust on Allah

Go through the day well
facing fears envy and war like in a living hell

thanking Allah for dropping me home safely
Keep a straight face and show no sadness.

thinking y people misuse their advantages
to get more attention

not letting others learn
and ruining everyones concerntration

Go to bed and covers over my face
cry inside asking Allah to take me away

as soon as possible for my locket cannot
be kept shut with tears for long

i close my eyes hoping i will die
for i know Allah knows what i go through
 
Its really "Not too Good"
[MAD]its really very good effort[/MAD]
 

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