Liberty Senior Member Messages 92 Reaction score 11 Nov 7, 2008 #1 If my life was a word It would be boring I almost wish I were a bird So I could go soaring Up into the sky Where no one would find me I'd be contented & high Free as one can be
If my life was a word It would be boring I almost wish I were a bird So I could go soaring Up into the sky Where no one would find me I'd be contented & high Free as one can be
Cabdullahi IB Legend Messages 5,610 Reaction score 1,308 Gender Male Religion Islam Nov 7, 2008 #2 nice short poem
Liberty Senior Member Messages 92 Reaction score 11 Nov 7, 2008 #3 Thanks. I wrote it when I was a little depressed & bored...obviously lol
Cabdullahi IB Legend Messages 5,610 Reaction score 1,308 Gender Male Religion Islam Nov 7, 2008 #4 probably the shortest poem i have ever seen but it still packs a punch
Liberty Senior Member Messages 92 Reaction score 11 Nov 7, 2008 #5 Hahahahah I never really considered it short. I've read shorter poems. Anyway it's silly & nothing too serious.
Hahahahah I never really considered it short. I've read shorter poems. Anyway it's silly & nothing too serious.
Re.TiReD LI Oldtimer Messages 11,129 Reaction score 1,271 Gender Female Religion Islam Nov 7, 2008 #6 Nice...:thumbs_up
Y Yanal Student of knowledge Messages 6,055 Reaction score 228 Gender Male Religion Islam Nov 8, 2008 #8 Nice poem. A correction. The shortest of literature poem is the couplet. Two lines whose ends ryhme Ex: My life has wasted in tears. I also lived it in fear.
Nice poem. A correction. The shortest of literature poem is the couplet. Two lines whose ends ryhme Ex: My life has wasted in tears. I also lived it in fear.
Liberty Senior Member Messages 92 Reaction score 11 Nov 8, 2008 #9 aww is that really the shortest? I'm disappointed at the lack of optimism hahah but it's very realistic
aww is that really the shortest? I'm disappointed at the lack of optimism hahah but it's very realistic