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Re: A collaborative effort

τhε ṿαlε'ṡ lïlÿ;1397505 said:
Someone else should pick up it is a 'collaborative effort'
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i would but....im too much of an amatuer lol ill just wait until someone more talented takes over
*Waits patiently*
 
Re: A collaborative effort

Mila said:
i would but....im too much of an amatuer lol ill just wait until someone more talented takes over *Waits patiently*
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this isn't about rookies and connoisseurs.. I am actually hoping everyone would participate.. nonetheless I'll write one more paragraph to get things rolling ..
 
Re: A collaborative effort

interesting idea. however, i'm not much of a horror/ suspense writer but i do love reading suspense!
 
Re: A collaborative effort

muhaba said:
interesting idea. however, i'm not much of a horror/ suspense writer but i do love reading suspense!
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it doesn't have to be if you start the next paragraph you can take it in the direction of your choosing..

:w:
 
Re: A collaborative effort

oh snaps this is getting good
 
Re: A collaborative effort

is anyone writing more? i can't wait to read more.
 
It would be nice if each member would add a few lines to the story as they read it. Let this be a joint effort by all of us.
 
im kinda confused with the story now
like he keeps waking up in like all these different places and something about some piece of something.. and a fortune teller.....im sooo confused
would someone please be so kind as to push me towards the right direction as to what is going on evrything just seems so spontaneous.....
 
Mila said:
im kinda confused with the story now
like he keeps waking up in like all these different places and something about some piece of something.. and a fortune teller.....im sooo confused
would someone please be so kind as to push me towards the right direction as to what is going on evrything just seems so spontaneous.....
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It is all spontaneous. each writer adds to what they feel the story is becoming.
 
is any one going to write any more?
 
I would really like to add to the thread but I have absolutely no idea what the hell is going on in the story. Seems like there's two different continuities going on and I can't really add anything without invalidating/ruining someone's hard work.
 
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Read the story and post your comments, plz.
 
aamirsaab said:
I would really like to add to the thread but I have absolutely no idea what the hell is going on in the story. Seems like there's two different continuities going on and I can't really add anything without invalidating/ruining someone's hard work.
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I think it has taken a direction now.
 

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