Continue the Islamic Rhyme

cheers mate!

would you continue plz



i will try ! to be more involved
 
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cheers mate!

would you continue plz

ok :exhausted

to reverse brain damages and to keep the body,mind and heart intact
i have to accumulate ajr and have them stacked
and i owe my parent a lot
they're the ones who taught me, reminded me when i forgot
so in prayer i stand making dua for us
that Allah keeps me with you until our bodies buried deep and we divide into dust
and to enter us in paradise when we are judged
so against ourselves, we wont hold a grudge
and shaitan won't, can't get in our way, cuz we're too hard to budge
 
and shaitan won't, can't get in our way, cuz we're too hard to budge

idolatry forces will be dislodged
the fight has taken us to new heights... there could be lack of oxygen please check your gauge
catch me in the infantry conjering up something for the perfect cause
of propagating islam no ingredients for bombs
just a contemplating mind and a physical anatomy
hands that want to participate in philanthropy
for the love of humanity
secret soceities spreading irregularities
to rob the minds of human species
the night has come here is the vigilante
with the sword islam ready to free people disappeared from his hideout after two rakats and a couple sips of latte
 
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(whoa you guys are rocking, this is from 4 posts back !!)




My body, mind and heart intact
belief is more than an empty act
the devil is offering a sinful pact
subtley attempting to distract
me from this righteous din contract.

O Lord........
I just want to be one of those guys
who turns his head to look at the skies
with baited breath and a glint inmy eyes
and a smile even when the sinner cries

On the final day, the last of plans
mountains will turn to nought but sand
I strive to be of those who stand
And recieve their book in their right hand

Most the People are Running and crying
coz its to late now and there scared of frying
breast fed babies abandoned and lying
amid those who know theres worse than dying

Some appear drunk but their just in shock
its judgement day and were all in the dock
theres no more time left on the clock
as hell looms up and the gates unlock

There is no choice as we stand in our places
Allah is checking individual cases
the evil kafirs by their sinful traces
driven by angels made to walk on their faces

fifty thousand years we wait
to hear of what will be our fate
thankfull slave or low ingrate
depths of hell or Jannahs gate.

O Lord....
You have bestowed me of your grace
help me battle to earn my place
among the best of the human race
that one day I might see your face

Help me be a righteous man
give me knowledge so I can
grow in the light of our Islam
and build a tower of imaan
 
and build a tower of imaan
the power to understand
that life is a short span
never took heed
my heart needs rest, needs ease
my eyes bleed
open doors of evilness in my brain with lost keys
high cost to pay extravagant fees
sweating in gallons
a long run ending in panting
aliens are landing
no such thing as extra terrestrial beings..just human beings
not acting like human beings
lust , greed and racketeering
life and its glitter is so appealing
an army of apprentices and the devil is leading
and when the suns out
i crawl out like a sprout
hoping for a change
but as i walk these streets everything is still the same
 
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but as i walk these streets everything is still the same
,bloodied wounds,barking sounds of hounds
worried mother..insomnia, sitting with her night gown
soon is the escape just yesterday the candle's were blown on a birthday cake
a torso that lays nearby a quiet lake
lived a life so coarse
drugs overdose of course
headless and no legs
didn't need them after all
couldnt run and couldn't think
it all flashed by within an eyes blink
the 9 month belly storage holder
heart of jelly will never sleep again
lonely nights and it just gets colder
 
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,bloodied wounds,barking sounds of hounds
worried mother..insomnia, sitting with her night gown
soon is the escape just yesterday the candle's was blown on a birthday cake
a torso that lays on a quiet lake
lived a life so coarse
drugs overdose of course
headless and no legs
didn't need them after all
couldnt run and couldn't think
it all flashed by within an eyes blink
the 9 month belly storage holder
heart of jelly will never sleep again
lonely night and it just gets colder



whoa brother this is your best yet
 
Lonely night and it just gets colder
the depth of her pain is another year older
If only shed listened when her mother told her
the drugs and vice were going to mould her

just sixteen when the streets enticed
an innocent girl to a life of vice
to exist this way you pay a price
the world is cold like sheer black ice

First it was pot
and not such a lot
and the men she met
helped her forget
that the first in line
was lost in time
but it feels so bad
when raped by dad.

At first she numbed the aching pain
by running far and staying sane
but now she has to stab a veign
to feel at all, to try again

Money came when she laid with men
she was in demand way back then
shed aged 4 years but it felt like ten
robbed of her looks by heroin

Lawyers , doctors, police and others
would take her body on filthy covers
then go back home to their faithful lovers
stole her soul yet noone bothers

Men had ruined the poor girls life
ruined her chance to become a wife
ruined her body and left her strife
one of them ruined her with a knife

Lay on the floor
this low class *****
could feel the blood
as it started to pour
He slashed her arm
and stabbed her back
then kicked her face
and stole her smack
visions came
a face in the rain
men all the same
had caused her pain
she had been slain
a life in vain
a lonely death
a dirty stain
she felt insane
and noone came
to sooth her anxious sobs.

The girl was filth the girl was scum
the new that shed hurt her mum
As she lay dying in a backyard slum
She cried to God "send someone"

Thats when the sister of Islam
heard her cries and quickly ran
to help the girl that was her plan
to help a victim of a sickening man

To late now she was nearly dead
The sister sat supporting her head
and told the girl in this time of dread
of the one sweet man who loved instead

"There once was a men better by far
than the rest of them,he was a star
to lead them out of this dark dunya
the greatest man, Rasulullah" (pbuh)

"Within his heart there was no sin
he would never have hurt the body your in
he would only have helped you kick the pin
and helped you grow from deep within"

In her last few moments the girl held tight
the sisters hand and tried to fight
to hear more of the man of light
but death was here and now in sight

"I beleive you" , through the blood and bile
her voice was lost, this scene so vile
prooved to be her winning trial
she looked at the sister and died with a smile,
 
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you've helped me improve

you too brother. Personally its like some kinda therapy, somwtimes kills getting them down on paper, then sometimes malke me cry !, but when its done its so good to look at and see your thoughts in shap e on the page. Going to restrict myself a little tho as feels like not quite getting it right just now. Keep it up bro you gor makings of a top poet. BTW have you read scents of Jannahs stuff, its in a league of its own bro
 
wow lol i don't think i can keep up with you two :skeleton:
 
Yes you can yes you can!!!.....YOU CAN YOU CAN YOU CAN

Maybe but probably not at the same level,

She looked at the sister and died with a smile
Sweat on her forehead
Her last words ringing in the air
She lay back limp and dead

La ilaha ilallah
She managed to say it at her end
With faith and yaqeen she had believed in Allah
Why do you think you'll be able to say it when all commandments you bend?
 

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