Continue the Islamic Rhyme

Big beard soldier
belt with the quran in a holster
fully equipped
ready to pounce quietly i sit
ready to astound ready to let a quote rip
''thou shalt not kill''
''thou shalt not spill the blood''
''thou shalt hear or have a heart sealed by god''
have great zeal or eternally rot
short trousers lifted up socks
eyes that admire the floor boarding
no time to look at butts whilst organizations have our brothers endure waterboarding
lay in the cut
lay in bed alone forever with no s/lut/s
time to pray roll out the prayer rug
rugged like old boots never drugged
by worldly narcotics....illusion optics..hypnosis
your exam! the earth is the litmus test so correct your synopsis
 
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Bro this stuffs getting sicker, you really getting better all the time, keep it going brother
 
Abdullahii said:
correct your synopsis
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following desires like its an element necessary to respire but what you get is ''bronchitis''
to quench thirst in the century twentyfirst beer is drunk first but what you get is ''hepatitis''
apearance-consious.....gotta new haircut i think ''heather will like this''
not long ago hannah had a face ''lift''
and little did joanah know that acting like big flirt wearing a miniskirt would get a her to be raped near appartment lifts''
the above are all weak,the strong is seperated from the bleak the earth is a 'sift''
if you like we all are ''particles''
with free will to do what we like so avoid the bad or else its going to be really sad that your good ''part was little''
 
Abdullahii said:
following desires like its an element necessary to respire but what you get is ''bronchitis''
to quench thirst in the century twentyfirst beer is drunk first but what you get is ''hepatitis''
apearance-consious.....gotta new haircut i think ''heather will like this''
not long ago hannah had a face ''lift''
and little did joanah know that acting like big flirt wearing a miniskirt would get a her to be raped near appartment lifts''
the above are all weak,the strong is seperated from the bleak the earth is a 'sift''
if you like we all are ''particles''
with free will to do what we like so avoid the bad or else its going to be really sad that your good ''part was little''
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Brother this is really good, there is structure and your words are flowing. opening line is a belter. What you like at actually rapping this stuff ?
Seriously bro each one is better than the one before it:shade:
edit to add, bro I can see from your rhymes that your imaan is getting stronger, subhan Allah
 
Tony said:
Brother this is really good, there is structure and your words are flowing. opening line is a belter. What you like at actually rapping this stuff ?
Seriously bro each one is better than the one before it:shade:
edit to add, bro I can see from your rhymes that your imaan is getting stronger, subhan Allah
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thanks....ive learned my structuring from you.....i have a rap recording wesbite online
 
Abdullahii said:
thanks....ive learned my structuring from you.....i have a rap recording wesbite online
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asif bro, is it just islamic or other stuff ? You know, raw talent is great, but the truly greatwriters learnt and adapted from inspiration they got from others. I think you are becoming a great writer
 
Tony said:
asif bro, is it just islamic or other stuff ? You know, raw talent is great, but the truly greatwriters learnt and adapted from inspiration they got from others. I think you are becoming a great writer
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it has no profanity...but there is music....i did time back and now i stopped
 
Abdullahii said:
it has no profanity...but there is music....i did time back and now i stopped
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respect brother, u know you could use ur talent to help the youth. they need ppl like you to lead the way, not just muslim yoluth but all them lost boys and girls
 
Tony said:
respect brother, u know you could use ur talent to help the youth. they need ppl like you to lead the way, not just muslim yoluth but all them lost boys and girls
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my friend told me to apply for a job as a social worker but...i have no time and im not good at it
 
high roller deeply-rooted in ''materialsim''
coca cola and ''consumerism''
money has ripped families apart to force them into ''schism''
how could have we combated, certainly not with ''intu-ition'
lack of faith in god but happily wanna live in his kingdom
a neglected beautiful book that gives a detailed look ''into-wisdom''
spend...spend...spend oooh! ''fashion and retail'' conformist muslims tag-along holding strong onto devil's ''tail''
unfortunately its a fail....fail....fail those who look scruffy,attentively watch the clock to pray and rock leather socks will ''prevail''
others on that special day will be regretful that ''never pondered'' was the heading on the scrolls of their personal ''tale''
 
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If my marriage is not written then i'll protect against fitna
with courage i'll protect my retina
will let no disparaging get to me
will let no one push me into parrotting i'll be who im supposed to be
ideals they impose....i'll simply oppose
society is changing we need to change with it
if its cool to be gay then why not consider it
''do i look like a mule to you what you say is bull****''
its the word of god but needs a reform
excuse me how bipolar?!?!...its not the book please its human's if anything that need reform!!
ideas like these will be common,time to stay strong and weather the storm
 
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let me have a go inshaAllah and see what happens, lol


time to stay a strong and weather the storm
looking back at my sins makes me want to perform
better and stronger lets come out of it now
again and again i fell into the same ditch, short pitched, makes me feel like i've got a glitch
ma homies sayin go on 1 puff its kool
go on it rules add to the fuel
spark up the desire make me look like a fool
this aint high school
its the rough ride down the highway...


That was completeley...:skeleton:
 
mashallah very good

and i will complete you sentence for you ''That was completely awesome''
 
lol... jazakAllah Khayr, ur ones are amazing though brother, mashaAllah
 
Abdullahii said:
high roller deeply-rooted in ''materialsim''
coca cola and ''consumerism''
money has ripped families apart to force them into ''schism''
how could have we combated, certainly not with ''intu-ition'
lack of faith in god but happily wanna live in his kingdom
a neglected beautiful book that gives a detailed look ''into-wisdom''
spend...spend...spend oooh! ''fashion and retail'' conformist muslims tag-along holding strong onto devil's ''tail''
unfortunately its a fail....fail....fail those who look scruffy,attentively watch the clock to pray and rock leather socks will ''prevail''
others on that special day will be regretful that ''never pondered'' was the heading on the scrolls of their personal ''tale''
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Brother, excellent. Bro why not put some of ur rhymes together to make a big rhyme, then rap it nasheed styley.
 
its the rough ride down the highway...
by the way
im majed
and i know i know me
so i gotta ask if u kno u the way that i kno me
coz i kno the way shaytan tempts me
and i kno wat i gotta do wen i feel empty
and i kno its all fake wen im driven to insanity
coz its a whole game for the satan its blatant
his tricks patanted known throughout the lands

so i gotta ask if u kno YOU
and YOU kno what you gotta DO
to escape his evil plots n ploys
dont ever succumb to becomin one of his toys...
 
Been looking at life through a golden haze
trying to make a difference in different ways
Gonna help out big time one of these days
change the world, or so he says

But his.............

deeds are worthless
words are mirthless
he believes in gods and his gods
are SURPLUSS
Will never get it right coz his god
is JESUS(pbuh)
he wants to save souls and it makes
me NERVOUS

Hes been to Africa to save mens souls
but his system of belief is riddled with holes
Down through Europe for spiritual gain
and along with the cross he brought blood and pain
he came in the guise of the king of Etheopia
his intention clear,was to destroy Allahs Kabbah
stopped dead in his tracks in the heart of Arabia
birds with rocks came to stone the blasphemer.

hes a modern guy from a modern brand
from a modern church in a modern land
hes got modern faith in a godly man
from the 5th revision of the king james plan

Hes edged his bets, hes born again
he evangalises now and then
his love is proof hes the best of his kind
but hes lost to God and his eyes are blind

him and his kin
are free from sin
a man came along
and took it for him
took for his own
and he realy believed
the seeds hes sown
will not be retreived
But the day will come
he,ll find no-one
no saviour god/man
and nowhere to run

He needs to.........

Look round
throw down
shirk belief and kneel down
seek the light of Islam
listen to the pure sound
of Adhan
calling man
back toward the real plan
by the grace of Allah
building up our imaan
open up his heart and feed it with
the Qur'an
be greeted by the brothers who wish him only
salaam
Turn his back
get back on track
leave the system that is nought but
Haraam

Ask forgiveness of the one and only Planner
live his life in an Islamic manner
becuase then and only then will he ever get to
Jannah.
 

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