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The camel takes out a gun and shoots the girl because he didn't like the remark about his bad breath. The End. :rollseyes
 
walikum salam

Wow islamgyal allah has blessed you with such a creative mind, how do you think of such things???? You should write an book someday. :okay:
 
NOO....its not the END!! the camel throws some miswak at the girl and says " dont you know what my ancestors have done for you mankind!!" we carried heavy loads during difficult times...and this is how you repay us?? by insulting our breath?? HOW VERY DARE YOU???"
 
Inshallah said:
walikum salam

Wow islamgyal allah has blessed you with such a creative mind, how do you think of such things???? You should write an book someday. :okay:
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bro LOLz.
just use your brain and you'll be fine hmm.... write a book no time bro :okay:
w.salam
 
Hatshepsut said:
NOO....its not the END!! the camel throws some miswak at the girl and says " dont you know what my ancestors have done for you mankind!!" we carried heavy loads during difficult times...and this is how you repay us?? by insulting our breath?? HOW VERY DARE YOU???"
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salam.
how dare you?? so the gyal says well can smell yours too so go brush your own LOLz ;D ;D
now for the real....
the camels says ''god has created everything and he has blessed us with everything, so use it don't go with yellow teeth cause people are going to laugh at you and also you don't look smart!''
 
the girl after being shot and hit with a miswak stick....got up after him....with gore dripping down her head and she does a zombie dance towards him saying "im sowie really sowie" her eyes are gouging out of her head and her nose is where her left ear is meant to be....her left ear has disappeared...where has it gone? *all eyes towards camel*...hmm whats that that camel is chewing?? its her ear yuck yuck!!
 
Hatshepsut said:
the girl after being shot and hit with a miswak stick....got up after him....with gore dripping down her head and she does a zombie dance towards him saying "im sowie really sowie" her eyes are gouging out of her head and her nose is where her left ear is meant to be....her left ear has disappeared...where has it gone? *all eyes towards camel*...hmm whats that that camel is chewing?? its her ear yuck yuck!!
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hahahahahahaa sis dat was funnny!!....i just had a choking fit whilst drinking my tea.....
 
islamgyal said:
bro LOLz.
just use your brain and you'll be fine hmm.... write a book no time bro :okay:
w.salam
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Yes i love using my brain but when it comes to short stories i don't know where the connection gets lost but anyways i thought the girl was dead :rollseyes.

Gotta go pray jummah salah, allahafiz.
 
Hatshepsut said:
the girl after being shot and hit with a miswak stick....got up after him....with gore dripping down her head and she does a zombie dance towards him saying "im sowie really sowie" her eyes are gouging out of her head and her nose is where her left ear is meant to be....her left ear has disappeared...where has it gone? *all eyes towards camel*...hmm whats that that camel is chewing?? its her ear yuck yuck!!
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salam.
next minutes she see's her her other ear gone and then smells something ''ew she goes'' the camels was eating and taken it out!! she looked at him and give him a kick then the camel give her a punch then she goes to the camel ''you got a boggy on our nose'' so the camel goe you smell go brush your teeth first'' the for the real...
 
camel is most offended and gets his front hoof and does a flykicking towards Girl...she falls back landing on some camel splat....*flies are everywhere* girl feels weak...she picks up the miswak stick that camel threw at her previosuly and aha!! gets camel in a headlock and gives him a good brush of the teeth...muhahaha...minty fresh and all!!
 
Salaam o alaikum,

This is funny and all, and some very creative and nice stuff, MashaAllah.
But dont you think it gets... inappropriate at times? Icky??

Anyhows.
The amount of times she's been shot and all, 'tis quite amazing.
Keep it going.

Alaikum Salaam
 
then for the real he gets the miswak and cleans it for her and suddenly the sun came out but went down lOLz,......
 
seek.learn said:
Salaam o alaikum,

This is funny and all, and some very creative and nice stuff, MashaAllah.
But dont you think it gets... inappropriate at times? Icky??

Anyhows.
The amount of times she's been shot and all, 'tis quite amazing.
Keep it going.

Alaikum Salaam
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salam.
lolz where just having a laugh bro cause when we read it from the begingi to the end the ending needs to be interesting and funny no one hardly read it then, also who is icky??
w.salam
 
the girl had heard enough insults from the camel so she took matters into her own hands pulling a gun out of her jacket pocket she fires 7 bullets (going into bullet time motion ) the camel leans backwards dodging every single bullet....
 
but then she realised the camel is not dead and the camels gets up and stranggles her and gives her a black eye! she goes into a corner and brushes her teeth. the camel said, ''hahah, brush harder i can see yellow''.....
 
so now that camel is tied up and dealt with girl brushes off the dust...gets her backpack and starts her journey onwards...she falls over onto some rocks...

clumsy indeed so she gets up as she does her glance falls to where camel was lying on the floor...she feels bad...especially as he was tied up with her scrunchie...a tight fit indeed around his hooves...aww

but wait camel isnt there anymore....she turns 360 degrees where has camel gone? they were in the middle of nowhere...where is he? she can feel a heavy breathing behind her...geranimooooo!!

camel jumps on her back...bearing in mind his hooves are still tied up with girl's pink scrunchie, with purple flowers on it of course....
 
''come with me'', said the gyal. they both went into the forest hitting eachother and the camel said, ''i can smeel something and see yellow and the sun going down'' hahahaha¬!!
 
the forest of course had appeared out of nowhere

finally girl and camel decided to make peace...and they set up a camp fire...

night had already hit so came the noises.....the strange noises.....what were they? who were they?
 

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