Freestyle

[Cabdullahi]

'Gentleman'


Beard a little longer
Shoulders more broader
faith much stronger
Im a man now
got the devil saying, how??^o)
I had to stand up and make that vow
No exception for looking beastly
presentable at least,the days are over when i was care free
looking forward everyday..sluggishness in my steps...ha barely!
im a man now,says who????..... says 'me'

 

[Cabdullahi]

Guys just pardon me,im practicing and testing myself by posting rhymes in a thread,its the only way i will improve, through 'criticism'

 

[Na7lah]

Beard a little longer
Shoulders more broader
faith much stronger
Im a man now
got the devil saying, how??

No exception for looking beastly
presentable at least,the days are over when i was care free
looking forward everyday..sluggishness in my steps...ha barely!
im a man now,says who????..... says 'me'

i liked these parts mashallah

 

[Re.TiReD]

Masha'Allah akhee

 

[BlissfullyJaded]

Niceness mashaAllah! :thumbs_up

 

[Cabdullahi]

thanks sisters, im gonna take a break for awhile and then back to the drawing board inshallah

 

[Na7lah]

ah u didn't hav to edit it
but i like it better now