Friendship

[Na7lah]

There are days when bubbling from us comes the innocent child within,
who giggles at the little things and wears a silly grin.

There are days when joy grabs a hold of you and me
wraps us up in all it's splendor,lifts us up and sets us free.

There are days when sorrow wraps us in its cloak of grief and fear,
'till our hearts ache to the breaking, 'till our eyes can't shed a tear.

There are days when love bestows us with its wonderment and light;
with its beauty and its mystery, its power and its might.

And there are days when life rewards us and seems to make amends
by granting us a marvelous gift, the precious gift of friends.

 

[chacha_jalebi]

wow nearly bought me a tear!

subhanallah, friends are so precious you know!!

wicked poem, sick & raaad

 

[Nájlá]

oh: sikk

 

[Güven]

sik and radddd poem !! oh:

 

[Na7lah]

Jazakallah khair

 

[Afifa]

aww such a nyc poem

 

[H@fiz Aziz]

very nicely written

 

[Na7lah]

bump

 

[Cabdullahi]

wow how come ive missed this particular poem???
mashallah uve used similar sounding words in each occuring line.....in the middle of the sentence and the ending word....sick technique

 

[Whatsthepoint]

Great poem! I love every single line of it!

I think you're up for the ultimate poet's challenge!

 

[alcurad]

breezy and calm, thanks for sharing

 

[Na7lah]

Great poem! I love every single line of it!

I think you're up for the ultimate poet's challenge!

ultimate poet's challenge? :?

 

[Whatsthepoint]

ultimate poet's challenge? :?

Let's start with the penultimate challenge.
Can you write a proper Italian sonnet
?

 

[Na7lah]

agh i hate wikipedia, so a sonnet thing is a poem with a-b-b-a, a-b-b-a, c-d-e-c-d-e :blind: lol

 

[Whatsthepoint]

agh i hate wikipedia, so a sonnet thing is a poem with a-b-b-a, a-b-b-a, c-d-e-c-d-e :blind: lol

No need for anger, my dear sister.
Are you up to it or not?

 

[Na7lah]

ok but is my interpretation of what a sonnet is right?

 

[Whatsthepoint]

ok but is my interpretation of what a sonnet is right? :-[

Ok.
It's quite simple. You don't have to consider all the aspect, just the form.
Anyone else can try it!

 

[Na7lah]

and how long do we have?

 

[Whatsthepoint]

and how long do we have?

Till the judgment day, this week would be great though.
Take your time.
If it's good, which I'm sure it will be, judging for the rest of your work, I will present you with the Ultimate Challenge.

 

[Na7lah]

ok i'll work on it inshallah...