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With Poem Number 5

I sit here, day by day,
pensive, my heart captured by dismay,
I watch the world pass me by,
the howling wind, the rain falling from the sky,
The people I see, the people I hear,
many distant, only a few near.

I think to myself, what if I don't survive?
Where's my dedication; what happened to my strive?
Was I not the one who aimed high; And,
the one who always took a stand?

Again I fear I'm too late,
lost my perception, I fall for the bait,
As a bird that once knew how to fly,
now with broken wings, can only desire for the sky.

Reminiscing now, I try not to grieve,
consoling myself, I strive to perceive,
where I went wrong, how did I behave,
what seems to be pushing me towards that empty grave?

Awaken, I must, before its too late,
patiently, my desires I must sedate,
In between two swings of the pendulum I stand,
the past and the future; how can you fail to understand?

Rectifying the former, the latter falls into place,
regret plus resolve saves even the most wretched from disgrace.
A common destination, followed by two more,
life followed by death, followed by life evermore.

Now I can clearly see, my sights no longer blinded,
I can wait no longer, about my Lord, I've been reminded.
I soon have a meeting, one that I cannot delay,
it's either peace after that, or an eternity of decay.
This much at least, I must remember everyday,
I hear it one more time,: "And who despairs of the mercy of his Lord, except for those astray?" {al-Hijr; 56}

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It was him? I never would've guessed - I voted for you! Mabrook. It was pretty hard to choose, though, as they were all really good.
 
JazakAllah khayr to all those who participated, I'll be making a seperate thread announcing all the participants and which poem belonged to whom. All poems were fab masha'Allah!
 
yayyyyyyy I voted for it too!

Mabrooks to bro Abu Sayyad. MashaAllah!
 
lol I would have never guessed, Mabrook Akhee , And I voted for you !! oh:
 
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lol winner buys icecream for everyone! Isn't tht right Joiie?

These are my favourite parts frm this poem

I think to myself, what if I don't survive?
Where's my dedication; what happened to my strive?
Was I not the one who aimed high; And,
the one who always took a stand?
Touched me deep. :'(


Rectifying the former, the latter falls into place,
regret plus resolve saves even the most wretched from disgrace.
A common destination, followed by two more,
life followed by death, followed by life evermore.
amazing insight here.

This much at least, I must remember everyday,
I hear it one more time,: "And who despairs of the mercy of his Lord, except for those astray?" {al-Hijr; 56}
Beautiful use of the Qur'anic ayaah, mashaAllaah.
 
ffended: i voted for poem 11,who is the author. i want to buy your poem

congrats akhee! you got your name in shiny red letters,well done u !
 
Sister jolie when is the next poetry contest!!!

and well done to bro abu sayyad
 
Mabrooook


it really was an amazing poem and i KNEW IT WAS ABU SAYYAD lol i cud tell the style
 
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:-[ Jazakallah Khayr everyone..I feel humbled as I really didn't expect to win. Thank you to everyone that voted It was fun writing the poem and I'm looking forward to the next contest!

Special Jazakillah Khayr to Sr. JolieFleur for taking the time and effort to organize it all. :thumbs_up
 
BarakAllah feekum!

I'm announcing the other names soon insha'Allah

The next contest is as soon as you'd like insha'Allah. Although some people wanted a short-story contest.

WassalamuAlaykum
 
Great I'll get my brain in gear and start thinking about how best to execute ze plan insha'Allah

But for now, lets get mabrook'ing the bro

Lol and btw I havnt announced the other names yet coz I'm waiting for sis Jawharah to do summin first :mmokay:
 
thing is, it has to be the "half a page" story contest


or we wont get many voters.

how many people willin to read loadsa short stories n then take time to vote?