Mazeds Story - The Beginning

ass salaamu alaykum,

stop hitting your head^^^ we don't want you to forget the rest y'know!!:p

hey mashaAllah part two's good/excellent/wonderful!!! :thumbs_up
..reminded me alot of a few ppl i know & one who became muslim like that!!.....it's in that ayat...when banii Aadam come across a museebah they turn to Allah...& and @ other times they don't believe in his existence....
i can't remember the ayah ....subhanAllah:heated:

anyways...post up the next part real QUICK!!! don't keep us in a long suspense!!:peace:
 
Umm_Shaheed said:
WoOoOoOoOwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!


This is getting really exciting! Shall I write a review???
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your feelin betta already??

Alhamdullilah!!
b reeeaaal hard in ur criticisms inshaAllah

im gnna make the ayyat stand out more inshaAllah :)
 
[PIE]Mazed has astounded us with this latest addition to his story. We are taken in by the descriptive writing style, and it is hard not to assume that Mazed is a pro.
But what is most compelling about this story is the way it depicts that every slave of Allah turns to Him when in need. Even those who claim to reject His very existence.
Although the high standard of life of the protagonist of the story seems a little bit unrealistic, the audience is satisfied with the intruiging story line.[/PIE]

That's all i've thought of so far.....
 
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ass salaamu alaykum,

hey there umm shaheed

..so your like the daily mirror/the times/ commenting on the book ey??

What you wrote was good mashaAllah,

But i do believe that the protagonist's high point of life is rather realistic!!...:)
 
Ass salaamu alaykum,

*Puts on a Posh tone*

A protagonist is: a chief/head/hero character in a drama!!..or a chief participant in an actual event...or a leader/advocate of a cause.... :D

protagonist?
lol sis, u shud write sum stuff, kno big words lol !!
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naaaaaah!!...english isn't my kinda thing..reminds me of the shakespeare and macbeth lessons...story writing..english grammer...english in general is soooo.......BORING!
i could do one in arabic alot better!! :thumbs_up
 
ass salaamu alaykum,

yeah....but i make it sound good :coolious:
 
ass salaamu alaykum

the nameless protagonist....:lol:

Oh yeah, the character does'nt have a name does he :?:?
 
Umm_Shaheed said:
Hey i said protagonist first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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lol i jus realised sry :X

umm_shaheed said:
Oh btw... it was supposed to be
It's hard not to assume that Mazed is a pro....
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Try harder ;D

Amirah_87 said:
yeah....but i make it sound good
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:haha:

Amirah_87 said:
Oh yeah, the character does'nt have a name does he
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Still thinking, i got a good idea of how to give him a name, next chapter he'll hav a name inshaAllah :)
 
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lol gud stuf masha'Allaah :) its jus a tip.. buh i think the description in depth should only be applied if its something important. if its something we gna move on from anyway (i.e. within the plot - something unecessary) - then the descriptions na proli needed.

Allaahu ta'aala a'lam.. jus ma view tho :) keep up the gud work insha'Allaah!



:wasalamex
 
its important bro trust me ;) lol, big part of the plot inshaAllah.


jazakAllah khair for comments :)


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