Mazeds Story - The Beginning

ASS SALAAMU ALAYKUM,

Still thinking, i got a good idea of how to give him a name, next chapter he'll hav a name inshaAllah
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Alhamdulillah :)

big part of the plot inshaAllah.
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:ooh: sounds interesting :thumbs_up

can i ask you something akhee....
are you writing the story up as you go along, or have you already written...and if so did you do the whole beginnining , middle and end thing ?

wassalaams :peace:
 
im writing it as i go along, basically i always learn about the akhirah/ghayb everyday, i think its probably The MOST Beneficial thing to learn about, the amount of fear and love it will put in u!!! subhanAllah, so my aim is to portray my image of the akhirah and ghayb with as much islamic proof as i can inshaAllah. im tryin to make it interesting so people can learn as they enjoy.. i kno my storyline isnt really that good :heated:
 
ass salaamu alaykum,

okay, MashaAllah akhee,

so my aim is to portray my image of the akhirah and ghayb with as much islamic proof as i can inshaAllah
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that's a very good idea y'know , TabarakAllah!! :happy:

i kno my storyline isnt really that good
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Akhee, it is!! :thumbs_up

* Your Best Seller!! :p* .....give it a title too inshaAllah!! :)
 
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lol sis the title is "The Beginning" :p !!!
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ass salaamu alaykum..

LOL!!...i thought you meant "The Beginning" as in the beginning of your story...:giggling: Allahu musta3aan...

okay then!! :statisfie
 
ass salaamu alaykum,

Allahu musta3aan, is a phrase which means " and from Allah help is sought" OR Allah is the helper...along those lines!!
it's something one of my teachers (hafidahallah) used to say to us alot if we'd get a question wrong :heated:.... you remember Maw!! :D
...and it's sorta stuck with me aswell :)

you get it :?
 
Ah!! remember Aisha bint ash-Sheikh, everytime after she finished telling us something :

Wallahul Musta'aan.......... ( Aishas voice ;D )

It stuck with me too!! :D

but I dont say it on forums I guess lol

I'ts lovely!! like making du'a all the time :wub:
 
ass salaamu alaykum,

yeah lol!!....Allaahul Musta3aaaaaaaaaan ..hehehee ;D

i miss her :( don't get me started on the whole dammaaj thing plzz ;D;D;D

it's better than say OH MY GOD ...OH GOD...things such as that!!....

she used to say......... *in her voice yeah* ajabtiiii wa asabtii wa barakaAllahu feekiii!! & hadhaakillah ...:wub:

she had some good akh-laaq tabrakAllah just like her dad rahimahullah!!:peace:

i've taken a few things like that from her walhamdulillah!! ;)
 
^ But boy oh boy.........she could be one tough heartless woman sometimes :rollseyes

Especially if you dont do your muraaja3ah

Then you'll wish the ground would swallow you up ;D ;D

But masha'allah got some good lessons from her too :happy:

So back to the topic! ;)
 
looks like im unable to post the next bit today, and i just checked out my work schedule and its alllll booked up tomorrow, gnna get a nice work out lol so next monday inshaAllah :)


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ass salaamu alaykum,

looks like im unable to post the next bit today
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we did'nt use up the space in your thread now did we :p

so next monday inshaAllah
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in four days time :ooh:

wassalaams

ps: make it worth the wait inshaAllah.......j/k :D
 
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lol sry i kinda left the last chapter i wrote unfinished :embarrass


ok man was reclinin in chair
mansion caught on fire
man caught
man admitted islam is truth before getting knocked out by fumes
while unconcious man see's vision
its of his cousin Abdul Karim
Abdul Karim "Appears to be a saint" to the eyes of everyone
but the way Abdul karims soul was taken out indicates otherwise


theres much more to the chapter "Fear" but i aint got time to do it right now...
 


The piercing shout echoed in The Mans ears, his heart felt like it had drowned as he watched the horrific figure approach the body of Abdul Karim. A dark disfigured face, wretched in all its filth approached. The figure stretched out its hands and before it even opened its mouth to speak Abdul Karims face twisted into the most strange and horrific expression a mind could comprehend, it was resisting, its every limb and expression spelt out "HELP ME", whilst the sheer horror was evident on the face of this wrongdoer, strangely enough however its eyes shed no tears.

'Deliver up your souls. This day you will be awarded a degrading punishment.' commanded the figure and all the futile resistance of Abdul Karim came to an end as The Man saw his soul grabbed and by sheer force pulled out causing his face to twist as though his body was created of cotton and was being made to be pushed through thousands of the sharpest needles, being skewered tearing at every artery and nerve!

The Man lost all faith, a man who spent his life teaching people the book of God and his message dies in such a manner. The man disbelieved completely in, what he presumed to be, this false religion. But throughout his years of disbelief he could not shake off this image, this moment he experienced with Abdul Karim, hundreds of psychologists he regularly visited attempted to drown him in the explenations of this world to get past this but no answer had he found. His perfect life of utter luxury, he felt, was ruined by this trauma due to this.

The Man finally woke up to the cinders and ashes of his mansion as it lay waste on the earth, he woke up the death of his family members, he woke up to the robbery of all his wordly pleasures, and... this fortunate man... he woke up to a strange contentment. As he lay there with his burned clothes and injured bones, he looked up at the stars and smiled...

And remember Abraham said: "My Lord, make this a City of Peace, and feed its people with fruits,-such of them as believe in Allah and the Last Day." He said: "(Yea), and such as reject Faith,-for a while will I grant them their pleasure, but will soon drive them to the torment of Fire,- an evil destination (indeed)!" ​


note: for those who dont understand, his smiling because he found islam and Allah.





i felt like i should at least finish the story, i could carry it on more but COMPETITION :D
 
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Short, sweet and to the point. MashaAllah, I like it. Though it was a bit graphic in places (Abdul Karims face twisted into the most strange and horrific expression a mind could comprehend).

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jazakAllahu khair sis that means a lot

you know a sheikh once said that the pious are all promised happy lives. but then when you look at the life of ibrahim Alaihissalaam and Yusuf Alaihissalaam especially ayyub alaihissalaam you find so much sorrow and suffering but you KNOW they were happy, they were content and pleased. this secret, people dont realise it.

i wish i could explain it better...
 

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