My Baby(a poem)

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When I see you,your tiny smile lurking beside your lips,how your eyes shine when you look at me,in that instant I know my world is complete holding you in my arms,my embrace is purely for you my angel,I watch you go to sleep my little angel,every molecule of my being adores you my little angel
When I hear you laugh,
When I feel your little finger clutching my hand,
When my eyes pour into your angelic face,
I know my world is complete,
When I watch you go to sleep at night,
I know my heart is at peace,
My little baby is sleeping and so my heart finds rest,
No joy is equalent to joy of you.
 
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farhan said:
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Cute and short first poem! :ma:.



My favourite line!

I think you should continue this poem, make it more in length. Keep it up :thumbs_up.
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Thankyou for appreciating farhaan and ummabed.Im glad that my imaginary poem is good read.will c if I can complete this one.
 
Ma'sha'Allah, that is so sweet, deffos continue to write poetry - one of the best ways of writing what's in your heart. :)
 
Arfa A Khan said:
When I see you,your tiny smile lurking beside your lips,how your eyes shine when you look at me,in that instant I know my world is complete holding you in my arms,my embrace is purely for you my angel,I watch you go to sleep my little angel,every molecule of my being adores you.(first attempt at poetry on Internet IB)
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....What sort of poetry is this?
 

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