*~My Poems Thread~*

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what a privelage that i can read your work fresh from the effort and strain in which you wrote it. magnificant work sister
 
veiwed your thread again, maash'Allah sister when do we get a new one to read:D
 
lol mashaAllah. JzkAllahu khayr bro

when do we get a new one to read
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I don't know bro. I feel bad posting my poems to be read when I don't make time to read everybody else's lol. There are so many great poets here mashaAllah. So, when I've given credit where it's due, I'll feel better about posting some more lol.
 
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lol mashaAllah. JzkAllahu khayr bro



I don't know bro. I feel bad posting my poems to be read when I don't make time to read everybody else's lol. There are so many great poets here mashaAllah. So, when I've given credit where it's due, I'll feel better about posting some more lol.
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Dont feel bad, the only guilt should be keeping your talent to yourself. Peace and respect sister
 
Look forward to veiwing the metamorphosis of ur inspiration during Ramadhan into something beautiful and written
 
Read the first two. they are beautiful. Masha-Allah you are talented!
 
^lol omG bro. Thank you :embarrass

May Allah make me a better muslimah too! Ameen
 
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Oh those rebellious tresses of hair like silk!
Clinging to feverish skin against their will
Ensnared by rivers of hot fiery tears
Sparkling on her lashes in starry spears


She wants to run, but her soul is restrained
Run across oceans and mountainous terrains
Past glowing horizons of sunrise and sundowns
Under shimmering skies and darkening clouds


Past sleepy valleys and bubbling brooks
Over ferns and heather and furrowed nooks
Through the atmosphere, in dream-like flight
Lucent shades of love, fill her soul tonite


Tonite her soul wants to fly with his
Past stars and planets in celestial bliss
Playing hide-n-seek amongst the stars
Oh, the innocent encounters of loving hearts!


Two souls, kissed by a burst of star dust
Pearlescent within the dark of the Universe
Curling and whirling, unfurling and twirling
Like dove-white feathers on breezes swirling


Of marriage they had long dreamed together
For lovers, the Prophet said,"There's nothing better.."
But time had divulged its secrets of late
That marriage was yet, not in their fate


Though love had given her the strength to endure
His absence at times, tortures her anew
She knows tears are best that are spent in duaa
In humility she stands in Tahajjud before Allah


And as the ache in her heart gently subsides
And on her breath, a prayer for him resides
She knows fanciful flights, love will oft seek
But it's in the rememberance of Allah that hearts find peace

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excellent work sister, really excellent I dont know what to say that could do justice to this poem. Outstanding, and you wont even let me rep u for it,lol:D
Again sister, awesome poem
 
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I keep forgetting about this forum. Thanks for liking it bro. :)

I thought no one liked it as no one commented lol :(


Can you recommend a poem by J.Clarke? I tried youtube and found a John Cooper Clarke singing about a toilet. I don't think he isn't the one lol.
 

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